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on Full Display sketches page 59 - 64 (Patreon)

Published:
2023-01-31 22:25:22
Imported:
2026-06
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these are all sketch pages from the current colored page onward, the new sketches are at the end.

I only managed to do 6 and a half pages this time, I spent most of my time writing the ending and thumbnailing 21 new pages. and then I got slightly ill. luckily I still had 12 sketched pages for the comming months.

I will color the first of these pages by friday!

you can find all the sketched pages for the whole comic over here: Drive Link 

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Draco D

« Wait, we can touch her anywhere ? » Rose *suprise* - ah ? Sophie - Yes~ YEEEEES THAT’S WHAT WE BEGGING FOOOR :DDDDD

Jacob Phillips

Typo on top right of page 58? Should be so instead of do? "It's so different"

Shinya Sahaku

The amount of expression on rose is just....... Superb. I just love looking at her expressions as she's more into the moment

Xfiles

Hopefully you are feeling better! But the story so far is really good and very enjoyable, looking forward to seeing the colored pages ^__^! Here are a few dialogue suggestions. Do with them as you please ^__^ page 58 - panel 2 (top right) : "It's do different", I'm assuming you meant "It's to different" or as Jacob Phillips suggested: "It's so different"? Page 51 - panel 11 (bottom right): "You'd like this?" It feels a little bit off, but I'm also not sure what your intent is with that line. It couldn't be fine, just not sure. Page 63 - panel 1: "All the hands" possible alternative: "All these hands" Page 63 - panel 6 (bottom middle): "I'm dizzy with this!" it feels a little bit of, maybe "I'm getting dizzy from this" can also work?

Matsy

Hope you get well soon! These next pages are fantastic!

Diego P

Yes, Martin get handsy my man!

Reid York

As fantastic as always! Been waitin for this for quite a while and it's just as good as I'd imagined!

Codebracker

Wow, a hands-on presentation

FloofyPatootie

God just reading this makes me feel dizzy. You really capture that feeling so perfectly

Parrik

*dies*