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Hello!Many people asked to add a sound for my last Patreon exclusive animation (the one in the pool) and I thought it may be a nice idea BUT I feel like that animation might be too short for a sound.So I thought - maybe to add another scene there? And I will ask you for a help then - suggest what scene I can add? :3 I thought it might be fun to you to participate in such decision! I will choose one to my liking giving more preferences to a most popular suggestions - so don't forget to comment or like the ones you would also prefer in the comments! It can be anything, not too long pls (since I still work on a Cownapping animation x3 so it doesn't take too much time from the pipeline), can place the scene in any number even in between the existing scenes ofc!

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EnK_

Honestly, I feel the animation is as fine as-is in terms of length. But sound would be the last thing to make it absolutely perfect! Don't overwork yourself, and thank you for your hard work <3

MrHoneyPaws

And that’s how with good trajectory you can calculate anything!

Darkglass

Maybe some titty grabbing in between the pussy and cum scene?

Loki the angry dwarf

Now, I would loooove to see them fuck more... Buy given that it is them and they are in the pool, him collapsing on top of her and them both tipping into the water seems more like a fun progression 😂🥰

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Bj scene

Robert B

Maybe right before where he dives into the pool and while he’s under the water, she takes off her bikini and when he pops up right in front of her, he sees it exactly where it’s floating then it picks up right where the exclusive start starts.

Improper Ow77

I think sounds a good idea maybe you could add a scene where he cums and accidentally makes her fall off the tube into the water I also think some tit grabbing would be awesome

Guardian

Another scene?! DID I DIE AND GOTO HEAVEN FOR DOUBLE EXCLUSIVES

TheEnderPrince

Hmm I know that it never usually added for a Patreon Exclusive but maybe a scene of Rouen entering Liz and the facial expressions of them feeling it? Idk but just a thought. Can't wait to see this Patreon Exclusive with sound regardless of what scene is added

smile

Aggred, it is to short for an sound but if you want to add an additional part (number 4 that you posted for example), it would be nice to see how it ended, hoping your eye is getting better now.

Obsideonstar

Oral cleanup, perhaps? Wouldn't want her dripping all that in the pool after all.

Graystripe

Itd be nice to have an intro where you see rou take off her swimsuit bottoms and liz toss her top in the water. Also another angle from behind rou with liz's paws up would be cute

Draco Eclipse

A PoV from 1 or both of their's perspectives.

Graystripe

This would be a cute ending

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Да тут даже продолжение не надо, по моему мнению, здесь всё идеально. Но лично от меня, у меня была бы идея, чтобы ты нарисовала какую-нибудь историю про эту анимацию. Это было бы очень интересно. Мне просто очень нравится анимации с сюжетом:3. История, где рассказывается, как всё произошло. Это было бы очень интересно. Но только возможно, это может занять 3 и более минуты. Ну или можно эпичный финал, как Рунн и Лиз выходят с бассейна, и как они идут домой зная, что их никто не потревожил, и всё прошло хорошо. Ну или очень интересное начало. А звук можно взять любой, и это идеально

Astrik

Maybe surprise anal finish? Or maybe an impregnation shot

Improper Ow77

Exactly cute and hot sounds like them

taylor Allen

What's the honestly it'll it's perfect in my opinion I honestly would love an animation involving all the gifts in their places they've gone to like a scrapbook. That shows where all they've been would be kind of cool. But also just in general yeah you do amazing always and I

Peridot

I'm down for sound for any animation

Crimnim

A cunnilingus scene would really stand out

Fori

Ooh! Have Liz half up in the water with Rou's cock between her tits!

The Alchemist

I got two ideas. First is maybe an intro scene where Liz teases or flashes Rouen, and he pins her on the pool tube? Basically showing why they’re doing it in the pool in the first place? Second is to have an internal view section in the middle of it, just to extend the length of it.

Adam Finley

Honestly it might be kind of funny to see them interact in a changing room prior or even after? Just keep making the great art is all I ask!

D4v1D

If you're looking for a story (maybe to add up to the previous double dare one) you could do smt like a hot day trip to a park or like swimming park or whatever it is on english😅from there on talking about all the additional sex scenes everyone else made alot of suggestions already, everything I'd say will probably already be mentioned

St0rm r0ck

Have June witness the whole thing. As if it's connected to the cow napping video. That or have have one of your characters notice them as they walk by.

Frazzi

Yes was cool a 5 min long

Ruby Jewels

Definitely add another scene!

Scorpion

Эйприл, можешь пожалуйста посмотреть лс (если конечно найдëшь время и желание)?

Trixie Lulamoon

Him collapsing on her and they both fall into the pool immediately after. ^^

dualpulse

🫧 Underwater blowjob ftw!

Blu Sky

The idea of a intro by Graystripe is wonderful and the ending by Impoper Ow77 is comedic. I think that the ending should have a loving romantic ending like kiss and huge as they relaxe relaxe.

birthofneferpbee

Shit I'm late, but nobody took my idea yet. I was thinking to add Layla peeping in the bushes, dressed as something like a janitor and of course fingering herself 🤤 I agree with the titty grabbing idea too, but the pool scene looks perfect as it is too mee, but a goon-peeping scene looks like a cherry on top, for me

Blu Sky

Ya could interesting sets the foundation for something bigger in the future. Layla might be in love with the two. Good idea.

kacperoid

As many suggested an intro scene of how they ended in that situation would be nice and a tidy grab or a comic ending scene would ve nice.

Arrow Moonpaw

Absolutely love your work! What about a pov from her perspective, watching her breasts bounce/ jiggle and watching him enjoying himself.

bill

Maybe we add a changing room to deepen the story and give a more fluids feel if we do a full animation

Caedus Ustrina

I like everyones idea of them somehow flopping and ending up in the water. Like Rou tries to kiss her and then they DO A BARREL ROLL into the water. (Then we see angy chibi liz)

Miyuki Miya

Mabie an oral scene? You could allso use some of the existing scenes aswell and just replay them to extend it a little bit more?

HunterX

How about you scare them with the birds again? Like in the rooftop animation since they are in a public area.

Colord44

Nah, too predictable. Even if it is cute, Maybe more like a sweet kiss

Colord44

Agree. We don't need aditional scene, just extend the first angle a bit more

Colord44

Except that doesn't sound like them as they're both straight I think. Plus in double dare, and any time he's climaxed in her, that's never been a thing

Colord44

That's a bit too predictable

Colord44

Nah, they've already been spotted once, let's let the couple have their peace

Colord44

That is perfect

Colord44

Nah, no peeping, let's let the couple have their peace

Colord44

Too predictable

Colord44

Can she even tit fuck? I dont' think they're big enough

Colord44

I don't see how any of the shorts should be connected like that. Plus, I think she's got her own thing as last checked she's in an Egytpian temple

Colord44

Just looking at each other with affection

Colord44

I don't think Liz will do anal tbh and as for the second option; I don't think kids are in teh plans. Remember the bath?

Colord44

Given how this is nearly as long as this: https://e621.net/posts/6002782?q=rouen_%28eipril%29 You probably just need to extend the close up a bit and the first a little bit. But if you really want to try a different scene. Just showing them smiling as they strip, and end with a sweet romantic kiss. That would be the icing on the cake.

Blu Sky

Um that's true. wait never mind I was thinking the other liynx and the end of Double Dare. But thanks. :)

Blu Sky

ha ha that's true :)

ChocolatePI

I think a face shot of Liz with heat eyes after scene 3 would be pretty fun

Dragon Disciple

Make it brief and add a small teasing scene where he rubs his dick over her folds and she askes him to stop teasing her

Crimnim

Sounds good

Sam

Gonna agree with Graystripe and say an intro of the two dragging clothes off wucikly after some playful banter would make it all come together. Works well for added sound .

Astrik

I do see what you mean, but ever since the bathroom incident, she was getting creampied every time, so maybe a little accident could happen

Colonel Runesun

While I agree that sound certainly enhances things, it actually isn’t always necessary. Your art style and smooth animations more often than not communicate just fine if not better without it. Especially in short videos like this. This animation doesn’t need any more additions, it’s perfect as it is. But if you really want to add something, I’d rather it be what *you* want to add. Not because others are demanding more.

Lone Wolf Survivor

Yeah, could be that, it could also be he grabs her tits to force in a kiss that she accepts when they cum.

Kancen

An idea I have is where you see both of their faces during orgasm

Colord44

Kissing her yes, but forcing her? It ain't forcing if they're already so deeply in love (In fact it would be very tender and carring like when he kissed her cheek and again when they kissed in double dare).

Colord44

That's a very good point too

ZellestFox

or he could get weak knees and fall onto her x3

Fori

They're perfect for it I think. When Rou picks her up in double dare...😍

Ravingdork

Have him sneak up on her from underwater in an ode to JAWS as an intro.

Scott Young

I think they should move to the lounge chair under the umbrella. Rou would be laying on his back and looking up at Liz and she would crawl up straddling his lap and then lower herself down onto rou and ride him rough. She's facing him the entire time and complimenting him telling him how hot he is and how much she loves him and won't stop until he releases into her. We would have a back angle and a close up as she's riding him and listen to the sounds of their bodies clapping a lot.

Brandon Benson

Hard to say I feel it's perfect but also would like to see more and sound so hard to say

Its_Luigi

You could potentially add an internal x-ray scene between 2 and 4 of the video. Inspiration being from your Liz BJ video from prior.

KittyKat

I'd love to see this with sound. For the additional scene, add it at the end and have her roll over so she's laying on the innertube and he could switch to anal sex. I don't think we've had an anal scene with them with sound. At least I don't remember one.

Blu Sky

It's wonderful to see so many intrearested. :)

St0rm r0ck

Cody and Yue pass by and Yue looking at Cody expectingly.

LofiDarkness

It would be funny if she fell in after he came for a bonus scene

Blu Sky

Yep it would be. :)

Chillum

I’d like it if Rou leaned over to kiss her and touched her breast right before he cums.

Tay Vader

A beginning where it’s an undershot of Liz with just her sitting in the floaty, and we see Rou “doing a jaws” (it’s him swimming up from underneath her) then he takes off her bottoms and sticks his head out of the water between her legs, they both blush, then he starts pleasing her with his mouth… and that’s about it…

Blu Sky

By the way thanks. :)

002

Definitely make a scene where they go to patio and go another round no?

Mikie Churchill

maybe a small dick suck beforehand? or some titty grabs?

Runs With Scissors

seeing who can hold their breath the longest, leave the rest up to imagination.

Mikie Churchill

just thought of this but you could also do a top down shot where liz is looking at the camera but you can see them both from a birds eye view type thing

lilveemo1

Honestly? I’ll take anything! They are just a cute couple 🥹

Rennox

Maybe add a nice internal scene to show how well he is pumping her full?

Awdly

These two's relationship is so cute, I love seeing the work up to how they end up where they do.

Shawn Gallaway

He picks her up out of the tub e and goes to town on her

George Den

Please an anal scene of this couple it would be great i think!! 🤔