Pretty 3 rework? (Patreon)

Hey! Last time, I talked about a rework of the third chapter I said that I wouldn't do it, cause I was proud of it (still do), but recently I read it again and can't stop thinking that I can do a lot better with the story, lewdness, and panel construction. Maybe you guessed it (I don't know if I already said it) but I want to print all the chapters, and really want to do a good physical version of it.

The actual plan is: Redo the cover (I already did a sketch) and add new pages at the start, like a foreword.

And I really want to know your opinion! I'll ask on tw and tg eventually but I want to ask you guys first