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I want to flip this series. Basically, I want to usurp my main villain, Barbara Daul. Who should defeat, capture, and take over Barbara Daul's business and criminal empire?

Nemesis - Kate Wiltshire?

The Russian Sisters: Angel - Ana Rubashkin, Yarost - Dominika Rubashkin, and Volchitsa - Sofia Rubashkin?

Abigalle Thompson?

Issy Tomasi?

Emeraude Thibodaux, the witch serving Pierce?

Or some new villainess?

Or even Ekong Mbachu?

Or do you think Lady Wrath/Barbara Daul should remain the main antagonist?

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KomaB75

Ekong Mbachu would be my pick

blitzxs

I actually want Nemesis to utterly dominate and seduce Barbara like you originally envisioned. The idea that some haughty 2-bit villainess who's seemingly past her prime can defeat the famous Lady Wrath who has defeated every heroine and villain that has come her way is a very hot thought. Even Barbara herself was surprised by how successful Nemesis is in the short amount of time she was active. I actually Nemesis to take a step further. I want her not to just to defeat and enslave Barbara, I also want her to marry Lady Wrath, make her Kate's wife. I find the idea of symbolizing the ultimate defeat to matrimony to be very twisted and hot. Also can I ask when's the next update for Synne City Super Heroines? The conclusion to the whole Lady Wrath vs Nemesis is something I've been looking forwards for over a year.

Canosan

Russian Mobsters have rivals. The one that ruled the mob the one that captured Barbara originally was one of my favorite. Or the old Grammond couple were amazing, someone like them, I mean we all know the hyper wealthy are freaking evil at some level, what if one had a fetish for collecting the super-powered and makes a criminal organizations for the soul purpose of obtaining them. Maybe the oligarch has a sexy wife who enjoys his collection fetish.

Ward

Ekong has inside knowledge of the organization and is therefore the greatest threat. He has been an attractive character. Maybe it is time for him to decide he does not agree with the way Barbara is going and exert his full power as a Void. Voids are the male counterparts to Barbara, Kate et al. but so far none of these males have risen above a minion status except the original owner of Subversions, Jethro. Maybe Ekong can burst out and show some leadership ability and expanded Void powers?

Avator24

Definitely either Ekong or Kate would be my choice. You've already got both in place to shake things up.

JZZY

I think a shakeup of the main villainess is a great idea.

Don Ship

I've personally gone back and forth on Ekong, Kate (Nemesis), and the Russian Sisters. Leaning heavily toward Kate. because I brought her back from prison to take over and dominate Barbara.

Sakome

Copying from discord: I like blitzs idea, that sounds like the most logical direction to go in having Nemesis take over. I love the idea of her marrying Lady Wrath to take over all of Barbara's business's and such. Even better if she uses her business to help supplement Subversions in some way. I'd always liked the direction it was going with Alexander Rubashkin and Barbara. I've forgotten a bit of the lore around their relationship though and admittedly I haven't read the latest book yet either. Forgotten who Abigalle Thompson is. I don't know if you want to reset some of the heroines though and have more of them free again or have it a giant harem still. For what it's worth, I think having multiple villain factions could be fun. It's usually glimpses of the different pimps and such. So having Nemesis, Issy Tomasi, Pierce backed by a witch, could be fun and helpful to split some of the heroines up so you don't have to fit them all into one book. Maybe each faction has a bit more of a theme to how they corrupt/defeat the heroines to distinguish them from one another as well. At some points can have the factions work together to take down heroines, kinda like like Legion of Doom vs Justice League situations. All for a new villain as well! Or one that's been referenced a bit that steps into the spotlight more. Off the top of my head I can think of Lady Dragon. Maybe even an evil witch as herself, can't recall if Femme Fatale is still around. A spin could be maybe someone more "legitimate" like a corrupt mayor of police chief (forgot who the current Mayor is). I like Ekong too so he could maybe decide to start h is own org or something?

OmniShambler

Add my voice to those suggesting that it should be Kate. Got to admit, that's in no small part because she's the one mostly likely to come up with some imaginative ways to have some fun and games with Asha. :-)

BlackGriffin

I prefer Ekong. But is it possible to turn Barbara back to Ms Amazing? Kind of miss that costume.

Highwayman182

It's either Ekong or Nemesis for me. Ekong has been a pretty impactful villain. He's done far more as a henchman than some villains we've seen in this series. As for Nemesis, she's been a great villain for what little time she's had on Synne City.

GlasgowRanger

I agree with the others here; have Nemesis win and both enslave and marry Barbara, and have Ekong and the Russian sisters break off and form rival factions against Kate and Barbara, each taking some superheroines with them, and possibly some breaking free anyway and going rogue. I too love the idea of Nemesis enslaving and then marrying Barbara. Seems a fitting end to her rule as a haughty villainess.

Marcus Vitchell

Just write her out. If nothing vibes, why force it?shes gone, and have people fight for her stuff or carve up the territory

Don Ship

Abigalle Thompson is an English woman working with Kelly Kavanaugh, who is also secretly an Amazon (not a heroine or villain yet). Also one of Peirce's lovers. Pierce, Kelly, and Abigalle had a threesone.

Don Ship

I won't have Lady Dragon capture them, because she'd just experiment on them, breed them with her monster plants, and such. It would be the end of the heroines.

Don Ship

I've thought about her returning to Ms Amazing, but that isn't possible after alt the crimes she's committed. She'd have to go to prison first.

Sakome

I see I see, time for a reread then!

Sakome

True, bummer. I always saw her as like a central key figure around the stories, but I guess that just means someone else will have to step into that role in my mind at least.

BlackGriffin

I mean one of the most powerful heroine coming back into the fight is a great bargain, but I understand your concern. And like Sakome said, if Ms Amazing can't be back, at least bring in some new milf heroine who can take the leader role.

aflyingpiano

Would be fun if it's an outside character - If there's a council of heroines, they've probably got a "head of the organization". And if there have been heroines for any length of time, I'm guessing that they've had setbacks like this before. So, what if the "Council of Heroines" have a domme-heroine in the wings, waiting to come in and enslave EVERYBODY (villainesses and heroines alike) to "reset" the status quo? (Con: We may end up with a weird varient of power creep =P)

Don Ship

Actually, it's the Council of Witches

aflyingpiano

Ah. Wasn't sure if that was Synne City or Grimme City. My brain fried for a bit.

Don Ship

There is not great organization in Grimme City.