Playing Games WIP (Patreon)

I haven't thought of the title yet.

Edit: Page 2 sketch and switched their places on page 1 so that Robin can more naturally look to the right panel when she looks at Eileen on page 2. This first scene will likely be silent, with some moans.

Edit 2: Page 3 sketch. Sorry I took a bit longer to sketch this one. I ended up rearranging the panels on pages 2 and 3 and I spent some time drawing a panel that I decided to move to page 4. I included it in the post too. I'm not sure about having this scene be completely silent, maybe I'll think of some internal monologue for Robin to be thinking. Also, I think I should include Guy's face on page 1 in a small panel, so you know it's him.

Edit 3: Page 1 ink.

Edit 4: Page 2 ink.

Edit 5: Page 3 ink. And I changed the panels a bit.

Edit 6: Page 1 colors.

Edit 7: Page 2 base colors and shading.

Edit 8: Page 2 finished. And I added a bit of text to pages 1 and 2. Just a few words here and there so it's not completely silent.

Edit 9: Page 3 finished.

Edit 10: Page 4 sketch.

Edit 11: Page 5 sketch.

Edit 12: Page 6 sketch.

Edit 13: Page 4 ink.

Edit 14: Page 5 ink. I'm not sure the pov panels look right, I'll see if I change them.

Edit 15: Page 6 ink.

Edit 16: Colored page 4.

Edit 17: Colored page 5.

Edit 18: Colored page 6.

Edit 19: Page 7 sketch.

Edit 20: Page 7 ink. Like I mentioned in the patreon tier 3 chat, I have pages 8 and 9 sketched but I wanto to wait to post them until I think the dialogue is close to final, because I feel like it might be annoying for you when I post dialogue pages and change them a lot later.

Edit 21: Pages 8 and 9 sketch and ink. Sorry I took a while to post them, and I didn't really even change them that much. I just never know if the jokes work well in my comics, and it's even harder to tell because I re-read them over and over while I work on the page, so they naturally become less funny to me. So I'd appreciate feedback about them, don't feel bad about telling me you don't think they work very well because I already don't think they do lol. I still want to change them a bit in the future, just felt bad about not posting them for so long.

Edit 22: Finished page 7.

Edit 23: Page 8 base colors and shading.

Edit 24: Finished page 8. I updated the dialogue, still not sure it the jokes work.

Edit 25: Finished page 9.

Edit 26: Page 10 sketch.

Edit 27: Page 11 sketch. The next page is already friday with Eileen.

Edit 28: Page 12 sketch.

Edit 29: Page 10 ink,

Edit 30: Page 11 ink.

Edit 31: Page 12 ink.

Edit 32: Page 10 colored.

Edit 33: Page 11 colored.

Edit 34: Page 12 colored.

Edit 35: Page 13 sketch.

Edit 36: Pages 14 and 15 sketches and I tweaked page 13 a little bit. Hope the porn comic is not getting too dramatic, I just thought, since it's about them figuring out their relationship it would make sense to do a bit of buildup and have then have some comunication issues before they figure it out. I am kinda regretting doing so many dialogue pages though, I don't think I'm gonna include this much talking in any future comics. I learned that with Mecha Belt already but I thought it would be fine here, idk, my bad.

Edit 37: Page 13 ink.

Edit 38: Page 14 ink.

Edit 39: Page 15 ink.

Edit 40: Page 13 finished.

Edit 41: Page 14 finished.

Edit 42: Finished page 15 and did some tiny fixes to pages 13 and 14.

Edit 43: Page 16 sketch.

Edit 44: Page 17 sketch.

Edit 45: Page 18 sketch and some small tweaks to page 17. I might move the "girlfriend obtained" gag to the next page, I feel like it might be better comedic timing wise, not sure. Or rather it might be better because it lets the romantic moment breathe before doing the joke.

Edit 46: Page 16 ink.

Edit 47: Pages 17 and 18 inks.

Edit 48: Page 16 finished. I have to decide on a title already since I'm going to post the first three pages for free when I finish this batch. I think I'm gonna go with "Playing games", referencing both the mind games Eileen is playing with Robin and the videogame Guy and Robin play.

Edit 49: Page 17 finished. I'm not sure if the colors are final, they feel a bit off.

Edit 50: Finished page 18, added the title to page 1 and made small highlight changes to the first 3 pages. I'm not sure if the sparkles on page 18 are too much, so I left a version without them in case you want to tell me which one you like better. Sorry I'm progressing really slow this month even though 2 of the pages are pretty simple. Like I mentioned before, I didn't have a lot of time to draw this month. Also I'm not sure if I like the rules Eileen sets for the relationship after all, in particular the "you can't see me naked" rule might create some interesting scenarios or it might just restrict the kinds of scenarios I can draw them in.

Edit 51: I edited the dialogue in page 17. I think I like this terms better, but I'm not sure. I left the previous version (the right one is the new one) in case you want to compare them. Let me know if you have thoughts about it! I'm sketching page 19 atm.

Edit 52: Page 19 sketch. I hope this next scene won't be confusing, the smaller panels are meant to be flashforwards showing up while Eily and Robin make out. I drew Robin with hickeys on her chest, next to the panel where Eily is giving her the hickeys so it's easier to tell that it's something that happens after what's going on right now. I'll also color the future panels differently.

Edit 53: Page 20 sketch.

Edit 54: Page 21 sketch.

Edit 55: Page 19 ink.

Edit 56: Page 20 ink.

Edit 57: Page 21 ink.

Edit 58: Page 19 finished.

Edit 59: Page 20 finished.

Edit 60: Page 21 finished.

Edit 61: Pages 22 and 23 sketches. I think these will be silent pages. I'll add a few moans though.

Edit 61: Page 24 sketch.

Edit 62: Page 22 ink.

Edit 63: Pages 23 and 24 ink

Edit 64: Page 22 finished.

Edit 65: Page 23 finished.

Edit 66: Page 24 finished.

Edit 67: Page 25 sketch.

Edit 68: Pages 26 and 27 sketches. There's one page left, I'm gonna leave it for next month. I'll draw it while the poll for the next comic is up and then I'll be able to catch up and actually finish the 4 pages within each month again.

Edit 69: Page 25 ink.

Edit 70: Page 26 ink. I changed 2 panels. I left the previous version of the sketch in.

Edit 71: Page 27 ink.

Edit 72: Page 25 finished.

Edit 73: Page 26 finished.

Edit 74: Page 27 finished and small tweaks to page 25.

Edit 75: Last page and the extra gag page sketches.

Edit 76: Page 28 sketch.

Edit 77: Comic finished. I still want to edit the dialogue in a few pages though.