Galknights WIP: Remaking Chapter 1 (Patreon)

Heres some work for something I'm trying to get done by November 1st. I'm fixing up chapter 1 of Galknights to bring it more in line with the rest of the manga. I didn't want to redraw it all, so I'm limiting my scope to:

Face and hair redraws of Liz to be a little more detailed

Fixing writing issues and mistakes

Adding one new page just to flesh out the chapter a bit more

Minimal panel redraws like Page 1 and other important pages

Removing experimental screentones to make it consistent with future chapters

These two pages have been the biggest changes so far, and I still have some work to do like the bench on the second page. After this its all just improving Liz's eyes and the text everywhere to be a tighter chapter.

I'm also trying to add chapter 2 and 3 together with chapter 1 to make a ~60 page story that I can post on its own, so if I can make changes to those chapters too in the next few days then I'll post the Galknights "one-shot" as well. I want to put that 60 page arc on Mangaplus Creators to see how it could do in the monthly contest (Novemver), just for fun.