The Confession Ep.2 Script - WIP - SPOILER (Patreon)

TL:DR If you want to ruin the story for yourself.

Here's a rough script and storyboard. This will change as needed. I notice that the video timing ends up different than the initial written script. Check it out if you're curious and don't mind spoiling the story for yourself.

I've gotten some strong but good criticism that the narration is cringe. I admit that I'm also not a writer so if there are any lines that are horrible, let me know.