Home
Creators
Search Recent Missing Random
Posts
Search DMs Popular Hash Lookup Tags Random
Importer
Import FAQ
Register Favorites Keys Review DMs Logout
Community
Telegram ThePornDude
Home Creators Posts Import Register Favorites Logout

Dress to Undress: Page 8 (Patreon)

Published:
2016-09-15 20:26:28
Imported:
2026-06
haven't archived this post yet. have a subscription? use the importer!

Content

I had a lot of trouble trying to get the feel of this page right, it's supposed to be an emotional part of the story but I doesn't seem quite right. Honestly I'm tired of working on it

free post since since it was paid for last month

Files

Previews only

Comments

Asriel

I think you did fine. On its own it is a little difficult to understand, but within the context of the prior page it actually works quite well. Unless a reader skips a page It works well. It is a comic after all.

Russell Benton

I think it's great, I'm on a cliff hanger right now, you did great on an emotional level.

Daddy Bearcat

It looks good. The only thing I can think of would have been to have him do something other than repeat Finnick's name. Maybe make some confused noises or ask him what's wrong after he realizes that he's starting to cry...

David Ihnen

I'm really enjoying this story, its lovely and seems to really develop the characters. I wish you lots of hugs and encouragement to complete it.

xdrakex

I think it will become more emotional (not that it isnt already) once we find out the reason he cries for D:

Zack Goos

Don't worry! This has come out clear enough! ;)

Captainkelvin

I think it looks pretty great! I wonder if Nick shook Finnick in a 'snap out of it' sort of way would have helped? But like I said it still looks fucking great. :)