Lugia's back! [WIP, sketch 2] (Patreon)

Update (1-5-22): Updated the base piece and added a cumshirt version! The cumshirt version is going to be fun, because as you can tell from the saliva string he's gonna be taking a big lick of the mess he's made, so I'll get to dabble with putting a big lick mark amidst the stains and crustiness. I've left the original drooly maw version for reference purposes, but I'm starting to doubt I'll use it.

It's gonna be a little while longer before I find out the status of my dead tablet. But all the stuff that I care about the most, I'm dead-set on re-drawing! While I was at MFF and giving the poll some time to finish, I started over on a sketch that was in the extremely-beginning phases of creation on the old tablet that I decided to pursue due to how it was barely past the starting stages by the time the original was lost, and it ended up as something I was fairly content with! In retrospect, it's kinda basic, but... I love drawing Lugia so damn much, I couldn't help it. ^^;

I wanted something that shows off his feet, his tailhole, and his abundantly-4skinned c*ck. And you know what? I'm not 100% happy with it. I think the shape of his 4skin is unnatural, unfitting, and has too much detail. I think I can do better with it. His tailhole is a little more detailed than the rest of him, but that part I think works. The piece has kind of a "Wanna get eaten? By which side?" feel, so that's a little more appropriate.

Speaking of hunger, there's a version with a drooly maw, which came as a result of experimenting with different actions for his head to be doing, which kinda worked on its own so I left it in. And you can bet should I continue it, there will be dirtier versions with his c*ck and paws!

What do you think? Think the 4skin is too much? Is the pose too similar to past stuff I've done? Any suggestions on how to make it more interesting? Is it even worth continuing?