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14 new pages! I've included the other sketched pages just so this reads properly from the last page released, but the new ones start at 45

took me a little longer than a week, had some stuff happen inbetween. but gosh these are good! >:3

I will have another draft over the text once I get to coloring the pages. let me know if you see typos or other text stuff that seems wrong, in pages 45 onward. I am dyslexic after all, a couple more eyes on it can never hurt!

you can also find all the sketches over here for easier reading: Drive Link 

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Draco D

FIRST >:3c

Morgy

oh my god i love this so much >///<

Maplesoftfox

That last question is such a cliffhanger~

OberonAelfric

Things are getting real hot in there ~

Draco D

WE NEED TO PAY THIS ARTIST MUCH MORE ! AAAA (reaaaaally good spoil :DDD)

Kiko

THIS IS EXCELLENT!

Justice Taylor

Omg! OMG! After page 58 will any of them get to feel the shape of Rose’s balls?

freashtoast16

Aaaaaah this is so nice!!! Love where this is going!!!

Diego P

Martin might die here XD

Unhelpful

These are so good! p47, "there's so much comming out" -> coming ? p48, "Adam is totaly looking at me" -> totally p52, "Sophies girl" -> Sophie's p55, "infront" -> in front (maybe just spaced closely?) p58, "it's do different" -> it's so different

Dawnyan

Now it's getting juicy! also some proofreading things/suggestions~ - page 40: "are they really curious about what's in my pants?" - added apostrophe in 'what's', also suggest adding 'about' "they must be teasing me. is it all a prank?" - added full stop between me and is - page 47: "there's so much coming out" - correct typo in coming ('comming') - page 50: "I... I will come in front of everyone" - put space between 'in' and 'front' (not 'infront') - page 52: "s-sharing cum in front of everyone!" - put space between 'in' and 'front' (not 'infront') - page 57: "wait, so you do stuff like this often?" - suggested re-wording of the first speech bubble - page 58: "it's so different" - correct typo (from "it's do different")

Lydia Scribe

Oh my god, I love watching her melt into a little puddle while watching the tape. Especially with the hearts floating over her head... :D

Mango

Oh gosh, these pages are so good ;///; Well worth the wait!