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Published:
2026-03-18 06:12:56
Edited:
2026-03-26 03:02:58
Imported:
2026-10
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The tier 4 requests were: "Witch cages virgin to harness their pent-up energy", "Small cage being teased by a big ass" and "Ballbusting".

I got a bit carried away with this one lol. And I took some liberty to interpret the first request, hope that's fine.

I think a lower POV would work better for the last panel, but I don't know if I have it in me to redraw it from scratch.

Please let me know if you naturally read the dialogue in the order illustrated in the second image.

Edit: I changed some poses, added some design elements to the main character and moved the dialogue bubbles around. I'm gonna start with the ink now.Interested to know if you think it reads fine now or if it's still not ideal.Can you guess where I got the inspiration for the rings in the mc's hair? I don't know myself lol, I know I saw it somewhere but I don't remember where.

Edit 2: Ink.

Edit 3: Base color and shading.

Edit 4: Finished with no dialogue. I think the art is gonna stay like that but I still need to see what I do with the dialogue placement.

Edit Finished.

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Social Shadow

I read the "for it pleases" bubble out of order. Due to how close it was to the blue text I read it after I read the mini panel then read the rest of the page in the correct order. This looks lovely and give a fun 1970s comic book vibe

DeprivedArt

Thank you for letting me know. I was hoping, since the intended next bubble is in the same panel, it would work fine. But that makes sense, the fact that the last bubble is closer and is in the standard order overrides that. I'll see if I can move them around to fix it. Glad you like it! Maybe part of that vibe is because the big lady's design is very Devilman inspired.

Rainer45

It may just be that im bad at interpreting story panels to begin with. But i read the description first, briefly saw the red line, literally understanding which order to read it. But still forgot and got it wrong when i read it 🥴 Not to complain cause it really might just be that im hopeless, but since you are asking for feedback i thought id chip in 🤣 It'll pronably turn out great regardless! Good work ❤️

DeprivedArt

I don't think it's you. I asked because I knew it wasn't an ideal text bubble placement. Did you think it was fixed in the third image or nah? I'm not sure if I still need to change it further. Thank you, happy you like it!

CGeeOh

What an amazing concept--I love this piece! I know it's just a one page but it would be great to see it revisited at some point in the future. Does this character get trapped in this dimension or world? Is the spell permanent? Good work on this one!

DeprivedArt

Thank you, glad you like it! It's actually sort of meant to be set in the world of one of the comics I've been putting in the polls, the one about a chastity church. It's a comic script I commissioned that has this vibe.