Brooklyn [WIP, cel shading 1] (Patreon)

Welp... this is my attempt at cel shading. I'm... not sure about it. Seriously, it's not that I'm necessarily having doubts, I actually am having trouble analyzing this one objectively for some reason. =S What do you think?

(Just hit me that there are a couple small mis-colored and unshaded areas, but... that's why it's a WIP, eh?)