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Hi. What's up? For one, the Tomboy story will be ending at the end of December. 

So the question is, which one of my Grimme City heroines would you like to see as the main character in the  next book?

Ms Patriot

Patriot Girl

Patriette

Purple Avenger

Silver Angel

Uber Woman

Or from the Point of View of a sexy villainess battling the heroine(s)?

Any particular kinks you'd like to see?

I'm going to start outlining in December, so now is the time to pipe in and tell me what you would like to read to start out 2021.

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JZZY

Purple Avenger, SHe can fight the mob boss' in and out of costume.

aflyingpiano

Well, I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that this isn't the first side-kick Ms. Patriot has had. Headcanon suggests that she's had other willing girls try to be Patriot Girl, but either they've been captured and tamed, or moved to other cities when they've realized that Ms. Patriot has a habit of drawing bad guys to her (and it's not the best learning situation.) So story idea- POV of one of her defeated sidekicks coming back as a villainess, where she wants to punish Ms. Patriot by capturing her and her compatriots, and force her to watch as she tames them, one by one. (Maybe save the new Patriot Girl for last, maybe turn her first so Ms. Patriot gets to see how far her sidekicks fall....)

Icthultu

Would like to see Uber Woman as a hucow. Or Patriette as a latex slave.

Action Galz

Just read Purple Avenger penguined. Really like her. My kinda heroine. Though my knowledge of this universe is limited but my vote goes to her.

Anime

Maybe a time travel tale where Patriette meets Patriot Girl.

Alex2000

I loved the "side-kick turned bad" idea that fellow posted earlier. But I would suggest it be with one of your lesser used heroines, since personally I'm a little burnt out on Ms. Patriot. Maybe that's just me though. The sidekick turned bad idea is so good I'd almost suggest you save it to use on a story that doesn't reset after each book. Maybe one of the heroines from the Ms Amazing-verse. Then you could set up a multi bookarc. Maybe one prequel book with said sidekick. A book in the middle foreshadowing the return of the sidekick. Then a book with the sidekicks return. Then the sidekick turn villain could be a continuing threat. You couldn't pull that off in a book that has a reset after each story gimmick. Well unless you made it a long novel. 200k words or something. As for Kinks I always prefer your harder-core stuff like the straight-up non-con stuff you have in your patreon only series. For me personally that might be my favourite of yours. Other than that straight up non-con sex, non-con humiliation and bondage you might be able to get away with without an Amazon ban hammer. For me the humiliation works best as a slow build-up, rather than all at once like ripping off a Band-Aid. It's almost psychological. One of your best scenes had (I think) Justice girl being hoisted up bondage style in a barn, and her outfit slowly being peeled away before being lowered onto a dick (or something, I forget). That was really good. **great pacing. ** Had bondage, and humiliation, with some awesome ravishing. The pacing was key I think. Too fast and it takes away some of the psychological humiliation element. For that I might as well watch porn. Good erotica needs that psychological element I think. Anyway I guess that's off topic.

Alex2000

I've been thinking more about the book idea that aflyingpiano posted regarding the sidekick-turned-bad idea. ------------ Do any of your heroines have two sidekicks? Or rather, maybe a team where each heroine has a sidekick? Because I'm thinking that the initial capture happens when they are both sidekicks. Sidekick turned villainess blamed sidekick X for it, and nurses the grudge for years. By the time the villainess returns, sidekick x is now heroine x in her own right, receiving love and adulation from the public. This pisses the villainess off even more. It makes her desire for Revenge all the greater. Maybe the heroine in this story could be one of the new ones you rolled out a while back. Maybe part of a team? Maybe the initial capture happened when they were all sidekicks or heroines in training and the team was actually supposed to be five members not four? I honestly think it would be a shame if you just rolled this "sidekick returns" idea out in a quick 20k word short story or 50k word novella. An idea like this would add drama to a non-reset series. So imagine using his idea with that superheroine team you rolled out a while back with the example renders. Maybe one set in a new universe that doesn't reset after each book? A new universe for a new series, with a longish plot arc, with a great payoff in the end. ------ Story 1- training group of 5 girls is recruited and formed. Maybe some adventures while training? since it is erotica, something sexy needs to occur.. maybe one of their trainers gets into trouble? Or they go out for a secret night out clubbing and run into trouble? --------- Story 2- Training proceeds. they go on a first successful mission as trainees. But then on their 2nd, mistakes happen? 5th girl gets humiliated and captured. The other 4 girls unable to rescue her. --------- story 3 - POV from the 5th girl. Start at the 2nd mission, Rashomon-style where it is clear from her POV that she puts the blame on her capture on the other girls, and maybe one particular girl. Story 2 would not have made this clear, but in Rashomon style it is clear that she does blame the others. The story then proceeds to her sexual enslavement, qausi-acceptance of said enslavement.. but then an opportunity for escape emerges. She had given up the thought of that, but maybe she sees her former teammates on TV or something, and that triggers her... why are they getting all this adulation? They destroyed her! Fuck them! She wants revenge. She needs to escape! -------- story 4 - The now villainess carefully plans her escape. She still fakes docility, but plans carefully dreaming of her revenge. she escapes! She is now in some 3rd world city. Needs to get back to civilization. She has no money, no connections. She maybe steals, or whores herself out of money.. anything to get back.... all things that get added onto her list of reasons for revenge. *she*, *the great XXX* has had to whore herself out for a few baht (or whatever) so she can get XXX. She maybe then takes up more of the dark side.. doing worse stuff so she can get back. Maybe she steals. Maybe she forces random women to whore themselves out, acting as a pimp, gathering money, learning more about her powers... building her strength in this backwater beach city in paradise? (maybe you could tell this story in 1st person?) ------ story 5 - back to the USA, the 4 trainee heroines are now a full-fledged team. they rock, they are stars, and they fight crime. They have forgotten all about what happened to them and their long lost 5th member. Here you can have a typical heroines save the day story. I think it again might be best if the 4 heroines stayed "pure" in this one to make the events of story 6 that much sweeter. Maybe the porn part of this erotica story happens with a civilian captive or victim. Or maybe with just 1 of the 4 heroines. ------ story 6 - "the return". maybe start the book from the POV of the villainess making her great return to the USA. she has honed her craft overseas (story 4), and now is ready to take on her old teammates. Maybe she starts small, messing with a couple of lower-tier heroines before targeting her old squad.. perfecting her tactics. story 6 would concentrate on her POV and her capture and subduing of those lower-tier heroines. Maybe she discovers some kinks (haha) that she enjoys working out.. and some flaws in her plan. Practice makes perfect. ------ Story 7 - the returning Villainess is reading to take on her old squad. Maybe in her excitement, she tries to take on more than she can handle? Or thinks she is trying to grab 2 of them, but all 4 show up? Anyway, the attempt fails. the identity of the villainess is still secret, and she lives to fight another day. ------ Story 8 to 11 - Maybe told from the POV of the 4 ladies, each in turn. They are captured 1 by 1. So your POV would shift to each lady as she is captured in a different way. Hell, you could do 4 different stories. Make each capture interesting and different, and ultra-sexy, with lots of humiliation and non-con orgasming by the captured helpless heroines. It has taken 8 books to get here, so this is the payoff. You need to make it really sweet. So, yeah I'd go with a separate book for each capture. Each with its own POV from that heroine. As you go from books 8 to 9, to 10 and11 the tension for the remaining heroine would grow and grow. By story 11, the heroine would be really freaking out. not knowing what had happened to the previous ladies, guessing at what would happen to her... the panic at being captured. resisting, but finally yielding to an enormous orgasm when she is finally *taken*. it would be awesome after 11 stories of build-up. ----- story 12 - the villainess reveals herself to the 4 captured heroines who are now together again. Maybe she gets sloppy now that her revenge is at hand. She get sloppy in her humiliation of the 4. one of the four escapes frees one of the others, who then plot to free the other 2. ----- story 13 - The villainess suddenly worried that the 2 escaped. She panics and moves the 2 she still has to another location. more remote, but less secure. The 2 freed track the villainess down. They free their friends. Maybe the villainess escapes, but her own sidekick is captured? Or the Villainess is captured, and in a moment of spite, the 4 heroines send her back to the hellhole that she escaped from in the first place? sets up further stories... Don, I am telling you this could be epic!

Taskmaster42

How about a contest among the villains and villainess' to finally capture all the heroines and their sidekicks. Start with the sidekicks and then leave false clues to keep the heroines confused. After all the sidekicks are captured start their brainwashing and/or mind control to be programmed. Then let the heroines "rescue" them and the villains let the sidekicks capture their mentors.

mfan

I was thinking that one of your rich heroine business owners (Silver Angel or Ms. Patriot) in their secret identity probably has some sort of legal team. My thought is that some seemingly above board owner of a media company (I was thinking wrestling but it could be anything with reach) reaches out to the heroine with a charity contract for a cause that the heroine cares deeply about. The heroine is currently burning the candle at both ends as a heroine and in their secret identity so they send the contract to their secret identity's legal team, a legal team that has been compromised in some way by the business owner. The legal team clears the contract and the heroine signs it. The seemingly above board business owner has a shady porn side company that is much like their normal company (ie sex wrestling if it is a wrestling company) After a successful charity event the owner drops the full contract on the heroine. Due to the power of their word, the heroine is put under the thumb of the business and has to perform in a demeaning capacity as an employee of said company.

Don Ship

Wow. Very clever. I like it.

aflyingpiano

Another series could be a "mirror universe" version of the heroines you use. Instead of Aphrodite escaping from the Satyr and/or Ares, resulting in Aphrodite women being phenomenally beautiful, powered, and smart, in their universe, Aphrodite was tamed by the Satyr and/or Ares resulting in phenomenally beautiful women who, for lack of a better term, are always on the prowl, and are always looking to dominate anyone around them (be it psychologically, sexually, or emotionally). I sort of imagine Ms. Amazing/Patriot as a Lex Luthor-expy, where she's been top dog in her part of the underworld (and regular world, since nobody knows she's also the kingpin of crime), knocking down any attempts that any other pseudo-Aphorodites have launched for her throne as Top Bitch of the world. I can see 2 questions that you, as the story writer could decide on - 1) Who are the villainesses? For example, in Synn City prime, Erica Sambino is a villain, out to tame Ms. Patriot's ass. (and fuck it, and pimp it, but you get the picture.) In Mirror-synn, Is Erica a heroine? Does she use tech to help her fight? Or just her connections to the clean cops on the force? Or is she similar to Prime world, where she's still a mafia princess, trying to knock out the competition? 2) What happens to the other heroines of Mirror-world? If Ms. Patriot is top dog, who is Patriot girl in this setting? A former aspirant to the crown, tamed into submission, or a Proto-Aphrodite that Ms. Patriot has decided she'll mentor and leave in Synn City when she decides to move onto the world stage? And if she's a former aspirant, what happened to the rest of the heroines? All tamed into submission (I'd read that story, but it'd be a short series), or lieutenants in different parts of the city?

Canosan

I wrote a story one time (I lost it) where Midnight Avenger as her assistant DA persona was putting the Erica Sambino out of business and forcing her to call on Big Daddy for help who had the Female milf lesbian district attorney midnight avengers boss in his pocket. They agree on a quid pro quo that Big Daddy will take care of Erica's Midnight avenger/Assistant DA problem by having her boss top her and Erica would take out Green Spectre or her equivilant in this case depending on the universe.