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Brave Hearts Insta-Heroines book (Patreon)

Published:
2024-08-28 14:41:18
Edited:
2024-08-29 18:11:24
Imported:
2024-08

Poll

Brave Hearts Insta-Heroines book

  • 1st person Point of View. Stick just with Superstar. 6
  • 3rd person Point of View. I can have chapters from the distant 3rd POV of another characters, good guys and bad guys. 5
  • Mixed POVs. I can do Superstar in 1st POV, and other characters in 3rd POV. 27
  • 2024-08-28
  • 38 votes
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Content

Ms Patriot: Dark Crusade has been outlined out about 10 more chapters to bring the book to a conclusion. That will take us into Jan 25. And then I will start posting the first "Brave Hearts Insta-Heroine" series book. It will be an ongoing series like Synne City. Written by JK Waylon, since Don Ship as multiple series.

Alex2000 has offered many suggestions, one of which hit me. What POV should this be written in?

I could write every chapter from the point of view of the main characters, Sydney/Superstar. Literally as her experiencing everything. Most Urban Fantasy is written this way, in what is called 1st person POV. I have written a shit ton of books in 1st person, so it would be easy for me.

All of my other super heroine in peril books are written in a loose 3rd Person POV (really, mostly from that character's POV, but really jumping in all of their heads as need. So maybe more an Omniscient POV.

I want to know what you guys think. What would you like to read? Something new, 1st person, or keep it like all of the previous series? I'm open to either, since both are easy for me. Personally, I'm leaning toward 1st person, just do do something different in this genre, with some chapters in 3rd to showcase other characters, good and bad.

Comments about he choices are encouraged. State your case for your preferred POV.

Comments

Highwayman182

Absolutely mixed POV They enrich the story with diverse perspectives. I always liked that chapter from Ekong's POV in Voided, in which we get to know a little bit about his thoughts on Ms Amazing and Ms Justice. Great stuff.

goalie21

I agree, gives us a view into what each is thinking.

Omnishambler

I normally prefer 3rd person POV, but voted for 1st person POV as it would make for an interesting change of pace. Variety is everything and you have to try something new from time to time! 😀 What does this all mean for the Synne City books? Will there be another one anytime soon (I’ll be honest - I’m in lust with Asha).

Alex2000

Can we vote on the name? Brave hearts sounds too corny. Like a carebears parody

Alex2000

Re the group name. So I dislike brave hearts. Sounds like a Disney ip. Like what do instaTHOTs or only Fns eWhores call themselves? Like riff on that maybe.

Don Ship

It looks like Option 3 is the winner. So the main character will be in first person, another other heroines and villains will have chapters in third person.

Kitten

Suggest First Point of View, if the story takes off you can consider writing it from another's point of view? (They did it with Twilight/Midnight Sun and fifty shades of grey?)