Tamberlane: Print File Feedback Needed! (Patreon)

Hey guys! I'm just about ready to send Tamberlane to print! However, I've stared at this file constantly for a few months now, and I can no longer find my own errors. So I would super appreciate any feedback you have!

Particular things to watch out for: 

Typos, poor grammar, missed character  features (like Tess's scar), etc.

Enjoy :D And thank you so much in advance!

ETA: Page numbering got a bit fucky in InDesign and I'm not sure how to fix it, but at least it's not a huge problem. All that matters is people being able to flip to the right page if need be.