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Seduction of a Conservative Wife REDUX (Patreon)

Published:
2026-05-22 16:24:49
Edited:
2026-05-26 23:08:42
Imported:
2026-09

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This story does not originally belong to me. It was written by a user named altaff143, and the only version I can find (because it’s no longer on Literotica) is here: https://erotom.com/post_53157. It has been one of my favorites for a very long time, and was sadly disappointed when I saw it vanish and almost lost it forever. I’ve made every effort to try to find the original author and reach out, but have come up empty. 

As much as I love this story overall. After about the halfway point, it took a very strange turn that I didn’t like. I’m sure we’ve all had stories like that (I definitely know people feel that way about some stories I’ve written. And I’ve done my share of ‘what if’ alternate endings for stories I’ve enjoyed but wanted to see take a different route).

So, this is my attempt to go back through this story and make my own version. I take no credit for the original story and highly encourage everyone to go and read it. If you can find the original author, let me know. I’d love to contact them.

This version isn’t an attempt to replace. Think of it as fanfiction. And also, just fun. I enjoy stories and writing, and often a great practice for aspiring authors is to take other’s works and explore it in your own writing.

Because this isn’t my story and I haven’t gotten permission to do this, I will be offering it for free on my website and my Discord. Patreon won’t allow explicit content to be offered for free, so that is why you won’t see it on my page.

So buckle up, and I hope you enjoy this.

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Crowny Succubus

Geez, reading the original story is a really, REALLY rough read. I think the original creator doesn't speak English natively, because the character dialogue is overly stiff and the grammar and writing goes from passable to very bad. Another thing that kind of throws me off is the casual misogyny that the narrator (the husband) constantly throws out, often in situations that makes no sense. Like, after his wife (SPOILER ALERT) first has sex with Rob, Rob claims that she's now addicted to his cock and he'll have her whenever he wants her....only for Liz to later refuse to let him come over and fuck her without her husband present. When Alec asks her why she refuses, she explains the difference between fucking a man with her husband present and consenting, and doing it behind his back. Alec calls this "woman's logic".

Vivian White Writes Erotica

I agree that I don't think the original authors native language was English and the dialogue doesn't flow well. There's lots of problems with it for sure. But I was drawn to the premiss and the two/three big sex scenes really hit me where it felt good haha. But you're not wrong. That's some of the reasons I wanted to write my own version. This story had a lot of potential that didn't get used.

Crowny Succubus

Yeah, I would really like to see your take on them because while the sex scenes were hot in premise, it had the problem of "over-narrating" them. I got the feeling that the writer wanted us to see the scenes EXACTLY the way they appeared in their head, and thus tried way too hard to "tour guide" the reader through it (such as listening to the husband telling us what emotions his wife is feeling while she's being fucked rather than what emotions he imagines she's feeling). This issue is compounded by the aforementioned struggling with English. Also, the characters seem oddly self-aware. Like, they know Rob is a "sexual predator" and he flat out told Alec his intention to make his wife his personal sex slave. They then bounce back and forth from (rightfully) calling Alec untrustworthy and questioning what he's scheming while at the same time assuming that his actions might be harmless. There's no "fog of arousal" where good characters are manipulated by a sex pest; they're just cooperating for no reason.

GeoKid71

Hi Vivian, just read the original and it definitely feels dated with the camcorder and the crappy!!! VHS porn tapes.I know this because I tried the SAME exact thing with first wife many,many years ago! You're right the sex scenes,if given the attention they deserve will be hot! The bondage aspect allowing the wife to REALLY let loose on Rob.She almost edged him to death! I did enjoy the comments about not understanding wives, you can be puzzling to say the least!! Final note on the neighbor he says he doesn't want ro take the wife away, but he really is trying hard to separate the husband and wife whenever he can.That also maybe the writer's inclination to be denied in a way, not sure.

Vivian White Writes Erotica

If anything, I'd say it feels most like a first draft / idea dump onto the page. They wrote it, but didn't do much more than spell check for editing. So yeah motivations and characteristics bounce all over and it's definitely older, and not America because I've never heard of gas stations renting/selling porn before. (Correct me if I'm wrong though haha)

Vivian White Writes Erotica

There is definitely some over descriptive portions and some where there's very little. They loved writing those sex scenes for sure and maybe that's what they started with and then built the "story" around it. The first chapter is on my discord and website so, feel free to let me know what you think about my take on it.

Crowny Succubus

Actually, since the porn is described as "softcore", yeah -- gas stations have definitely sold that stuff in the past. Especially magazines like Playboy and Penthouse. I just googled it, and it seems that this was more common in independently-owned stations and not franchises for obvious reasons (bad press if your employee doesn't card properly and sells porn to a minor). But these days, independently-owned stations are virtually unheard of, and so good luck finding a station that sells that stuff now.

Vivian White Writes Erotica

I do recall the dirty magazines on the racks and whatnot but never movies. Though I didn't do a ton of traveling and obviously when I did my parents probably didn't want me to see them haha

Crowny Succubus

Yeah, "softcore" porn videos weren't exactly hidden back in those days (I'm talking the 20th century). I was a "Skinemax" kid growing up, if you know what I mean. It wasn't hard to find things your parents wouldn't allow lol.

GeoKid71

You and me both, but in the end my curiosity was too much! 😆

Robert

It wasn't polished, but was definitely hot and full of promise!

Hadonosenju

here are good and bad things in the original version. SPOILER ALERT Good: - The wife always remains faithful to her husband and doesn’t become submissive to Rob like in all the usual clichés — she genuinely feels like a loving wife. - The lover’s penis isn’t twice as big or longer, just slightly thicker. - The wife makes a distinction between having sex with Rob and making love to her husband. I especially liked the moment when she says she can’t wait to try the new things with her husband because it will be even better with him. - The wife doesn’t forget her husband’s original fantasy, which was a threesome with another woman, as a way to thank him for letting her experience this adventure. - The sex scenes are genuinely good, and the husband is fully included every time. Bad: - The plot is ridiculous, especially when Rob tells the husband he’s going to turn him into a cuckold and that he won’t be able to stop it, yet still asks for his help, and the husband just says “ok” despite all his doubts and the fantasy only appearing two minutes earlier. - Both of them say it will be difficult to convince the wife, but they succeed in 30 seconds just by letting the lover be dominated by the wife — it was actually pretty funny. - When Rob tries to pressure the wife into sleeping with him while she’s alone and yells at her, the husband says nothing and is still okay with continuing afterward. - The worst part: the husband cheating with the babysitter. It makes no sense, there’s no remorse at all, and on top of that his wife brings home a friend for a threesome just a few hours later, which proves he didn’t need to cheat in the first place. - And the ending: the author clearly wanted to stop writing. Rob kept promising some incredible final session for the couple, but the story ends before we ever get to see it. Yeah, there’s definitely potential, especially in the couple’s relationship with all the love and respect between them — a wife who doesn’t go crazy and who loves her husband and their marriage above all else.

Vivian White Writes Erotica

You pretty much hit all the same points I liked and was also annoyed with. So much great potential, but it felt a bit like an outline with some detailed scenes rather than a truly fleshed out plot. I've been wanting to do my own version where I iron out those flaws and issues (Like the point where the husband just tells Rob, cool let me help you cuck me. I liked that Rob declared his intentions but the immediate acceptance from the husband was ridiculous). So hopefully my version will be enjoyable and won't have the same flaws. :)

MikeM

I'm curious to see where you take this Vivian. I agree with Hado's points. In the final scene Rob should be wearing a glass of wine if not a slap.

fanfoot

Just FYI Vivian, at least in Firefox and Chrome the story doesn't quite render properly. The actual ending can't be scrolled to--meaning the last visible paragraph is: "“You’re a very nice guy. I have a way of reading people, and I can tell you’re an honest, hardworking man. Good husband. Good father. Good employee. It’s admirable, and I’d count myself lucky to be called a friend.” He clasped his hands, leaning his elbows on the table and looked me square in the eye. " After that you can see the tops of the letters for the following line. The actual text is covered up by the copyright banner at the bottom of the page (non-scrolling). Presumably fixable by putting some blank lines at the end or a real fix I can't comment on.

Jay Muney

When will more chapters be released?

GeoKid71

Just read your updated version Vivian.Amazing as always. Just one sentence among many. "She was at his mercy, and he had none" The bondage scene between husband and wife.I just want to note the husband was NOT a beta boy he held her down firmly.A hand tight round her neck. He might have more to him than we think.

Vivian White Writes Erotica

I don't have a solid release schedule. But I'm working on Chapter 2 right now and it needs more work than the first because the original story hurried through and glossed over parts that really need more detail.

chris hackett

Full of promise but had the ending of GoT. Looking forward to Vivian’s remake

FU

I read the first chapter as you have written it, I think I read about 3 chapters of this story on Lit, but then lost it somehow, but I lost some interest in it as the husband just let shit happy. Thanks for picking it up your writing is always spectacular and I’m looking forward to your take on this story.