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Hey everyone!

This week I’ve been focused on writing the Queen route for Chapter 6. One thing I’ve been thinking about is how Kasumi’s route currently has more characters, which makes the two routes feel a bit unbalanced. Kasumi is also a dateable character, which adds to her side’s weight.

Part of the imbalance is due to the side story polling. Nene, Raven, Mika, Ayane, they all have their own stories. So far Queen only has Lisa and Megumi.

To help balance things out, I had been planning on fleshing out queen a lot more in chapter 6. For one I’m introducing a new character to the Queen route. She has been requested for a while by one of our Ultra Tier supporters. Meet Karina.

Karina is an experienced nurse with a detached demeanor. She mostly works with elderly patients and will be introduced into the Queen route as Harumi begins expanding serum trials to older subjects. I think she’ll add an interesting dynamic to the story.

Some lines I already wrote for her are

karina "Difficult patients? You mean the ones who actually have personalities left?"

karina "I'm the nurse. If something goes wrong, call the doctor. If they die, call the coroner. Simple."

Queen will also have the 'test subject' girls. Ryouko which we already saw in the last chapter and a new elderly which I will show off more probably in next weeks post.

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On another note, I’ve seen a lot of interest in adding a female bodybuilder. Someone who is already huge before touching the serum. I’ve been workshopping some designs, and I’ve landed on what I think hits the mark. The vibe is a mature tomboy, strong and confident.

She will first appear as an onlooker during the gym dates. When I say onlooker I mean it. She won't be getting much story in chapter 6 since I need to keep the scope in check. But planting her now will result in her being viable for side stories or future encounters in the game.

Let me know what you think of the design! It's not final and some super supporters already said they prefer a different hairstyle.

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As for the side story poll from last week, Kaz is winning! I will still leave the poll open for a week so there is a chance for a turnaround. If you're a super supporter, make sure you vote!

If Kaz ends up winning, then it's like we’re speedrunning through the entire teacher roster haha. The next side story will be made after Chapter 6, which gives me room to build her up a bit in the main game before she gets the spotlight.

That’s it for this week. Thanks again for all the support and ideas. You all help shape this project in awesome ways.

- Jon

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Gustavo Chireno

I think is great to have a full bodybuilder touching the serum, interesting story there. She looks really nice, btw

TheScorpion613

I do like the concept of the bodybuilder girl but that looks a lot more like an addition for the wrestler girl roster and not a deticated bodybuilder imo. If you look at the real life womens physique and womens bodybuilding divisions, they look way different.

chrysaliscraft

I already love karina. Cute and cynical, my favorite!

Major Silent

Female bodybuilders usually have nice, long hair, whether they are tomboys or not. I love when they sweep their long hair out of the way between poses. Seems like a missed opportunity to not make it someone more like the IFBB Wellness division. Just my take though! I love what you're doing. Keep it up!

Jam555

I would love to see the female bodybuilder with long hair. You often see them with short hair in other media and i think a hairstyle with long hair (maybe a viking style plait) would be cool. And maybe giving her hard natural pecs as most bodybuilders have them. And there arent enough girls with small boobs or muscular pecs in the story in my opinion. And she would be a perfect choice for pecs.👍🏻

Erk Tavuk

I like the design of the FBB. The tomboyish style hair I like a lot. Only the nose plaster gives me some fighter vibes, I mean she's a FBB in the end. I like the boobs size. Maybe make a good fusion with strong pecs and boobs.

Kono

I guess Kaz will try to use some exercise and bodybuilding slang now. But no one will get it. XD

bbx99

I'd prefer a long haired, more feminine fbb