WIP - First few pages of our July Entry - It's shaping up to be one HELL of an entry (I'm sorry) (Patreon)

So... we've been hard at work... This is the first few pages of our next entry. They aren't even revised yet, so maybe you'll catch a typo or two... and of course, WIP, so do tell us what you think! We'd love your feedback, and have some time to change it still :D