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Whew! Finally got this done! Sorry again about it being later than usual, folks. I needed to do some brain storming as I'd expected them to spend longer in Viridian and my outline for Pewter was basically just 'Train for the Gym.' Which would have been totally okay, if it was only 5,000 words or so. But when it turned out that the Pewter section was more like 10,000 words, I needed to break up the training with something else so that it didn't become a slog. I'm happy with what I came up with, but I did need a brief pause to come up with it in the first place ;-).

Anyway, the final result this time is right around 14,500 words, so pretty typical length wise. Enjoy the new addition to A Very Confuse Pokémon Adventure! As always, the new bits of story are attached here in various formats, and I'll be updating the Master Files containing the entire story in the Pinned Post shortly. I'll also be posting some author's notes in the comments once I've, you know, actually written them.

Art Note!: As usual, the art's not mine! The first is a very minor modification of a piece by Iahfy. I enhanced the eye color a little, but it's otherwise entirely theirs. The Lingerie 2B is by Digital-Pastel.

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Novus's Fanfiction Works

This comment is for author's notes! Beware spoilers! And if you want to comment on one of them, please do so in a separate comment NOT nested here, in order to keep these orderly!

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 19: A/N 1: And so 2B get's her 4th pokémon! Scyther was a fairly popular choice back in the Starter Poll I ran for 2B, and I think it's a pokemon that will do well with 2B, given 2B's expertise with swords. We'll see more of it's Knightly personality going forward :-). For those who are curious, with every pokemon on her team, I determine gender with a coin flip. This resulted in a female Scyther in this case, which actually caused me some mental hiccups a few times -_-.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 20: A/N 1: Right! Quick reminder...I'm using the ANIME appearances of the various cities, not the games. Pewter is odd in that it's DESCRIBED as being Rock and Granite everywhere, but the anime appearance is a fairly generic modern city. So I split the difference a bit here architecture wise.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 21: A/N 1: Our first really serious Training Montage Chapter! Here, I wanted not just to show their training, but some subtle differences in how 2B and Zoey operate. Zoey focuses on one pokemon at a time, letting her starter handle conditioning of the others while she does so. 2B juggles training exercises for all of her pokemon simultaneously instead, using her ability to multitask to keep track of it all. Note that I don't consider either method better or worse than the other. I just wanted to show that training can be handled very differently from Trainer to Trainer.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 22: A/N 1: Ah, poor Zoey. The Horny Energy has taken you...not that we can blame you, given 2B's entire...everything. A/N 2: I hope you enjoyed the Pewter Gauntlet! It, plus the little not-a-date, were the ideas I came up with the break up two training sections. It let us see a bit more battling, without things dragging out forever. As well as showing a few minor tidbits...like the fact that 2B isn't perfect and won't make perfect choices for every fight. She reacted emotionally and used Jigglypuff to down the Mankey, instead of giving Vulpix a fight that would have been a good chance for her to get some battle experience.

Lishmael

Thanks for the update!~

Daemonioros

Poor Vulpix. Hope 2B can make it up to her in some way in the near future. Some experience would do her good. Also yeah Zoey is taken by the horny. Who wouldn't be. Hoping she quickly asks 2B out on an actual date. Since I doubt 2B will take the initiative and Zoey doesn't seem like the type to delay taking the initiative

Orchamus

Damn, super good update even if we still haven't gotten to see reactions to 2B's gym outfit😄The reaction of Zoe to the teddy🤭 can anyone blame her for her horny though? It's 2B😍 Also super happy to see her get a Scyther she connects well with. Maybe Scizor in the future in homage to 2B's previous nature? Also I very much want Daisy to find out about the Mankey😆

Matthew Robar

I’m wondering if 2B has actually noticed her companions lust for her via aura sense

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Yeah, the downside of being an Alolan variant is that the first Gym and the city it's base in are very much not a good match up for her. She'll get to shine eventually, though. I'm actually probably going to run a poll about Zoey and 2B before too much longer. This story is a little weird in that I'm not entirely sure how much of the focus to put where.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

I mean, the alternative to Scizor get's giant Axes on it's arms, though... Daisy would/will probably be both a little guilty that she's doomed Mankey that run across 2B on accident...and secretly a little pleased as she doesn't like the little monsters.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

She's aware that Zoey finds her attractive. She observed that clear back when they stopped at the Reception Gate for the night. That doesn't mean she quite knows what to DO with that information, though. She still working on this 'emotions' thing.

Orchamus

True, Kleavor is cool, but Scizor seems more appropriate for a FEMALE knightly Scyther. Kleavor seems more appropriate for a guy Scyther yah? Your choice tho

Novus's Fanfiction Works

...I don't follow? Both Scyther evolutions are 50/50 Male/Female split, as that's the Scyther Species base and both evolve via an item. More to the point, 2B had a history of Giant Weapons of Doom from her old world. She'd have a much easier time conceptualizing attacks for Kleavor than Scizor, I'd think...

Orchamus

Hhmm? Oh no, I was speaking of what felt thematically appropriate to me, but the giant weapon idea does work too, so I ce again, your choice, I just thought the steel typing paid good homage to 2B's past

The Foreign Traveler

DAMN! Zoey is thirsty! Not that I can blame her! …I feel like I may have asked this before so please forgive me if I have. Daisy and others HAVE taught 2B about more “Intimate” relations right? Well, that’s I’m what assuming. Though I think it would be HILARIOUS if Zoey talks to 2B about what she wants and 2B is just tilting her head in SUCH an utterly innocent and confused befuddlement on the matter. I can actually Imagine a Chapters ART being just that! Of Zoey all red faced and flustered as she talks to 2B about this and 2B is just, well, as I just described above. Ahem! In any case, more edits…! Edit 1: …attack Pokemon “attempted” to fly people… …attack Pokemon “attempting” to fly people… Edit 2: …who quickly “down” that one… …who quickly “downed” that one… Edit 3: …and peaceful almost to a “member” (?) Edit 4: …Rest and “Clam Mind”… …Rest and “Calm Mind”… Edit 5: …saluted with “his” arms crossed… …saluted with “her” arms crossed… Edit 6: …farm more experienced “started”… …farm more experienced “starter”…