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Edit - Doh. This is actually chapter 5. Corrections have been made -_-. 

Mwhahahaha, my evil surprise to provide you with more 2B!

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What do you mean providing surprises aren't always evil? Why was I not informed of this! Er...

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This is my pleasant surprise to provide more stuff?

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cough

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Anyway! I had a little more time free in the hotel over my recent short vacation than expected and managed to produce a small update for A Very Confused Pokémon Adventure. It's a little under 3,000 words, just a single chapter, so emphasis on 'small.' Given its size, I'm not going to count it against the 'last time updated' for polling, by the by.

Also, despite its size...there is still a bit of a reason to be excited about it! The chapter covers the remainder of 2B's time up until she starts her Journey in a series of quick snippets. It leaves off with a chance for 2B to pick a starter in addition to her Jigglypuff. I could have written more, but I actually wanted to leave off at that point, as I'm going to run a poll regarding what Pokémon people want to see as 2B's 'official' starter. While she will have access to the Kanto Trio of starters, her work at the Ranch for Professor Oak means she'll also have the option of gaining access to a handful of other Kanto Pokémon (and possibly their variants) I think could fit well with her. I'm going to restrict it to just the Kanto Pokedex and variants of Kanto Pokémon since this is her 'official' starter.

It will be a shortlist, obviously, I don't even know if Patreon could handle a 151-choice poll! The poll will be open to all Patrons, and NOT a weighted poll like the monthly polls. A single vote for all. I'll put it up shortly after this post, so keep an eye out for it ;-). For now, as always, the new content is attached here in various file types. I will also update the Pinned Post with a Masterfile for the story. Note that a small change has been made to the Masterfile. Christian E. Y. reminded me about 2B's visor, and I actually did want her to have it. So there's been a small alteration to Chapter 1 where she notes it not responding to her. It's functional, but she can't link with it when she first arrives as she's no longer an android...

Comments

Matthew Robar

I’m somewhat confused… the last update you did was chapter 1.5

Orchamus

I was confused at first too, but remember 1.5 had line breaks with numbers for other chapters in it so it was basically one through four As for this chapter, I found 2B giving a Gyarados a spanking hilariously amusing, and am very eager to see which other Pokemon she gets to start her journey with.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

That wasn't 'chapter' 1.5. It was release 1.5. I'd released only a teaser (the .5) prior to release 1.5. The 1.5 was a reference to the fact it was the teaser + a more solid chunk of content. Though I can see how it would now be confusing, at the time it mostly made sense. I think. Regardless, there were actually 4 chapters contained in the 1.5 release. So this one adds Chapter 5.

WhatAFungi

Great mini chapter! I have zero complaints. I can’t wait to see other people’s reactions to 2B’s “common” sense. Also, speaking of jigglypuff. I just finished pokemon Scarlet for the first time. I just wanna say. “Screentail” is the dumbest/laziest name ever. I lot of the paradox Pokémon’s names physically hurt with their stupidness. Who let their kid come into work that day to name them all?

The Foreign Traveler

At last! Number 6! A Very Confused Pokemon Adventure Chapter 5 Page 3 ...for 2B to build the tools, "to build the tools, to build the tools" to modify her YoRHa tactical visor... Correction: ...for 2B to build the tools to modify her YoRHa tactical visor... Wow, shortest one yet! You are on "fire" Novus! I was laughing at 2B's interactions with our good Professor and his granddaughter. I do genuinely hope that she'll be able to fully become human. I've played the game starring her and 9S and I really hope that one day she'll be able to understand and experience what it's like to be loved and be able to love in return. Not just that but also experience joy, triumph and so much more. Keep up your damn good work Novus. I'll keep reading and editing it all in the meantime. Night!

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Hmm, no corrections then :-p. The repetition is intentional. She had to build the tools, in order to build better tools, in order to build the tools she actually needed. The way I wrote it is a fairly common way of expressing that conundrum, when referring to uplift or time travel situations. Someone needs to 'build the tools, to build the tools that are needed.'

The Foreign Traveler

…Ah. “Knew” I should have left the (?) in my comment last night…thanks for telling me.