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Edit: Sorry about the initial mislabeling, I forgot I broke this up into more chapters! I've fixed it now.

Alright! New month, new round of updates started! As always, the first release of the month is the next chunk of Halfway Broken.

These two chapters are a little bit unusual as they are, honestly and frankly put, a way to patch a few holes in my long-term planning that have been caused by One Piece content released after I started writing the fic. It shouldn't be super obvious the bits that I'm 'patching,' since most of it is to set up background bits for things that won't happen until they are farther down the time stream. There are things, however, that we just didn't know about One Piece and the story when I first started writing this over two and a half years ago. These chapters are me doing background patches that account for a few things (mostly, Imu and related bits, we know a loooootttt more about him now).

That said, it both shouldn't be too obvious, and I think I made the island they are visiting interesting enough on its own. Honestly, I think I may end up liking this particular island the most out of the originals I've created, as far as pure backdrop goes. Though Wind's Home/The Crystal City came out well enough that its a bit of a tossup when I haven't completed this one yet ;-).

As usual, the new stuff is attached here. A quick reminder, I'm only updating master files once both updates of a story are out in a month, as it would make an even more confused hash of all my Master File documents if I had to create multiples of each one, for four separate stories a month -_-. I think I'll leave off on doing author's notes for this pair of chapters, as almost anything I could say would potentially brush up against the patches I'm making and draw attention to them :-p. Now, go enjoy more of One Piece: Halfway Broken!

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TheWardenOf[REDACTED]

Tfch in epub is ch 128-131 bad notation or more chap than intended

Orchamus

Excellent though the chapters are four in number not the two that 128-129 implies

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Whoops. That's my fault, I forgot I split the chapters up more this time. I'll fix it, thanks!

DarkestCalling

Not sure if its a problem but you brought up joyboy before around the skypiea arc and made it seem like the first time Robin and luffy heard about him but here Robin had a bit more knowledge but seems to have not known then or informed luffy about it but he apparently informed her about Yamatos fruit not a major issue but a bit of a disconnect

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Nope, not an actual issue. Remember, Robin has already been to Fishamn island and seen the Joy Boy poneglyph there. She's been researching it since then. So at Skypeia she didn't know much of anything, it's recent knowledge from places like Fishman Island and the Frozen Library.

DarkestCalling

But hasn't said anything to luffy or Yamato about her fruit and only now mentions it

Novus's Fanfiction Works

...What does that have to do with anything? She's found partial historical references to the NAME, not any details on him having a Devil Fruit or the Nika Fruit in general.

DarkestCalling

My bad rereading it a few times the passage made it sound like the info Joy Boy. The first Pirate. Someone who fought in the Great War against those who would later become the World Government. Even we, despite attempts to retain knowledge, know little more of him than that. We know two additional things of great importance, however. One, that the World Government greatly fears the return of Joy Boy via another Awakened Wielder of the Nika Fruit. Two…that whatever Nika was, he wasn’t the only one of his kind. Another, an ally of his, drove the Starlight Spear into an ancient enemy right off the coast of Starfall…but died to the death throes of that same foe.” Was coming from Robin at least to me and it seemed like it was pretty important that's where my issue was it doesn't say she said it but it also doesn't really say who is speaking right right after talking about her and could look like she spoke up about what she knew

DarkestCalling

Robin sat bolt upright at that, with Luffy stiffening as well. He didn’t know much about Joy Boy, but knew the figure was important. Clearly, Robin was aware of something as well, and the three locals were eyeing her carefully. Yea this is right before and kinda made it feel like at least to me that she spoke up after everyone was watching her

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Hmmm, okay, I can kinda see that. I was wrong and looking back it was supposed to be the High Priestess still. Might have to add a small bit to make that clearer...

DarkestCalling

Eh its just an unclear part and for some reason my mind jumped to wait how does Robin know all this and hasn't said anything for some reason lol some one could easily take it the way it was meant and that it was the high priestess continuing

Chris7A

With Yamato training for awakening, and luffy having awakening, the timeskip is going to have less stakes than canon. What happened to Cesar, I don’t remember. Is dressrosa still under the donquijote pirates? I know Mingo is dead but the rest should be alive right? Im guessing that as soon as luffy and crew enter the grand line kaido is going to gun for them. Though he might have trouble finding them. I can see a luffy and Yamato vs Kaido and big mom.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

*waggles hand in a so-so motion* Frankly, increasing the general strength of the crew is intended to get rid of something that annoyed the hell out of me in canon. Specifically, that despite taking two years off to train like crazy, the crew (particularly Luffy) contiune to constantly get their face punched in over and over. Somehow, the other Supernova's were all fine going straight into the New World. But the Strawhats, who were arguably one of the two strongest Supernova crews, took all that time to prepare...and constantly ended up losing until they pulled Shonen reversals out of their ass after being beat down like a redheaded step child at an AA meeting for alcoholic fathers. In short, boosting their strength is meant to let them come into the New World at actual parity with the threats that they ran into in canon. Some of whom Luffy is at least LOOSELY familiar with. As for what happened to Cesar and Desserosa, that would be telling :-p. Though there's a hint in the recent Ace perspective about Cesar.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Yeah, but if someone had that issue, than more people might. It won't hurt me any to add a line that clarifies who is speaking :-p. So it's good you brought it up.

Camille

Thanks for the update! Love the new island and I’m looking forward to seeing what you’ve got planned for the Strawhats :) It seems like there will be possibilities for improvement in spiritual energy for all Strawhats which is great! Is Yamato the only one who can make use of the island to help awaken her fruit? Are is it at least a little helpful for all other fruit users on the crew even if not to the same extent? Also, there is some speculation that Chopper’s devil fruit might be linked to the forest god due to recent developments in the manga. It’s definitely not confirmed, but if it does end up being true, then it might be difficult for you to retcon the fact that the high priestess paid no attention to him. By the way, have you made any decisions concerning Jimbe’s possible addition on the crew yet? If you would rather not share that yet then no worries obviously! Anyway, thanks again for the update x

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Technically, at least some of what the locals know will be useful for anyone trying to do an Awakening, but they won't be nearly as helpful to anyone else. I crafted the island specifically with her in mind, choosing another mythological figure that had an association with Stars. Which, logically, would make them a very close affinity to 'The Sun.' Thus being an old ally of Nika. I've never seen any speculation about Chopper's fruit like that? It certainly doesn't make any sense to me. Unless he ate a completely different fruit from the Human Human Fruit he claimed...well, humans are about the farthest thing from a 'forest god' that I can imagine. As for Jinbe, I'm technically still undecided, but I'm leaning somewhat against the idea. I wasn't impressed by him when I read through the Whole Cake Arc. In fact, he kinda pissed me off, since he was so ready to abandon the Sun Pirates he was in charge of. I haven't yet actually read any farther than the Wano Arc though. So I'm reserving judgement until I have to time to catch up. Which will hopefully be this month.

Robert Lemanski

The speculation about Chopper's fruit being that of the Forest God is because of quite a few things. -Chopper being a Mythical Zoan could explain why he has so many more forms than other Zoans. -Chopper being the Forest God makes his awakened form being gigantic make more sense. -Chopper's Zoan lacks a Model like other Zoans have, even other Hito Hito fruits like Nika and Golden Buddha and the phoenix. -Hito Hito fruits do not have to be actual humans, as the word "hito" means human but it also can mean person or individual- this tracks with the Hito Hito we know so far of a Golden Buddha (a statue of an enlightened human), Nika (a god) and the Big Monk Ōnyūdō (a yokai spirit). -Dr. Hiriluk spoke of a mushroom that can cure all illnesses and Chopper's Hito Hito looks like a mushroom- Forest Gods are often associated with healing and medicine and Chopper's Dream just so happens to be making a true panacea. -Rocks stated there are two Devil Fruits needed to defeat Imu and Blackbeard, Rock's son, came to Drum Island for some reason only to trash the island... possibly after he failed to find the Forest God Devil Fruit. -And in a recent chapter Imu used a devil ability to "devil-ify" opponents and turn them into minions, an ability that gives even one of the top three stronger Roger pirates trouble, yet Chopper was able to in a panic literally punch the devilification out of them. This leads people to believe Chopper's Zoan might be the Hito Hito, Model: Forest God, because it matches with what is mentioned in a hugely important prophetic mural in Elbaf that speaks of "the Three Worlds" eras. The eras being some time before the Void Century (First World), the Void Century (Second World), and the current time period (Third World). In the mural, the sun (Nika as Joyboy) is said to have spread the flames of war in the same sentence that the forest god was said to tame demons, which Chopper seems to have done. So people suspect Chopper is the Forest God.

The Foreign Traveler

… 😓 …don’t think I dropped the ball on an edit post like this in a LONG time. To keep it short: been fairly busy and work had been more stressful then normal. I got swept up in it and I only just remembered today that I haven’t posted my edits to you yet. …and I still need to read Stripper Chapters 29-35 and do edits for that but it’s fun reading your work so that’s not really a chore at all. Expect them those in the next few days. Here! I’ve done all your other story edits… Edit 1: …such “a” Nami… …such “as” Nami… Edit 2: …spot “up” moving… …spot “us” moving… Edit 3: …”Wheatheria” had… …”Weatheria” had… Edit 4: …charts “copies”… …charts “copied”… Edit 5: …let anyone… …let “alone” anyone… Edit 6: …not “as” small ship… …not “a” small ship… Edit 7: …risked “in” on… …risked “it” on… Edit 8: …from the “later”… …from the “latter”… Edit 9: …though “her” was… …though “he” was… Edit 10: …”Zaon” fruit… …”Zoan” fruit… Edit 11: …in the “depts”… …in the “depths”…