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Hello Dear Readers!

Some of you may or may not know that Literotica often holds writing contests for various topics and holidays. This year I decided to enter the Halloween Contest in an effort to write something a little different and pull myself out of the burnout/slump I'm in.

Since it's a contest, that means there's a possibility for a prize (YAY!). So I would humbly ask that you go to Literotica using the link below, read my story, and if you enjoy it please vote for it/give it a rating. Votes are how the story gets recognized and entered to win.

This is an erotic horror story, so there's scary imagery and blood. Just a little warning for those out there that might not like those things.

I hope you enjoy!

Ember Eyes. Frigid Flame.

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Adam Sephenson

I read this earlier on when the Lit notifications aren't messing up. It's something different compared to what you usually write. But saying that, it was something new for sure! the revelation that led to that massive, heartbreaking moment, I could actually feel that! the resulting actions and events after that were both sad yet justified at the same time. plus that ending, without spoiling much, that aura from the male MC must have left something powerful if the person who walked by had that feeling to ring up their loved one. really great story Vivian =) hope you win one of the prizes! =D

Hannah Baird

*Swoons* Now this, this is my kind of story! Beautiful expository prose, wonderful narrative, and two characters who actually made my blood boil. MINE! Out of all people! The ending however, is what will stay with me, it's oddly sweet, but still haunting.

NightSoulvane

Absolutely loved it. Much like Hannah I think, I couldn't feel sorry in any way for Riley and Josh. I also loved the Old School reference..but Conner is always going to be Luke Wilson in my mind..

Crowny Succubus

i feel sorry for every character involved. Even Riley. Suffering for eternity is not something I wish on anyone.

MikeM

I really enjoyed this story. So dark! I assumed Riley's demise was a dream until the ending.

Adam Sephenson

same, I presumed that she died in her sleep, but when they mentioned the kitchen, I realised what the "fall with me" moment was. in a ironic twist of fate, she did choose him in the end.

Mike White

Great story. Hit a little close to home

Mr Monopoly

Vivian is a mean 🤧 and really knows how to hurt. Don't dm her. Don't dm any smut peddling author. They don't care about you in the slightest.

NightSoulvane

There usually is, but whatever it is really isn't our business..

NightSoulvane

Sorry my sarcasm detector is broken 🙂

Hadonosenju

Wonderful dark story, the beginning remind me of a classic Matt Moreau story but the ending was perfect dark halloween style.