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Seven's Bus Chat is here and whew it was a doozy for me. I actually started getting a headache because of how emotionally draining Seven can be sometimes. I needed to take a tiny break lol.

 It's 4.9K words and I didn't realize how many words that is until now. 4.9K words, very little coding. It's quite a bit haha 

As always, if there are errors, please lmk. I've been slacking on that, mostly because Part 2 has my priority. Hope you enjoy! 

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EvilChani

Weird thing near the beginning. Shown below: The more he analyzes, though, the more he can't fight down the urge to speak. Riley is a mystery to him, a mystery he can't help but want to uncover. Maybe if he finds answers to the questions he's been bottling up for years, he can finally just...put it to rest. The voices in his head will finally quiet down. He can just forget Riley once and for all. "" He speaks before $he can convince himself otherwise. He can't handle the tension, the unsaid words between them. It's not even his fault. He was here first, but now that Riley's here, He's not going to waste the opportunity to ask the question that's been gnawing at him since they got on the bus.

EvilChani

Also random comma on the first page: And Soft Violence is forced to share a bus with , a group of people

sleepingcrows

Seven, babe please, just let MC talk to you 😭 things don’t have to be this way

tibs

seven is so delusional on god we gon get you some therapy 🙏🏾

olive

being in seven’s head is certainly an experience……….. my mc is not out to get you!!!!!!! she’s still in love with you for some reason!!! this is gonna be an uphill battle 🥲like we knew that but with every seven pov im hit in the face with it 🥲

EvilChani

Well, you made me feel something other than loathing for Seven, which is impressive at this point (my MC doesn't share my dislike of them). I do like the irony or Seven whining about how grown up they are because they don't follow the MC like a puppy when that's exactly what they do with Avina and can't function without Avina right by their side. Also love how Avina's jealousy (the fallen expression) goes right over Seven's head.

Kao

OK OK I'm fine (NOT). This is like the first time i've REALLY felt Seven's hatred for MC 💔 Like yeah it's complicated but damn, this made me really realize how much resentment and hate they harbour for MC. I really do wonder how they'll get back from that, how their feelings will shift toward love once again. It's gonna be hard for both sides after all this. Anyway, this is the saddest and most heartbreaking pov for me yet... There were some soft parts tiding me over, but know that i'm going to bed with a broken heart and tears in my eyes 😭😭

Bella Soleil

IM LOSING MY MIND WAKSHSIASJKA 😭😭😭

mya!

seven telling mc theyre not funny like i know you wanna let out a little giggle stop 😋

Ashleigh

Oh, Seven Lawless, you are such a mess but you're my mess❤️

Little Rock

"Because I have never gotten over us" (exes). End my suffering. Flay me emotionally right here.

Paris

Yep after reading hm seven hates mc I’m glad I chose to have mc share a bus with UW haha. Ignorance is bliss and all that lmao

lem

another banger about 7 being the most normal guy (gender-neutral) alive 🔥🔥 (going to turn them into mulch)

Jacqueline

Can't wait for the day Seven realizes my MC is just genuinely being nice and doesn't hate them.

Astral

Ive been playing as a MC who has been nice and voted for them to stay, so im super curious to see what makes seven comes to the realization that there being a huge door knob lol Will throw extra money for a pov

Nameless Dandelion

I swear, Hate You by Jungkook is so Seven-coded "Hating you is the only way it doesn't hurt~"

Roman

Can't wait till we address how hurtful/damaging it is that Seven just assumes malicious intent from (everyone) MC. That's the self-destructive part of anxiety talking Seven! You are not a good mind reader! Stop projecting!

Screeching Banshee

I wish I could read it! The link appears to be broken