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Hello. This scene was pretty long but I enjoyed writing O's POV. There are some things I had to be vague about due to spoilers but I hope you enjoy. As usual, if there are errors, I'm all ears! I have a few more things I'm working on + Chapter 5! Have a good rest of your day/night. :)

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Will Landrum

Yeeeah! Gotta love more writing!

koma

Amy, how do we know that O is our main romance?

Amy

It's just a question to decide whether you have high stats with O or not. It only changes a few lines so I'd go based on whether you've been choosing a lot of romance options with them or not :) Sorry I wasn't clear!

Queen Hajinari

“ He's not very hard to please when it comes to her. Pathetic.” If MC knew how down bad everyone actually was for them, they wouldn’t have the generational crashout building in them 😭😭😭 Everyones POV is “I should stay away but I can't because they're so interesting-and perfect and-” meanwhile MC is like “If I drown myself now will the contract still apply?” 😭😭

koma

I can't with them. O Quinn.... when I get you. It's so good. If I can make a request, could you give us a POV of all the band members + O during the swap song vote? I need it

rala

"went straight to his pants" had me kicking my feet giggling

Amy

I was going to be more explicit but I didn't think it was worth tagging this as NSFW for like 2 lines but yk…the meaning is CLEAR lolol

Amy

Amazing request!!! I'll keep that in mind!

rala

LOL i would've *loved* it but i get the hesitation. God bless u for letting us rile up O's prissy ass while they try (and fail) to remain their composure 🙏🙏

fran

you know the O POV is gonna be crazy when it’s only the third paragraph in and ori is dropping lines like “i have never thought about anyone this much, even while married” like HELLO?????

lunelic

'"Twenty jumping jacks," he orders and immediately starts doing them. "Go and sing while you're doing it."' '"Ooh," you tease. "I like when you're demanding."' 'The words shoot straight to the inside of his pants and he immediately starts thinking of the one time his parents had food poisoning and he had to take look after them. Yeah. Disgusting. Exactly.' 'Orion is just a man. This is all it is. It means nothing.' okay....... yeah no totally. totally totally of course seeing o slowly get more affected my an obvious crush mc's flirtation is so satisfying. like yeah tell me more about how you don't usually get this flustered when it comes to mc oh yeah

Sheryl

Hey Amy can O stop emotionally hurting me for two seconds, k thx-- (been waiting for this POV SO bad, love love love)

lu

They are down so bad!! I love you O

FlamingFlyingV

ugh Y E S. I am living for O being as down bad as the MC

jade

As someone that ate straight sand and lost the race I am very pleased to know we can win🤣

Lemon

While I adore O's romance route the close platonic relationship they can have with the MC is so heartwarming. O gives protective older sibling vibes which is so precious and something I feel a lot of Mcs could desperately use💕

TastyPieceOfPastry

"Something hot settles in the pit of his stomach and he scolds himself out of whatever attraction he just felt over [MC] surprising obedience." I reflexively threw my phone and squeaked and that wasn't even the most "!!!!!" passage in this POV. Geez. A genuine, blunt MC just starving for someone that loves/cares about them to choose them and express that sentiment explicitly and then desperately clinging to crumbs because everyone's like "The best thing for MC is for them to suffer in a swirly twirly pit of undeserved loneliness that is illuminated by gaslights." My angst meter has been thoroughly replinished and will sustain me til the next content. Also just from the perspective of enjoying your prose, "Orion takes it easy at first to give [MC] time to loosen up. He doesn't mind starting slowly;. " Ya girl loves a good subtle parallel.

chocolatezz

I'm crying Amy. I want to shake Orion so hard, but also just hug them and tell them they're worthy of love. Aaaahh

Marius

OH YESSS i was waiting for this POV. O,,,, my beloved,,,,,,

Sadie

THE CH.4 POVS ARE STARTING! my body is ready. And apparently so is O's when it comes to MC. 🥴 O my precious. determined mc blitzing through the sand to win the race O: why do I hear boss music lmao Ty for the food Amy ahh

shnnns

the absolute emotional whiplash of o yearning so bad and holding themselves back from even *acknowledging* what they feel for mc vs the way mc can be completely heartbroken and so certain that o doesnt feel anything for them at all at the end of the chapter is going to send me into an early grave thank you so much

Alex T.

“The last remaining brain cells in his head are screaming at him to pull back, to stop this moment that he feels is growing in intensity. At least for him. He can't. He doesn't want to. He never does anything he wants. Just this once…” OH MY GOD!!!! “He never does anything he wants” THIS MAN IS GOING TO SNAP IN HALF. This is the type of man who is great at repressing himself until that oonnneee thing sends him careening over the edge. And mc is going to wake up the next day with their back blown OUT.

Alex T.

Listen,, I just wanna validate O like. At EVERY step. Being blunt and genuine probably would help ease their mind a ton because it’s like “well if I want something from you I’ll just ask. And if you do something to hurt me I’ll just tell you and we can adjust”

Alex T.

Also I’m loving the difference in obsession between O and 7. Os obsession is like. Super romantic and sweet?? Meanwhile 7’s obsession feels akin to how Thomas Jefferson had a bust made of his enemy that he just kept to look at and seethe with rage.

Void

is the scene where u trip during the race still real? i tried multiple options to see if it happens here but i’m also realizing i don’t even know if it’s in da actual game still LOL i know if was in the sneak peek but i don’t think i actually got the scene in the full release and it’s putting my mind ina spin wondering if i jus don’t have the right variables or what lolol but anyway this was so delicious either way, o is sucha freak in sucha good way i love being in their head hehehe

sevy

o is so cute 🥰

emisse

ugh the yearning! O you are perfect in every way! thank you for the food!

Renata G.

If only you saw me lose my shit when my friends texted me ‘you about to die’ and you know what? Exactly what happened. Genuine loved this POV for many reasons, but ofc all of them will come to O Quinn (I’ll refer to Orion since it’s a bit easier for me as I got M!O). My MC is actually a bit of an arrogant diva (she’s just confident!!! She knows when to step down but hey!!!) with an ego that the whole band makes fun of in the best way (“I have an ego—” and everyone going “We know”). I mean, gotta love yourself if your parents don’t give a shit and your lover left you (gotta push self love to not drown in misery). So having Orion constantly be like ‘If you were someone else, you’d be insufferable’ and my MC just eating it up with some readings like ‘So you think I’m special?’. But then she slams Orion with warmer moments like how she appreciates his company and I love seeing the POV of O when she does that. It’s so great to watch O think, yearn, struggle, and want. Like someone in the comments said ‘This is a type of man that can repress himself until one thing that pushes him over the edge and MC is gonna have fun with that 🫡’. Genuinely loved the insights on how silly Orion can be with the race, having fun and just enjoying himself because the previous POVs about the phone call and stress got me so sad. That’s why seeing O just have a grant time with MC is so sweet! The way my MC had to win and O being mildly terrified was soooo funny. I love these instances of sillies that go well with the general banter a teasing out an obvious crush MC has w/O. The banter is my everything ngl. AND OFC the inner want and desire that O got for MC? The lessons? The ‘does he have a fetish for this’? O WE SAW UR SPICY WRITING ON TUMBLR!!! NOT THE FIRST TIME!!! (Cheeky bastard indeed) he totally has a thing for rules breaking somewhere there im wheezing screaming. Also not him acknowledging he’ll do many things to get MC to talk to him as in doing that dazzling smile and being alluring (the ‘is he an idiot?’ got me laughing out loud). Very smart, Mr. Quinn, very smart. If anyone can tame my ambitious flirty/teasing yet professional/competitor MC it’s you Mr. Orion Quinn. ✨👍

A sandwich

Get MC into a lab because the gravitational pull they have on the ROs needs to be studied. 🧐 We are watching O's emotions spaghettify in real time.

Amos

I love to see a hyper O. Seeing that side of them is really fun- even if it means losing the race lol.

e

i think amy cut it out for the final cut! it was def there during the sneak peek but gone when the chapter was released!

Ellie

LMAO please yall "if I drown myself now will the contract still apply?" followed up the Thomas Jefferson shrine of loathing has me rollinnng 😂

Ellie

O Quinn has approximately three threads left before they pounce on MC. and my obviously crushing, blatantly flirting gremlin of an MC is here with scissors :}

Queen Hajinari

MC has everyone head over heels meanwhile they look like this “🫩” and think everyone hates them

Alynta

O is such an amazing character 💖 I honestly started out the first chapter not liking them (how dare I 😂). Seven is my main romance, but O has definitely captured my heart. The banter and chemistry between the MC and O is just the best!

Void

oh rip to our kdrama moment, at least i kno i didn’t hallucinate it now hehe

PrincessDummy

"She's never spent so much time thinking about another person. Not even when she was married." AAAAAAHAHAHAHA, INSANE The way my jaw dropped when I read this, like come ON, O is down SO BAD!!! Getting inside O's head is such a blast — truly having the absolute time of my life knowing my MC isn't the only one falling ass over heels

Bi Bubble tea

MC thinks because their parents don’t care about them like a good parent should, that no one must care about them, but they walk around all the time like that “Meet the Robinsons” meme where the villain guy is like “Everyone hated me…” and all the other characters are like “Hi MC!” “Wanna come over my house MC??”

Bi Bubble tea

Omg what choice is the fetish line from???

Bi Bubble tea

Yes!! This is the route I chose! Closed off but caring older brother and slightly feral but sweet younger sister vibes, it’s so peak. My MC is so attached to him and he doesn’t even realize, like if he left, she’d just quit music because she doesn’t want to do it without him as her manager, she doesn’t trust anyone as much as she trusts him, and somehow he still thinks he’s a failure 😭😭😭 O PLEASE

Bi Bubble tea

My favorite parts: “When her voice trails off, Orion says, "I know this is hard, Lydia. " He frowns. "You can always just"—he pauses-"pull the plug. You know that, right?" This tour isn't worth sacrificing her peace of mind. Suddenly, the tour means nothing to him.” Dialogue option: "That would be unprofessional. I agreed to this and I'll see it through." He can't bite back his smile. Briefly, his pride is so strong all of his concerns die away. There's something satisfying about seeing parts of himself in Lydia. When they're on the same page, it feels like he's doing something right. "You're right," he replies, "though it was just a suggestion. Better that than getting lost at sea." The joke doesn't do much for him; it only makes him feel worse.” Also “Ruin...? Lydia has no idea how friendship works, apparently. Her parents have done a number on her and for that, Orion will always harbor a certain hatred for them. With that said, that experience shouldn't leak into her relationship with the band. They're completely different.”

Bi Bubble tea

Honorary mention to “Orion just wants to know Lydia isn't hurting. "I don't know, okay? I'm fine, I guess." His eyes peer at her face. "Are you just saying that?" He knows Lydia too much to accept such a response without question.” Dialogue option: “"No." You lie.” “He knows Lydia is lying. He can see it in his eyes. Orion can read the lead-singer like the back of his hand. Has Lydia forgotten how long it's been? His entire life revolves around her. "You're lying," he declares. "But I'll let you have it this time."” O is such a softie I love them

Renata G.

upon re-read when i'm more conscious and not semi-asleep, the line was more about the fact that O dated their co-worker before and how ironic it was how out of millions of people they like MC who is also... well, works with them lmao. their ex-spouse was also their coworker, so i guess it's more of a self irony of 'what is with my taste' lmao. the line is if you have an ambitious/arrogant mc with an obvious crush (as i play). if you choose 'guess you're too good for everyone else' and then choose 'aside from me' and that line comes up. > Too unfortunate. There's billions of people in the world and it's [MC] that he feels most comfortable with. His client. The person he works for. Works with. > Again and again. Maybe he has a fetish for this shit.

willow143

I swear to god when my MC and Ori both finally crack (secret crush route) they're not coming out of her hotel room for a week, FUCK the show!!! MY MC AND HIM ARE REPRESSING SO MUCH ALL THE TIME LET THEM HAVE THIS!!!!!

willow143

also once again obviously thank you Amy for the delicious food I squealed when I saw the notification for the post I just hadn't commented till now MWAH

moala

this POV just made me imagine a world where MC did give up music... i know Ori would be crushed. they're so horrendously down bad ALSO THIS?? HELLO I CANT BREATHE "The words shoot straight to the inside of his pants and he immediately starts thinking of the one time his parents had food poisoning and he had to take look after them. Yeah. Disgusting. Exactly. Orion is just a man. This is all it is. It means nothing."

Vanessa Mesquita

Okay! You don't have to do it (obviously) but list of POVs i'm hoping for this charter because would be SO FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN: Sev and Blake/band conversation on the bus Band watching MC choosing UW instead of SV Staged scene band August talk Dakota pool scene (specially because i know that will be one for Griffin and im curious about romanced Dakota POV with a romanced Griffin) Orion coffee shop Orion seeing the lack of clothes on MC (LOL) Pope/ Kieran and/or Ansel/ Jane bands gathering! Avina when band is looking for Sev

Renata G.

O seeing the lack of clothes on mc about to get nsfw-ed XDD based on this beach pov? our manager about to bluescreen and repress every thought known to man and go into buddhism to reach enlightenment.

Vanessa Mesquita

I just laughed so hard at your comment that my boss asked whats wrong with me

moala

omg help me out!! am i crazy, when did Orion see MC like that?

Vanessa Mesquita

When MC and band went to the beach to shoot the advantage choice. O got all flustered and then sat next to Vic.

McFloss

Definitely need to see O’s thoughts after MC reads their messages

Dani

pls I need the O POV of MC reading their texts....I need more O crumbs....

Ellie

sorry, replaying everything because I'm unwell but: the second "i have other ways" flirt dialogue doesn't quite match up with the actual text. nbd just happened to notice!

Pin

omg... O is so lovely. 🥰😍😘

vivi

working through all of ori's povs (romance), and it's such a mix of charming and hilarious and upsetting. i never got the impression while reading the normal text that ori genuinely hates themself, but through the povs i've noticed that crop up again and again. they constantly think of themself as useless for anything except work, believe that they don't deserve good things including love, that they'll ruin everything they touch with clumsy words or just the way they are, all of that despite the fact they really need to feel *needed.* they're so professional that not even the reader can pick up on their true feelings! and it's really sad! in a great way, obviously. i love the way they're written also, i knew that ori was reciprocating mc's feelings even though they have trouble admitting/dealing with that, but i didn't realize it was so intense on their side. ori is unironically just fully *obsessed* with mc. spitting lines like "[he] doesn't care about anyone else" and "this tour means nothing if it's hurting [mc]" as well as mentioning how ori's constantly thinking of mc and worrying about mc and wants to know everything about mc. obviously it's their job to think about these things but not to THIS extent. honestly they are the monarch of denial because buddy i hate to tell you this but you have crossed not only every single professional line, but your adoration for them is straight up an unhealthy fixation. i fear o quinn has no idea how to do anything halfway... on that topic, one of the povs, i think the viewing party chat one, mentions that ori's thought about mc several times in their hotel room alone at night and that was. wow. okay. do you hear your own thoughts ori because... they're always saying "i'm just their manager" but as mc can say in chapter 5, if every manager thought like this, there would be a LOT of hr concerns. not to mention how possessive they are? their need for control? oh my god. enjoying it when mc takes a leaf of responsibility out of their book, liking when mc leans on them and takes their advice, getting *a little too excited* when mc is obedient and says that they like it when ori's demanding. when i read the line "if [mc] allows it, [orion] would take [their] whole life into [his] hands" i nearly died on impact basically, i love these povs so so much. i already adored ori but i do even more now

whitneys_pet

ahhh 1) thinking of MC as "his lead singer" help I'm deceased and 2) I knew I was picking up on Dom O vibes lol