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Justice Girl: Trophy Hunter plot ideas (Patreon)

Published:
2024-07-09 20:35:19
Edited:
2024-07-09 20:35:55
Imported:
2024-07

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What would you like to see in the Justice Girl book starting in August?

More bondage? Kinky sex?

More heroine action?

More time that the heroine spends in captivity, being used and abused?

I'm thinking - unmasking, debooting (it's been requested), public humiliation.

I usually have the heroine having minor victories, then setbacks, escape only to rush into another setback. Do you want this book to continue that? I've noticed most books and videos have the heroine captured quickly, and then spend the entire story in captivity, failed escape attempts, but mostly just going from one kinky sex scene to another.

What are you're thoughts? What would you like to see? I will start writing the outline later this week, probably starting Thursday or Friday.

And yes, that is the cover. Revealed to you first.

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Comments

Sakome

I do particularly enjoy the post capture scenes, like what their life like is afterwards. One thing I don't seem to see often is the post-capture alter-ego focus. Getting a bit of that with Ms. Justice and using her alter ego to help the villain. At least the first thing that came to my mind was a play on Trophy Hunter and perhaps she gets turned into a trophy wife type deal, though I guess that's not necessarily related to my above thoughts.

Omnishambler

Any or all work for me, I trust your judgment. My only concern is that I hope that this doesn't delay the next Synne City book. I need a new fix of the exploits of Lady Wrath and her ladies!

goalie21

I would like to see more of the heroine in captivity and different ways she is sexually used and abused, but you are doing a good job so whatever you decide.

Radaubruder

For myself I am not a fan of all the time capturing. I personal love to see their real life alter ego struggling and getting more affected. That they struggle with maintaining what they have there. If it comes to capturing public humiliation and destroying their reputation is always my Cup of coffee

Don Ship

I finished the first draft of Ms Justice: Shadows of Justice about 30 minutes ago (10am CST). Now I can really focus on the Justice Girl outline. Thank you all for your comments and ideas. I have every one cut and pasted in a doc that I'll review as I outline.

Radaubruder

Just to add… would love to have Chief Weasel appearing somehow

Darth Xelleon

More supernatural or sci-fi elements. We're already dealing with characters with superpowers, might as well go all out.

Alex2000

the title of the book rocks. practically writes itself. I would suggest a 3rd person POV maybe... I have read enough true crime to know how a "Trophy hunter" or "collector" character could work. brainstorming.. hunter...collector ... trophies... tribute.... paying tribute.... what sort of tribute? There are so many ways you could roll with this, but clearly not about a serial killer. what is he collecting. pieces of uniform of heroines? some imagined sexual energy? whatever. I think imagine the villain and his motive first, then work back from that. i know this starts from a dark place but like... A Charles Manson or Jim Jones type. Operates out in the open, "collects" cult members with his dark charisma or whatever. Maybe this charisma has entranced heroines. your heroine investigates. Could be on smaller scale like Manson or on a big scale like the Jim Jones case, complete with overseas operations. **note** (Manson didn't actually kill anyone until his big talk caught up with him and Tex Watson tried to co-op the group... anyways read CHAOS by Tom O'Neill). The police found Roman Polansky home made porn by Polansky of Sharon Tate doing wild sex stuff, probably talked into it by Roman, with other men and wild stuff. Police let Polansky have the films back since they thought they weren't relevant to the crime. but in your work of fiction, maybe a Manson (who hung out with Beach boy's drummer - was known! ) cult type, with various semi famous hangers one.. maybe could be entainged with Heroines in some way like Polansky and Tate were, sort of mired in the eco-system that Manson ran in. IDK something there. But the cloak of power, of the Jim Jones type, of the Manson type, or even Polyansky himself. Marries up and coming star, pimps her out to his buddies 2 or 3 at a time or whatever. Like isnt that a type of collecting. recording and making a record of the sullinging of a young actress. ---- a Robert Ben Rhoades type (new book out on him btw). Trucker serial killer. drove around the country with an elaborate setup in his trailer. So you write a similar setup. villain driving around with an elaborate big rig trailer or pimped out Van setup. Could be random or not so random. ____ Ted Bundy or so forth... again had some initial charisma, but basically random attacks. collected trophies, would return to places where his trophies (or graves) were dug or hidden in the woods. ---- Again grim example, but take out the murder part of it, and think of the character, the mindset, you could spin your tale from there. ----- 3rd person POV with the shadowy villain. 3rd person POV of a crow scene with villain and heroine there. nothing happens. cut to heroine 1st person pov. crowd scene. She is agitated. Doesnt know why. 6th sense. that primeval part of your brain that says run, but she doesnt know why. it is a normal day at.... beach... mall... sunset strip... football game tailgate. whatever. what lerks in the shadows? something. But all seems normal. it was nothing. cut charismatic guy chatting up girl cut girls taking Instagram pics cut the villain step in again... is he in plain sight? a big personality showman like Polansky or Manson or Jim Jones? or the stalker type, the one chatting to a small group or 1 or 2 of the e girls. or a loner with a van round back? what is he hunting for his collection? ---- David Lynch vibes maybe.

Radaubruder

Would also love to see the heroine doing in her heroine life some always successful things but that interfer her real life. So missing important meetings or so. So trouble attracts more trouble

Highwayman182

Hello ! If possible, in this story or the following ones, I'd enjoy seeing some corruption. I think it's made for some great storytelling with the Synne City continuity superheroines.