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First, don't forget that there are still two polls ongoing! One is the June Story Poll, the other the final Relationship Poll for Displaced Hero.

Second, Happy Mother's Day to any of you out there who are mothers!

Now, with those out of the was...salutations, everyone! I did say I was going to try and sneak in an a small extra update for Halfway Broken this month, to reduce the odds I'd be lynched ;-). Obviously, I managed it! It's not too massive, just a single chapter, but it is a fairly hefty chapter at 4,400+ words.

The chapter deals with the main conflict of Asuka Island. Don't think that such means they are done there, though. I always intended the actual conflict on the island to be relatively short, followed by them getting some training time in a place that will help several of them. Along with giving a bit of breathing room for Nami and Luffy to start their 'seduce Robin' plan before the events of Marineford kick off.

Anyway, have your extra chapter ;-).

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WhatAFungi

Thanks you for the treat! A few comments: Now I could be wrong, but I’m 75% sure Hina never went to Alabama. (Just a small typo I think you made ;P) I could be an idiot, but what meme were you referring to in the chapter? I don’t think I know it. Finally, I’m all caught up with “The Force Wills”. What a banger story, I want some Aegis Armor so bad, shit would so cool. Thank you one last time for the recommendation!

WhatAFungi

I found where I thought there was an issue. I’m so fucking baffled. I could have sworn it said Alabama! I feel so stupid now. Forget I said anything🤦‍♂️

Novus's Fanfiction Works

I believed you cause I could see it happening as autocorrect. But couldn't find it in the master copy, so was very confuse :-p.

Camille

Thanks for the chapter! Just two typos I noticed in the last part of the chapter: ‘The clearing had long sense become more like a devastated plain.’: ‘sense’ -> ‘since’, and ‘plain’ -> ‘plane’.

fozzer

hi bud love the story just a quick question for you I've tried to get a good answer but haven't been able to find a solid one but would you say the the seven star sword is one of the 12 supreme grade swords?

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Well...50/50 :-p. Sense->Since was wrong and I fixed it in the master file. But Plain was already correct. Plain, as in 'flat area of land.' If I changed it to 'plane' it would be more a dimension of existence, which isn't what I was going for.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

There's a good reason why you can't find an answer for that :-p. The Seven Star Sword is non-canon, from one of the movies. As such, it can't be considered one of the 12 normal supreme grade swords. That said, I've made it a blade of equivalent quality, as that fits with the lore around it.

The Foreign Traveler

Glad for even a small slice of HB! Edit 1: The fact that they’d done it all mostly because of “was” the right thing… The fact that they’d done it all mostly because “it was the right thing to do”… Edit 2: Which didn’t mean the idea “didn’t” secretly amuse him. Which didn’t mean the idea “hadn’t” secretly “amused” him. Edit 3: He’d noted quietly “had” ale and liquor… He’d noted quietly “how” ale and liquor… Edit 4: Zoro was put on the back foot, but only for a moment, as he grinned fiercely and launched into the fight with “a will” Zoro was put on the back foot, but only for a moment, as he grinned fiercely and launched into the fight with “an indomitable will”… Edit 5: He’d lived, loved, brought new “like” into the world… He’d lived, loved, brought new “life” into the world… Edit 6: The clearing had long “sense”… The clearing had long “since”… One more...