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The Confession - Script - SPOILER! & Poll

  • Yes, lookin good 51
  • No, go back to the drawing board 3
  • 2024-07-20
  • —2024-07-23
  • 54 votes
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TL:DR - Script. Spoilers. Vote if you like it.

 

This is the script for the first video of a 3 part series. The video will be conveyed as a confession of sorts, read by the main character. The scenes play with sounds and talking, with a narration overlay in between the talking. The in-scene dialogue and actions are listed under the "in person" column. The narration is listed in the "in confession" column. Even though the text is in different columns, the order is read from top to bottom, line by line. To the left is a picture of the scene that would accompany the dialog.

Not exactly sure about the pacing, so we'll see how it goes. Highly likely to change. It's also written with werewolves in mind, but it can be adapted to other creatures. I'll have a poll soon for you all to pick the baddies.

I was going back and forth about sharing this. I think knowing the story ahead of time will spoil some of the fun, but I wanted to get feedback to see if this is going to work for the majority of you.

For those that don't mind having the surprise spoiled and want to give feedback, please do. For those that want to be surprised, don't read further.

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Comments

Tom Groove

When does a new video come out?

Skarn

Maybe you could explore the DP experience with this kind of story...

Interested

I really don't like that initial.... I am just going to say it... rape angle. Everyone has their own thing, but it would be way better to me if she was initially scared, then saw the size of the reveal and went for it willingly. Instead of please no, she could instead say things like, give it to me, more, etc

sami acbar

That said... i'm also excited to see how it turns out! as varbind suggested the story can use a little tweaking but i really like where it's going. well done mate