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Hey kids, here's a sneak peek at one of them LONG stories I was promising you. The first 1000 words to be precise!

Also, I'm looking for a quicker, snappier title. Feel free to post suggestions in the comments below!

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Laptop Suc

What I like the most about the current title is the assumptions I made based on it matched up perfectly with what I see so far. And it feels pretty snappy to me with the words being just one syllable (except "Better" with two). Maybe "Fatter was Better", "Finding the Weight Back", or "She Lost Her Weight"; though I like the original title more than these.

Kestrel

I really like the current title, tbh. It's super evocative!

Caker19

very nice concept, looking forward to it.

richman92

Honestly, the title is OK. You could potentially shorten it to Better Fat. Anyway, I am looking forward to the story. Yo-yo WG is not my favorite trope but it will do :)