Charizard WITHOUT Cumshirt [WIP, sketch] (Patreon)

Original picture here!: https://www.patreon.com/posts/32849186

Apparently, this nasty, stinky fella is popular! He has been very well received and is probably my most asked-about drawn character! It makes me want to do more with him, but before I have him doing something else, I feel like that I should "complete" the old cumshirt pic by providing a shirtless version. And while I was in the neighborhood, I figured making a retracted skin version would really bring it all together! Which, yes, means a dirtier version too, because that's totally the kind of 'Zard he is. X3

But I wanted to ask you, and I do really want your feedback! I experimented with a very stretched out, overly-played-with frenulum, which you can see sagging a little bit at the end of his Richard. (Again, I apologize for having to use stupid euphemisms, but Patreon automatically flags posts for manual review if certain language is used, and I just don't f'ing need that). I kinda like it, but I'm worried it just looks distracting for others.

So please tell me what you think! I also provided an isolated comparison of what the two versions would look like.