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Merry Christmas a bit early!

So, this is actually been done for a couple of days. Originally, I was going to hold off and release it around Christmas since, you know, it's a Holiday Extra. Then, of course, I realized that...Displaced Hero already releases on the 22nd every month, and I'll probably not be doing much posting on the 24th or 25th because of family time. Net result, I said 'heck with it,' and decided to give you all your Christmas present a bit early ;-).

Something which made double sense, I think, given that January's Poll story poll is still ongoing, and this story is a decently strong contender. No, it isn't outright visibly in the lead, but it's in shouting distance...and vote weighing means that the visible results aren't any sort of guarantee of victory. So, who knows, if you all end up wanting MOAR of this post-haste, it could tip the scales.

Now a few quick notes. First, you guys got lucky that early days of fics are usually the easiest to write, as this update is a full 14,400 words. Essentially a full-sized update. Second, there is another lemon in this update. I'm mentioning that specifically because, for good or ill, you shouldn't expect that to be the case every time. This isn't Final Error, which was super lemon-heavy, having that zest in every update. In this case, it just happens that Rylia's early buildup sort of...lends itself to that direction. What with the whole Sex Toy Empire thing. Also, you guys and gals specifically voted in the girl who I mentioned was going to be the most interested. So I kinda figured you were hoping for it. Just don't expect them to come so quickly in the future :-p.

Art...it's all AI works, I'm afraid. I went looking for some versions of Momo that looked appropriately older, to match the version Rylia summons ;-).

As usual, the new chapters are attached here in various formats, and the new Master Files, containing the entire story, will be up in the Pinned Post shortly. I'll also be doing some Author's Notes for the chapters after I get that done. You'll be able to find them in the comments, also as usual, though give it a bit so I can actually write them :-p. Enjoy more Stripper With a System, everyone!

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Novus's Fanfiction Works

This comment is for author's notes! Beware spoilers! And if you want to comment on one of them, please do so in a separate comment NOT nested here, in order to keep these orderly!

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 6: A/N 1: Hopefully I didn't get too much into the weeds on the summoning. Future summons won't go into detail, but with this first one some baseline bits needed to be established. A/N 2: For those unaware, who was summoned was selected by poll. Rylia currently needs pretty much everything, so it was a bit of a case of 'no bad choices' so long as she went with someone competent in their field.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 7: A/N 1: Ah, poor Momo, an Asari with two lifetimes of being a pervert is now your boss! A/N 2: More importantly, a reveal of Rylia's longer-term plan. Now, for those of you going 'Wait, doesn't this sound like Displaced Hero?!" The answer is both yes and no. Yes, both of them are building an empire of sorts to take on a criminal section of the galaxy, and even have some similar first steps. No, they aren't a lot alike otherwise. Rylia is NEVER going to be someone who willingly goes out to punch enemies in the face. So the story is going to focus a lot more on the tech buildup, business, politics, etc. She may not even ultimately be the face of the new Empire, instead picking someone else to fill that role who is a lot more assassination-proof. She's also intentionally and actively trying to uplift THE REST of the galaxy in a hurry, rather than holding on to her developments like Izuku. With two sci-fi settings that both scale to 'massive fleets of doom,' a certain amount of similarity of solution is always going to exist. But I'm trying to do two very different angles on the overall idea.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 8: A/N 1: Okay, Rylia is just kinda fun to write. The personality I gave her is just slightly crackish, so I can get away with a lot more ridiculousness :-p.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 9: A/N 1: Getting to know Momo segues into...getting to 'know' Momo. Only still at one remove ;-).

Ototsu_Yume

Looks like what you'd get if Momo and Shikamaru had a kid. xD Thanks for the update. :)

Orchamus

Rereading the first posted chapter atm, but I have to post this thought: you do a fantastic job of writing different main characters with different personalities and quirks ya know? Just got done rereading Truck so the differences stand out a bit more. Got thru 6-9 but gotta make this fast as I have work OT in 15 I need to leave for, I liked how useful Momo is in multiple ways as a partner and hopefully lover. Truly an excellent use of karma points. Hoping MC looks into life extension tech to keep her Momo around for much less nger then a normal human lifespan. Also amused at the constant if well earned dread of interacting with ANYTHING from 40k😅

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Hmm, I'm guessing you said that because of the hair? Momo has that spiky ponytail as her canon hairstyle, though...

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Thanks :-). I'm honestly best with characters and settings/worldbuilding...and worst with combat. Every writer tends to have things that come easy and things that they struggle with. Characters just happen to be one of the former for me :-p. Always nice to hear someone appreciate it though ;-).

Artemis

Chapters 6-9? Nice.

Maglad

So we have an extrovert Momo’s momos to play with? Nice. How long until she helps in the stream?

Ototsu_Yume

Eyebrows too, the bottom left pic reminds me of his 'mendokusai' face scrunch in reverse.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

I have to admit I just about facepalmed when I realized that was going to be the label, given what I said about lemons :-p.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Probably not anytime soon on the adult parts of the Stream :-p. Even if the Asari wouldn't think it odd, Momo would still have a mental disconnect between 'Professional CEO' and 'Oh God, they've all seen me cum on screen.'

twilightwanderer

Thank you for the early Christmas gift! Wonderful to see Momo be awesome, no matter what setting. A few suggestions/corrections: "A six-hundred-year-plus old Asari colony" -> "A six-hundred-plus-year-old Asari Colony" flows better (at least to me), or maybe just go numeric: "A 600+ year-old Asari Colony" "how beat red Momo was" should be "beet red" "able to tell were good sense" should be "where" "a comping mechanism" I'm assuming this should be "coping"

WhatAFungi

Love this! I really want to see the aftermath of that last scene. Can’t wait for more!

WhatAFungi

What did you say about lemons?

White Neko Knight

Figuring out fictional Female military leaders that would fit in this story is rough. The end of chapter 7 got me thinking about it and there's a distressing lack of them in media. Even animated media. Honor Harrington. Samantha Carter from Stargate. Maybe one of the ship captains from the Gundam series? It's rough.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Hmmm, I can think of several like Tayna (Saga of Evil), Artoria and Esdeath. But they are from magical settings. I think one of the Street Fighter or KoF girls had a background as a military company leader (Leona?)? There are probably several from Star Wars or Star Trek if I thought on it hard enough. Ohhh, Sarah Kerrigan would certainly fit, if you got the right version of her.

White Neko Knight

It was the restriction to higher tech levels that was throwing me. Though that restriction was self assigned. Star wars might be the best bet for characters. Especially if you pull a Jedi from the Old Republic. That'd be incredibly amusing. I'd love to see Sarah Kerrigan though. Nova would also work as a small teams commander. Honestly Star Craft has a lot of tech that can be enhanced that would come off as "old is new again". Purifier Tech would be fantastic for later. While Terran tech combined with Lass/"blaster" tech and kinetic shields would be work well when she first starts her war of conquest. Terran power armor made with heat absorbing ceramics under a laser resistant ablative coating and covered by a kinetic shield. Absolute monsters on the battlefield. Plus ya know. Yamato cannons. I'm surprised I didn't think of Starcraft. Love that game and universe.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Eh, the issue with pulling a Jedi is that the Force might not exist in Mass Effect. I haven't really ruled one way or another, but I've so far stuck to character possibilities where their abilities are mutation/genetic based. Mutants from Marvel, Quirks from MHA, Alien genetics from DC, etc. I've largely been trying to still to at least pseudo-scientific things, instead of introducing magic or magic adjacent things. Of course, there's also nothing keeping me from including male character too. I just have a suspicion they might struggle to win polls :-p.

Zachrey Mueller

There's also full body's sister from full metal alchemist, the Russian commander from black lagoon, Sir Integra Hellsing from the anime Hellsing, and in sure you could easily search up "fictional female leaders"

Gscruiser

Might be a little old school, but I always liked Lisa Hayes from Robotech (Macross)

The Foreign Traveler

Momo ALWAYS looks good… Edit 1: …it would have been “an” interesting to see who… …it would have been interesting to see who… Edit 2: …to tell “were” good sense… …to tell “where” good sense… Edit 3: …to make “an” known weapon… …to make “a” known weapon… Edit 4: …partially, a “comping” mechanism… …partially, a “coping” mechanism… Edit 5: …her Quirk making guns such an obvious… …her Quirk making guns “was” such an obvious…