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Okay, if you have been reading this book, then you know Toad has almost all of the heroines enslaved at the Dollhouse. Including Ms (Mistress) Patriot. Only Uber Woman remains free to play spoiler. Uber Girl is enslaved in the House of Joy.

Are you ready for me to wrap this book up and start the next one? I am halfway thru writing the next chapter in the series for next Thursday. I can start the storyline toward conclusion now, and start on the outline for the next Thursday book.

Or a miracle can happen, heroines rescued, and Mistress Patriot escapes to continue her Dark Crusade. I can even bring in new heroines to battle Mistress Patriot. But it is already at a 125K words, 73 chapters.

Right now, the next book would be Insta Heroines. About social media obsessed heroines.

Let me know what you want.

Yay or nay?

Continue the story until Mistress Patriot wins with ALL the city's super heroines? Or end it now with Toad on top, owning all of the heroines including Mistress Patriot?

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Highwayman182

Kill it. I don't know how much I like these stories. Obviously you're writing is top notch, that's not the problem. I just think the Ms Patriot adventures have gotten a little stale, it's not like the Synne City Stories where the continuity aspect makes everything better.

goalie21

I was looking forward to Uber Woman being taken and a great and detailed description of turning her into a sex slave like with Purple Avenger, but it has gotten somewhat long. I'm confident that you will come up with a great ending.

g2042

I say continue. I really want to read more about evil Ms Patriot

g2042

Or end the story in one giant highly detailed hot orgy. Also, have you thought about Ms Patriot fighting horny huge dick aliens. Evil horny aliens come to Grimme City and subtly abduct young gorgeous hot women for sexual slavery and breeding. Ms Patriot and Patriot Girl and the other super heroines try to fight them but are captured and brutally fucked by the lecherous big dick aliens.

Omnishambler

I’d say wrap it up. It’s been a great ride but all good things come to an end. Time for new stories.

Radaubruder

Would say to finish this and come up with something new

BlackGriffin

Prefer a new story. Would love to see the villain just defeat heroines with his own power. Not with gang or chloroform

Alex2000

I'd go toward a wrap up. Maybe one or two Escape. If it was continuous it would matter more which ones. The problem in this universe is that it reboots every time so nothing really matters.

Sakome

Admittedly I've been waiting for it to finish before reading it lol

Alex2000

The Instagram superheroines ought to be in a totally new universe set on Florida Gulf Coast or something like Miami but with the Tampa Bay or Louisiana's New Orleans vibes mixed in somehow.. Like how GTA 6 will probably do it if it ever comes out.

aflyingpiano

Honestly, I'm a fan of Mistress Patriot, so I'd be game for her to "win", then end at that point, but whatever works..

Don Ship

Holy smoke, Batman. I thought reaching Chapter 72 was long, but I just found some fantasy and LitRPG writer on chapters 730, 970, etc... Now THAT is an ongoing story. One of the guys does a webnovel, the others actually do publish their books on Amazon, with insanely hit sales ranking. And I've never heard of any of them. You really can be hugely successful as an Indie writer without ever being well known. But these writers had between 5k and 15k patrons, too.

storywriter56

Would like to see Mistress Patriot wind up as a senseless hooker, her looks gone, old and inform. Sort of a epilogue.

Kitten

Would it be possible, to write two chapters with an 'official' ending and one with an 'alternative' ending?