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wew these took longer than intended. its due the fact that theres so many characters in each of these scenes! but man am I enjoying making this all work, the shot compesitions, the dialogue it all works out flawlessly >:3

I had one more page lined up to be sketched, but I think it needs a little more prep for the next scene. orchestrating 9 peeps around is just better done when you know where the scene specifically is going.

I also did some more sketches in the meantime, but I didn't want to hide those under a spoiler warning X) so I will export and upload those tomorrow

you can find all the sketched pages for this comic over here: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1G0b4TynTE3zU46OrO16cDGjSZyyl2f5A?usp=sharing

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Richard Adam

This is ramping up fast. I love it. You always amaze me that even the story board sketches look so great. I can actually read them unlike a lot of artist. Can’t wait for more.

Xfiles

You can see the enjoyment in every page, they all look great and a lot of fun :-D! Can't wait to see the fully realized pages because I have a hard time differentiating between all the characters in sketch form. I do have some dialogue feedback for you if you are interested: page 11, 2nd panel, the word this is broken up into "T{new line}his", reads a bit weird. page 15, 1st panel, I think the official spelling is "you know", but I'm not 100% sure about that. page 15, 2nd panel, it might just be me, but it feels like the dialogue in that panel doesn't flow right, but I'm not sure what a good fix for it would be. Maybe "..you guys seeing it all if you.." or "..you guys seeing it if you.."? page 15, 5th panel, I believe it should be "can't"?

Djannetur

I really like all this amazing emotions, on every page! on every panel! They are beautiful ❤️

Draco D

it's a pity that we can't write very big otherwise I would have put at the maximum size a single: UWU

Jellyfang

AAAWWWWWW HERE IT GOES

Elizabeth Holley

dang, this stuff always gets me blushing, I wish I had her confidence sometimes

Diego P

Martin is such a goof, he's so curious it's very endearing... I hope he gets fucked by Rose XD