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Helloooo Night City...err Patreon subscribers!

It's time for the monthly extra, and as promised, this time it's another 10,000 word (nearly 11,000 actually) follow up on The Misfit System idea from last month. This extends the story enough to, I think, give everyone a more proper feel for the story as a whole. Including a bit of a dip into Vicky struggling with her own morals running distinctly incompatible software with those of Night City. Something that will, hopefully, lead her to grow a bit in time, if I continue this story and manage it right ;-).

Either way, give your feedback on what you think, as I'll be considering after this whether to continue this particular concept or not. If enough people like it, I'll likely throw up a poll to see if people want it to take the Author's Choice slot next month, which would double up its size to a bit over 40k. That would be enough to actually post it elsewhere (I have a minimum 30k size rule before I do that), and possibly add it to the monthly poll.

Doing that wouldn't happen until at least October, and I'm hoping to finish up Displaced Hero sometime between December-February. At which point one of the existing stories will move off the poll and into a 'guaranteed monthly update' slot. Just keep that in mind before you knee-jerk reject the idea of adding another story to the poll :-p.

Anyway! For now, enjoy more of Vicky's experiences in Night City with the Misfit System! As usual, the new bits are attached to this poll in various formats. As of now, there are also Master Files for this story in the Master Threads Pinned Post as well. So you can get the complete current story there, if you skipped out on reading the first chapters last month ;-). Author's Notes will follow in the comments shortly.

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Novus's Fanfiction Works

This comment is for author's notes! Beware spoilers! And if you want to comment on one of them, please do so in a separate comment NOT nested here, in order to keep these orderly!

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 3: A/N 1: Sadly for the Hori Squad, Vicky is no longer running around secretly naked ;-). To images attached to this post are, in combination, a decent approximation of her looks in the new outfit. The first one, minus the high heels, is what she's using a a base layer. The second shows the 'tear style fades' I mentioned her overlaying with Illusory Raiment. Honestly struggled with how to describe those. I've seen them before, but have no idea what they are actually called. A/N 2: So, her situation starts to hit Vicky pretty hard here, where before she was running in survival mode. Don't worry, I don't do 'angst' very much, so while she WILL struggle a bit, she'll grow past it without it taking over the story. Her not having SOME issues would be seriously unrealistic, though. Particularly given the precise moment I pulled her from Worm.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 4: A/N 1: I had to do a fair bit of research on the gangs, due to this being set 10 years before Cyberpunk 2077. If the gangs don't match quite what you expected? That's on purpose, as there was JUST enough lore available to make a good go at adjusting them. The Valentinos and Mox are both smaller than then will be in 10 years for example. A/N 2: I chose to be generous, a bit, in the types of skills Vicky would have picked up in being the most active member of New Wave. Even her detractors will generally admit she's depicted as intelligent, so expecting her to have picked up a basic idea how to spot gang members and tail them back to larger operations seemed reasonable. As did giving her the ability to problem solve when faced with not being a flying brick any longer. A/N 3: So something which Vicky doesn't have a great grasp on, but I want to clarify for Readers, is that [Misfit] and the [Misfit System] has a very localized level of omniscience. A proper, fully powered, System would have much greater levels of that. Currently, the Misfit System has only VERY limited 'general information' about the city, that it combined with much higher omniscience within a half kilometer or so. Hence it could scan and give solid details on the building for her mission, but only make its best guess based on data mining for possible reinforcements.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 5: A/N 1: And so Vicky runs into the big morality question she's going to struggle with. Her Black and White morality isn't a great fit for Night City, which is going to cause her problems for a while. On the other hand, she's intelligent enough to see possible solutions that will let her grow and do some good while trying to sort it out. The fact that those options will require her to continue thinking situations through, rather than just punching every problem, is only a bonus :-p. A/N 2: So, adjusting settings from Game Mechanics to practical settings is always a bit of a challenge. Max Docs are basically health potions in Cyberpunk 2077...but it's verrrrryyy obvious that its a game mechanic, since you can't just save Jackie by having him pop one. On the flip side, Night City can give you a nanite weave that makes you bullet resistant and it only takes a few days to set in fully, supposedly, built from nanites injected at various points around the body. I decided to walk a middle line here, where Max Docs will dramatically increase healing speed, but aren't instant-cures.

White Neko Knight

Honestly love this story. There's not enough 2077 Stories where the MC has the ability to make changes to the setting while also being week enough that they have to work at it instead of instantly godmoding. Would Love to see her turn the Mox into a force for good while slowly realizing in horror that Good people are exploited and hammered down in this setting. Curious how NC will change her even as she stays Good.

Евгений Казанин

История интересна, сейчас у меня занимает почетное третье место: 1. One Piece 2. Stripper 3. Misfit 4. Star Wars 5. Eridium Dreams 6. 2B with pokemon 7. Pandora box :)

MrRattikarl

I like this story very much, please continue

Novus's Fanfiction Works

I'm glad you like it :-). I'm hoping to answer a few of those questions before she outgrows the setting, which is part of why I've made her relatively limited with a growth curve that won't run completely out of control for a while (at least, hopefully). In the end, while I fully intend her to have an impact of the setting, I'm not actually sure she can 'fix' it. Cyberpunk (the universe, not the genre) is SO screwed up that it's almost impossible to fix without burning the whole thing down and starting over. Which isn't quite where I want to go with the story. Depending on how things shake out, this might be the first work I've done where I have the MC world hop eventually. That's still a very nebulous idea, though. It's equally likely she might try to recreate something like the Hero system out of Edgerunners and shift the city that way. Or channel Taylor and go full warlord...

Евгений Казанин

Виктория в виде военачальника, как Тейлор? Дайте две, это будет интересно почитать.

White Neko Knight

Honestly just making a self sustaining Good edgerunner hero org would massively improve life. Another thing she could do is make a company like Valve or Costco. A corp that actually cares about their customers. Of course it's Cyberpunk so it would need a combat and espionage division. I'm using the Mox again because they're at the perfect point to hijack for a better tomorrow. A Sex and Wellness company founded as a sort of labor union or workers co-op could make a decent sized dent in the suffering of the world by making sure sex workers, partiers, and maybe some idols don't get exploited. A lot of violence would need to happen for a corp with those values to grow large enough it can't be nuked or KKV'ed out of existence.

Dominique Brassel

Right so I do like this one but I just forgot to praise it.... Mh Vicky will have her hands full if she really wants to meaningfully impact night city..... Also coopting the mox is a interesting idea this early Lizzy should be alive as well so Vicky could save her live and perhaps help the mox not to slip into becoming more gang than protectors....

Wizzy

Thanks for the Chapters! Loving the fic so far! It's always nice to find a new Cyberpunk Story, especially one where "V" is actually the protagonist. I especially like how you word the missions since they really fit with the Cyberpunk theme. The system itself is very interesting if nearly every ability or item she gains from the shop will have a "Defect". Honestly, I can already see how she can solve her Moral quandary in the last chapter. You can giver her an item or skill that has the "defect" or something like the Mercy Ring in Palworld that makes it so whenever you do damage to an enemy, it stops at exactly 1 HP(any effects like DoT damage or maybe even banging their head on something as they go down would still kill them). So what if the shop has a Sword or ability or something that has that "defect"? Afterall, a weapon perfectly designed for killing(like a Katana, for example sticking with the Stellar Blade theme) but somehow being defective in being unable to kill whoever it is aimed at would be thrown into the [Nothingness].

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Sadly, no. The Mox only formed AFTER Lizzie's death. The chain of events leading to the Mox was: 1)Lizzie owned a strip club and treated her girls well. 2)Tyger Claws brutally raped and murdered one of her girls. 3)Lizzie tracked down three of the assailants, killed them with an axe and displayed their bodies in front of her club. 4)Tyger Claws attacked the club the same night, demolishing the bar and killing Lizzie. 5) Lizzie's death set off a series of protracted riots across the entire Night City, with Tyger Claw businesses becoming the main target of the violence. 6)Her ideological successors rebuilt her place, naming it Lizzie's Bar, and forming the Mox. For a while, they tried to live up the their intent and protect as many of the cities sex workers as they could. This is the period that Vicky is currently in. It would only be after struggling for a few years, sometime in the 2070s, that a lack of sources of income would force them to restrict their operations to only protecting their own girls. They started charging protection fees, among other things, as a way to break even. With the leadership ending up divided between Susie Q who started running it more like other gangs, and the more idealistic types that had been around long enough to worry they were just turning into another version of the Tyger Claws. Right now, in Misfit System, it's only a single year after the riots though. So one possible route for Vicky to improve things is to help find other ways for the Mox to finance themselves. Beyond just the club and a few brothels under their control.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Yeah, the Mox are one way I'm seriously considering going forward. My only concern is it ending up being a bit too much an echo of Stripper With a System and Erotic Delights. I try to make each story fairly diverse, rather than repeating themes too much.

twilightwanderer

Honestly not much feedback from me at this point. I think this is a solid premise, and I wouldn't mind seeing more, or even having it join the poll in a few months. One think I'll admit I am curious about is whether there will be romance and how that will manifest, given that Vicky is canonically attracted to men (can't say one way or the other about women), but I don't think you've yet written a female MC in a straight relationship (although I don't know what writing you've done outside of fanfic).

twilightwanderer

That's a really great idea from a mechanical perspective, and I wouldn't mind seeing it implemented, but I would contend that it doesn't actually solve the moral quandary. To me, it's not just "killing bad, but not-killing hard." It's the fact that everyone she leaves alive is more information about her that gets out, potentially threatening both her life and her efforts. It's that Night City has no functional justice system to hold gangs or especially corpos to account, and by leaving them alive many will go on to victimize others. It's the lack of clear information to know who's coerced, who's irredeemable, and who's in the middle. It's balancing individual responsibility with systemic pressures. It's wrestling with the desire to show mercy and the lack of sufficient strength to make mercy a viable long-term course. To me, the interest of a moral quandary is that it doesn't have easy, or even right answers.

twilightwanderer

The one spelling correction I saw throughout is referring to "cyberwear" instead of "cyberware"

Wizzy

Yeah, I agree that it wouldn't really "solve" anything. Probably just used the wrong word there. But she already noted that gangs like the Valentinos and 6th Street are pretty low-end with the crime they do. Sure, it's still crime but not to the point of it being better to kill everyone like Maelstrom and the Scavs are. The justice system in NC is ass but even if they don't get arrested and actually stay in jail, getting the healing afterwards would still cost a pretty penny so there would still be at least some consequence. I also think it really helps mentally that she has that option. Right now, she risks killing someone with most of her attacks if she gets into a non-stealth fight. Eventually, she'll have to learn that Night City operates on a completely different wavelength than what she is used to, but it would help ease her into the world if she knows she has a surefire way of not actually killing someone.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

I'm honestly not entirely sure what I'm doing with the realtionship for her, since you're correct that she's attracted to men, but I don't really like writing female X male from the female perspective. Because of the setting, I'm seriously considering attempting the flip side of Alyssa as a solution. Essentially, Vicky stumbling into a futa character and being intrigued. Those cannoically are a thing in 2077. It's still something I'm unsure about, though. Possibly even something I may run a poll on at some point. *Edit* Also, thanks for the typo spot :-).

Novus's Fanfiction Works

I'm glad you're enjoying the story :-). The mercy item option isn't a bad idea, though there are a number of powers she could get that would effectively let her do the same thing. In fact, something along those lines is going to be one of her immediate stopgap solution options. It's ONLY a stopgap, though, to buy time for her to wrestle with the morality questions. As both Vicky herself agonized over in the chapters, and twilight pointed out, simply leaving all enemies alive isn't a solution. A good chunk of this fic, at least in the initial phase, is going to be her trying to sort out her morality versus the reality of Night City. Which is made extra ticklish by the fact she ISN'T against killing, strictly speaking. Her Black and White morality means that some crimes, like the rape attempt she interrupted, she feels little to no guilt over killing the perpetrator. But that's a slippery slope and she knows it. As you pointed out though, having the OPTION will help her.

twilightwanderer

Might be worth trying sometime, just to expand your writer's toolbox, but as always, no pressure to write anything that you're truly uncomfortable with

Novus's Fanfiction Works

*cocks head* The Vicky x Futa or Female x Male perspectives? Technically, I've done the latter before in original shorts. I just both don't LIKE writing that perspective, and lack the personal perspective to feel like I can get it consistently right. Which is why I tend to only do it in short bits and pieces, and avoid the perspective in longer works that will produce multiple encounters.

twilightwanderer

I meant Female x Male, and if you've tried it and it just didn't work for you, then that's that

Sadalfa

I really like this story and the potential it has! I hope you’ll continue writing it. I’m impatient to see what crazy things your Vicki can do and experience in this setting. Though I do worry about her dream of flying again. If the Corps ever sees a human flying unaided, it would probably be open hunting season on her immediately. They’d want to experiment on her in the hope of somehow recreating that ability. It’ll also be really interesting to see how she deals with her own moral compass in order to survive and thrive. Because if you aren’t willing to kill in Night City, you’re at a HUGE disadvantage against basically everyone else—and they’ll realize that very quickly. Anyway, I really hope you continue this story. I’m very much looking forward to seeing where it goes! There are nowhere near enough good Cyberpunk fanfictions out there!

Camille

Hey! Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the start of this story, despite not knowing anything about both the Worm and Cyberpunk universes. Despite that I didn't feel lost reading this at all, so I wanted to let you know that you did a good job describing everything so far. Having Vicky slowly recover scramble memories from her previous world is a great way to give exposition to readers who are clueless about Worm like I am, as well as letting us learn about Cyberpunk alongside Vicky. I hope you will continue this story, I love the concept of discarded abilities being used effectively through synergy and creativity. Also, eventually world hopping once Vicky eventually outgrows Cyberpunk is exciting!

Novus's Fanfiction Works

I'm glad you like it :-). Yeah, there's a reason I stripped down her powers and eliminated the flying, and it wasn't just because she was arguably a bit to high power for the setting by default. The flight, in particular, would get her noticed fast, if she used it recklessly. My grounding her to just the Air Steps for now, she has time to adjust to Night City and understand the dangers. Flight can still be very useful, but with time to think it through she'll realize that doing it in a way that doesn't attract attention is important...

Novus's Fanfiction Works

I try to make stories as accessible as possible :-). Though there's always a balance to strike between that and boring the the people that DO know the settings to death ;-). I'm glad you were/are able to enjoy it despite not being familiar with the original source materials!

The Foreign Traveler

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