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WHAT IF… Toxic Attraction Chapter 15 - Beginning Shower SceneThis is a simple what if scenario. Sometimes I like to think of how a scene or a situation might go differently. So this is me exploring it. A simple writing exercise. Not meant to replace Don Silver's original work or to make any sort of creative claim on his characters and world. All the rights belong to him and this is just for a fun little project to keep my skill and creativity sharp. Please go check out the original work and by Don Silver, give it some love.Before you dive in to this WHAT IF story. Please be advised. This is from Chapter 15, the very beginning of the chapter. So if you haven’t read to that point, be aware of possible spoilers. Also, I will not be doing any WHAT IF scenes for any chapters or parts that haven’t been publicly published to Literotica.Anything in bold is Don’s original words and work, what follows is my version of the scene. THIS IS NOT CANON TO DON’S STORY! IT IS NOT AFFILIATED WITH HIS STORY IN ANY WAY BEYOND WHAT IS IN BOLD.This is purely fun, nothing more.. Don’t dive any deeper than titillation and erotic enjoyment. Just enjoy.—-------------------------------------\\—-------------------------------------Dan sat in the chair in their bedroom, unable to move his body. His gaze was still transfixed on Sarah's soiled wedding dress on the floor. He had just watched Lester repeatedly power fuck his wife in front of him without a condom. Worse, Dan himself had wanted to see his vile roommate take his wife unprotected and finish inside of her. Even though the room was quiet, the shared screams of the two lovers still echoed in his head.Another soft moan seemed to ring out through the sounds of the shower punctuated by a splash of water. Dan shook his head, trying to regain his bearings. This hadn't been what he wanted. When he came back to Middleton, he hadn't planned for this. He needed to push through and try to regain his footing.Dan stood up and pulled on a pair of sweatpants. He strode warily across the bedroom, taking special care not to step on Sarah's discarded wedding dress. He reached the bathroom door and turned the knob. He exhaled, relieved it wasn't locked. Dan pushed open the door and stepped into the steamy fog of their master bathroom. His breath caught in his throat.Lester's ugly, squat body was sitting on the bench in the shower, his face buried in Sarah's ample chest. His tongue was lapping at her breasts as she stood before him, offering herself, her hands bracing herself against the wall as the hot water hit her back. Steam billowed out of the shower. Lester's rough hands were groping her ass and back as his mouth tasted her breasts."Uh," Another soft moan escaped Sarah's lips. Her eyes were closed. Neither of them had seen Dan enter yet. Sarah shifted and put her foot on the bench next to Lester, seeming to ready herself for him again. Dan tightened his fist, trying to hold back his depraved fantasy from overtaking his rational brain. His own dick swelled in his pants, and he willed it from getting any stiffer.Lester's hand found the back of Sarah's neck and pulled her face down towards his. Sarah's lips immediately opened and pressed against Lester's. The two shared a long passionate kiss before Sarah's hand ran down Lester's chest, past his flabby stomach until it reached his cock.Sarah gasped and started to stroke his cock, "I can't believe you are already hard again. Fuck.""How could I not be with you right here in front of me." Lester grunted as he started to kiss her neck. Sarah's body leaned forward and seemed to melt onto Lester, her hand never leaving his cock as she stroked it."Mhmmmm," Sarah moaned as she lowered her body onto Lester's thigh. He was arching his leg while she began to tease herself, grinding her sensitive pussy on it, "Uhhhhh."Sarah’s wet hand stroked up and down the full length of Lester’s hardening cock. Her hips moved, making her pussy trail along his hairy thick thigh, a soft little scraping sound almost invisible due to the splashing water of the shower. Her eyes closed again, arching her back and breasts out towards Lester, his tongue lewdly sliding along her neck, her collar and down the inner slopes to come back up and swirl around her hard nipple.Sarah was entranced, looking as if she were drugged and drunk on sex. Even as Dan’s own cock was hardening in his sweatpants, he was envious of the stamina Lester seemed to have. As if he had a bottomless well of arousal that could keep him hard forever. His wife pushed her chest against Lester’s mouth, his fat lips sucking at her like a toad, tongue long and lapping and circling her nipples one after the other. His grubby hands on her beautiful ass, water trailing down her back and down between her cheeks.Lester’s eyes fell on Dan, finally noticing him and giving him a shit eating wicked grin. He didn’t stop suckling the young mother’s breasts. Her hand didn’t stop going up the full length of Lester’s sizable cock now fully hard. She traced her palm around the head then circled her fingers around him and moved up and down.“So big.” She muttered softly. Her wet hair fell around her face and plastered itself along her neck and shoulders. “God how are you so fucking big. So hard.”“Do you like touching your Chicago Husband's cock better than your plain old Middleton Hubby’s little dick?” Lester kept his eyes on Dan, as if daring him to say something. To stop them.Dan wanted to move. But like before, watching them on the bed, he was frozen, watching his wife completely give herself to his roommate. A sickening feeling twisted his stomach. He didn’t want to believe it or think about it… but… the way Sarah was acting… it didn’t feel like a game anymore. She didn’t even know Dan was there. In fact she probably thought he wasn’t. Maybe she thought he was passed out in the chair, knocked out from cumming watching her get her brains fucked out.Fog filled the bathroom obscuring the mirror. It billowed in soft swirling clouds. Thankfully the shower glass was fog proof, or at least mostly so. Dan could see everything that was happening even as water and condensation dripped down the glass.Sarach continued rubbing her sensitive pussy along Lester’s hairy leg. “Yes…oh fuck your cock is so amazing Lester. I still can’t believe it. How big it is. How good it is. On someone like you… it’s a cruel twist of fate.” She was teasing him evilly and Lester glared, giving her ass a hard wet slap, making her take in a sharp breath.“I think it’s time for you to put your new husband's cock inside you.” Lester grinned, his lip rising in a bit of a sneer. HIs hands gripped Sarah’s ass harder and gave both cheeks hard spanks. “You need to show me how much you love me after all.”Bushing her wet hair away from her face, Sarah looked down at Lester, water streaming down her face and body. “Yeah? You want your new bride to show you how much she loves you?”Dan felt bile in his throat. Love? This dirty talk was going too far. He had to stop it… but… his erection was painful. It hurt to even flex his thighs at the thought of moving. Precum was sticking and staining the front of his sweatpants. He was rooted in place and didn’t know how to get himself to move.The look on Sarah’s face was pure lust and want. If this was still a game, playing, then Dan couldn’t tell. It felt real. It looked real. And since appearances were essentially nine-tenths of the law, that’s all that really mattered. It was real enough. And Dan’s heart…Sarah reached down, hand gliding along Lester’s length as she kept her eyes on his. “You wanna feel your cock slide into your beautiful bride?”His hairy knuckled hands gripped her ass tight, digging into her soft flesh. “You know you want it. Don’t deny it. This is the sort of cock you wanted on your first honeymoon. I’m just making up for that disappointment.”“What makes you think it was disappointing?” Sarah bit her lip, eyes sultry and playful.“How could it not have been? That little dick couldn’t have filled you up the way mine does. The way that pussy deserves.” He moved one of his hands from her ass to between her legs, fingers gliding over her lips and finding her depths, pressing a meaty digit inside her making Sarah shudder and gasp. “So fucking tight. Hard to believe you had two kids.” He chuckled. Removing his finger he brought his hand to Sarah’s chin, gripping it between his forefinger and thumb. “Put. It. In.” He punctuated each word. Not a request.Sarah was panting as if she were in heat. Hand on the root of his massive cock, she pointed it towards her pussy, her foot still up on the bench she angled herself down and Lester’s cock touched her lips, made them part. As they did, Sarah’s eyes widened slightly and her mouth opened, Lester immediately slipping his thumb in and pressing, making her suck.Both lips closed around thick members. Her mouth sucking his thumb while her pussy slowly took in his cock head and then began to slide down further and further. Her moan echoed in the bathroom, loud and sharp.“That’s it. That’s right. All the way down.” Lester’s grin was disgusting and he shifted his eyes to Dan for a moment, triumphant and arrogant.When his eyes went to Dan, Sarah’s couldn’t help but look over too. Her body stiffened for a moment in surprise, eyes widening in shock and lips sucking tightly against Lester’s thumb. She paused her descent on his dick.Lester didn’t let her stay still for long. His other hand still firmly on her ass, he pushed Sarah down the rest of the way onto his member and Sarah’s eyes rolled back and she gasped, his thumb slipping from her lips. “Oh fuck!”The froggy man groaned, feeling the young mother’s pussy grip his cock so amazingly tight. He never wanted to give this up. Never. In fact. He wasn’t going to. Sarah was his and he was going to keep her. Oh Dan may hover around and so would the little rugrats, but he could keep them as a tangential annoyance. Sarah was going to be his completely and this was a moment he could make a leap, rather than the small steps he’d been taking.Grabbing Sarah’s hips, Lester started moving her, his cock sliding in and out making her lips grip and drag along his length slowly before slamming her back down all the way to his hairy balls. The water from the shower splashing wildly. “Oh fuck that’s it. So tight. So warm.”“Sarah…” Dan croaked, not sure what he was going to say or what he could do to stop this.“D…Dan…” Sarah gasped between deep thrusts, making her breasts bounce and rub against Lester’s naked flabby chest. “I…I’m s…sor…”Lester spanked her ass hard and harsh and slammed his cock deep. “Don’t apologize. You’re fucking your Chicago Husband. You have every right.” Lester looked up at Sarah harshly. “Tell him that. Fucking tell him that you are fucking your new husband, showing how much you love him. Love his cock. Love MY cock.”Sarah groaned, head falling back, unable to make her gaze focus on Dan for a moment. When the tremor passed, she looked back at her husband. “Dan… I’m happy I’m fucking my new husband’s big cock. This honeymoon is so much better than the one we had.” More precum leaked from Dan and stained his sweatpants even as his stomach filled with acid and his teeth ground together. His wife’s eyes were on him and they were filled with this otherworldly lust that he’d never seen before. Never with him anyway.The sounds of splashing and splattering water filled the quiet as it stretched between the three.Lester suddenly grabbed Sarah's hands and moved them to grip the towel rod that was on the wall above his head. Sarah looked down surprised and confused and then quickly realized what he wanted. Her cheeks flushed, sarah ignored Dan again and gripping the rod, lifted her other foot and placed it on the other side of Lester’s wide fat hips. Now she was squatting on his cock, leaning back in the air and supporting herself by holding the towel rod.The grin Lester had was a mixture of impressed, pleased, and perverted. “Ride my Sarah. Ride your new husband’s cock!”Sarah obeyed. She started flexing her toned legs and raised herself up like she was a gymnast holding a bar and getting ready to swing forward. Then she slammed down impaling herself. Her taut stomach slapping against Lester’s hairy flab, her pussy swallowing every inch of his cock, balls flapping up and slapping her ass.“Oh holy fuck!” Sarah screamed. The position was new and intense and unique, a way to get deep.Lester groaned with her. Head falling back against the wet tile. Dan could just barely see between Lester’s fat stomach and his wife's thighs, her smooth pussy stretching all around his roommate's cock. Over and over thrusting down, impaling herself like a madwoman.“Oh god! Oh God!” Sarah was groaning.“Sarah…” Dan croaked again and finally was able to take a step forward.Panting and continuing swinging up and down on Lester’s dick, Sarah looked to Dan with hard and lustful eyes. “Dan…please… my new…husband and…I need som…some privacy… its…our honeymoon after all.” She spoke through pants and groaned and whimpered as Lester’s cock reached places and stretched her in ways she’d never experienced.Dan’s heart sank. It broke. But… at the same time… it wasn’t unexpected. He’d seen this coming, if he was honest with himself. But he’d been denying it and overlooking it all. Sarah had slipped away from him. Somehow this whole fantasy had become a monster, a beast that was no longer in their control. Sarah threw her head back, hands and arms tight and straining as she rode Lester.“Fuck yes so big so thick so deep!”“That’s it. Take it all Sarah. That’s right pretty bride, devour my fucking cock!” He slapped her ass over and over making it turn red. Then he looked over at Dan. “You heard the lady… give us some privacy.” Lester's grin was wide and cruel.Sarah was gasping for breath now. Shaking each time she rammed herself down, clearly approaching orgasm.Dan took a step back. Feeling defeated. He watched his wife ride his roommate with lust and abandon. He opened the door and started to step out.“Arghhh yes fuck i’m about to cum…do you want it Sarah? Hm? Do you want your new husband’s cum inside you?”“Yes! Oh fuck yes please Lester! I have to feel it. It feels so good when you cum inside. So fucking good.”“No more condoms for us right? Why bother when you’re my bride.” He laughed and grabbed her wet hair, pulling her into a deep hard passionate kiss as she continued thrusting down on him faster and faster. They moaned, tongues twisting and licking and lips pressed against each other hard. Dan was slipping out, knowing that he had to go… and not just from the bathroom…he and the kids had to go. Maybe things were dire, maybe not completely lost… but…how things were now, how Dan had made them and let them become, he couldn’t stay. And it was clear Sarah didn’t want him. Didn’t want him here. And he wasn’t going to leave the girls with her when she was addicted to Lester. That wouldn’t be safe. So… Dan steeled himself to go, trying hard to convince himself it was the right thing to do…What happened next solidified his resolve.The two were grinding, kissing, moaning with each other loud. The sounds echoing around the tile and over the loud splashes of the shower. Then the lips parted sloppily. “I love you.” The words hid Dan straight in the gut and the heart and made his grip on the bathroom door knob tighten. It was Sarah’s word.Lester groaned, hands on her ass helping her thrust down over and over with loud wet slaps. “That’s right baby, that’s right. You’re such a good wife. Fucking take my cum. Beg for your new husbands cum.”“Yes…yes… i fucking want it. Cum in me baby. Cum inside me Lester. In my married pussy. Inside your bride. Cum in me! I fucking love you cum inside me!” She was wildly screaming and crying out as her own orgasm washed over her like a dam breaking.Dan’s roommate began to grunt and huff. His flabby hips coming up to meet Sarah’s downward thrusts. His fat ass slapping the shower bench. “Fuck! Take it all you fucking slut. Take it! I’m fucking cumming!”Sarah cried out with her orgasm and the sudden onslaught of shooting cum inside her from Lester’s cock, his balls pulsing and squeezing and unloading inside the young mother.Dan kept his eyes on them for a moment longer before closing the door and blocking out the sounds. He wasn’t sure if they were done or not. There were still moans and pants. But he ignored them. Dan quickly packed a bag. Went to the girl’s room and packed a bag for each of them and took them down to the car. He wasn’t sure how he was going to do this. All the financial issues notwithstanding. But… maybe Sarah’s parents would be willing to help, or… well he could call his parents.He’d figure it out. But he knew he just couldn’t stay here and neither could the girls. So he packed everything up and drove away.Sarah and Lester remained in the shower for another half hour before she finally came out, wrapped in a towel and noticed that Dan was gone. For a moment she thought that he’d just gone downstairs. She had asked for privacy after all. But then… then she saw the wedding ring on the nightstand.She’d forgotten her rings before when she was with Lester. But Dan never took his off. It sat on his nightstand next to a picture of her and Dan on their wedding day, smiling and happy. But that wasn’t them anymore. Sarah sat on the bed and stared at the ring even as she felt Lester’s cum seeping out from inside her onto the towel.It seemed things had just gotten far more complicated than either of them ever thought possible.Sarah started to cry.

Comments

sercurious

Great scene and a hot take in another direction from a great storyline and author. Well done! :0)

Sigma

I absolutely love this. Excellent! Dan finally did it. This is what some of us have been waiting for. Great writing.

My Love Is Your Love

This is great. Can't wait for your take on Neighbors Chronicles.

Big Ace

Incredible. You need to do more of these.

Hadonosenju

Yes that's what a real character do, not the wimp dumb Dan writed by Don silver

None

Wow are you kidding me? 10 plus… is so erotic how she just cant resist what her body craves and nothing else matters… incredibly well done and with this i joined your site… you are talented

Sigma

While this is just a very short vignette to TA 15, I feel it really fills a need that has been lacking from TA for a long time: Dan not getting any wins. The sex scenes VW writes are as incredible as DS. But contrary to what others have written in the comments, I love the way Dan basically leaves. I think one commenter called this "peace out." Why shouldn't he? They'd already set boundaries by TA 15 and she'd blown right through them. There've been plenty of over-the-top moments, one of them being this "wedding night" scene that they somehow agreed to as if they truly owed it to Lester. Yet in VW's Fan version, Sarah went way over the top with her language. Someone commented that Sarah's broken every rule, and doesn't change her behavior or back off even after she and Dan have discussed the boundary, or adjusted it, or reaffirmed it. So if you have an unwilling or uncontrollable spouse, what else is there to do? Get mad and rage at it? No rage needed. At some point in a marital argument you know its over and its no use fighting anymore. Any of having heard "I want a divorce" for the 20th time know when its the last time you'll hear it and don't need to argue any more. Peace out. "I'll figure it out myself. After all, I really don't have a partner in this anymore."

Dean

That's how the series should've ended. At chapter 15, now we're all the way at 30, with every chapter just a rinse wash repeat.

Vivian White Writes Erotica

Not my story so I can't say one way or another ultimately, but I would like to see more action from Dan for sure in the OG story.

Crowny Succubus

Yeah, I called it "peacing out" because, just as you said, Dan in TA never "got any wins" and he never had a serious "We need to have an ultimatum" moment with Sarah, either. As I said to Vivian in my previous comment thread, what makes stories like this compelling are those conversations. When there's actions and reactions to what happens in the story. The problem is, most writers only have two speeds "keep ignoring everything so the wife and bull take over the story and the husband is a footnote" (DS's way of writing TA) or jump instantly to ending the story and/or bitches being burnt. Either one of those two things makes the story basically like every other cuck story out there with very little new to say. You can run a search on Literotica right now and find HUNDREDS of stories that follow one of those two formulas. I respect Vivian's writing more than that. Like I said, the real story in tales like these are the conversations or confrontations. The problem with TA is that Dan NEVER got to that point; even when he briefly tells Sarah he wants to stop in a future chapter (I don't recall which one it was -- maybe Ch 27?), it's so weak-knee'd and half-hearted that the conversation ends with more "we'll talk later and figure this out together" bullshit. No hard confrontation. No actual depth. I think people are praising Dan's actions in this Fanfic simply because it didn't happen in DS's version, but I think if this were any other story, people would end the story, drop a rating and then forget it ever existed because it was the same as the other 10 cuck stories they read that week.

Vivian White Writes Erotica

Got a point. Were this something I was going to continue and expand on into my own Alternate Universe I'd have ended this portion differently, with more of a confrontation.

FU

Loving this version of TA 15, about time, Dan reached down and found his balls for something more than just whacking off. I wish Dan had started then finding his spine by chapter 15 in DS’s version, after all she has blown through everything any ground rules they had set. Like your story with the wife that talks her husband into letting her have a threesome with the preacher and his wife no less. I am waiting for chapter 3 in that to see if you give Collin a spine!

Vicki Smith

I have to say this is a well-reasoned opinion. Everyone's thoughts on erotica are fluid. I'm more welcoming to a cuckold form of story as long as there are consequences(whatever they may be good or bad) . Statements like Don's and this (“Dan…please… my new…husband and…I need som…some privacy… its…our honeymoon after all.” ) in the heat of the moment are very erotic but its when one of the people involved-usually the wife, goes rogue. That marital vow has been broken. I feel there has to be consequences a cause and effect. Not nuclear meltdown but something that is appropriate. I disagree in this story that Dan wanted to see unprotected sex. I feel that is Sarah's kink along with the image of her getting pregnant in her fantasy. This story gives some closure that will be needed in whatever version is read. I appreciated that Sarah finally woke up at the end and felt the weight of her choices. is that a btb ending? I don't know anymore, but it felt right for this version.

Vicki Smith

Sigma, we are emotional at times. At what level of betrayal does anger rage? This version seems that Dan is past that to indifference. When people talk about their hearts being ripped out, there is a deep personal pain. People can be angry-even rage without doing something that will put them in jail. People can be petty, vindictive too. It's why in so many stories where the wife gets so angry at the husband because she thinks he cheated yet hypocritically dismisses her own actions ( I'm looking at you Cassidy in Trinity. lol)

MikeM

I like the conflict this brings to the story. I re-read the original and while Dan kicks Lester out of the house, things don't change. TA drags on repeating the same interactions while destroying Sarah. Your take here brings things to a head and creates the opportunity for resolution.

Wheato

It’s refreshing to see Dan in this light, head strong, taking the girls from this toxic environment.

GeoKid71

OK I am putting this here, cause maybe no one will see this. I just read ch 22 /23 where Sarah professes her Love for Lester. Now granted Lester asked her to say it, and we know she can't say no to the man to save her life. But she did it without hesitation and I dare say actual enthusiasm. Now I am not sure I have read in any Cuck story where that boundary is so obliterated as here. How is Dan there for even a minute longer. Even if he used the safe word the game is over clown.