Legend face rework page 1 of new comic (Patreon)

The first is the face I’m going with and the second is the one I sadly had to erase. It didn’t fit what I wanted for the scene despite not being horrible. It just didn’t feel right. Was very stiff and unemotional. I was scared to start it over but I’m glad I did. The new face feels a lot better. Don’t be scared to start something over in your drawing if it doesn’t feel right. You gotta trust that you’ll figure it out. Something I’m still trying to learn.