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I have returned the triumphant hero! Yeah me!  Wait, I checked my last three books on Amazon, all have 3 to 4 reviews. 3 star average. What? There are 4 star reviewa, but every one also has a single 1 star that drags the average way down. And no one left an actual review so I don't know what the problem is. Just posting star rankings instead of reviews is a new thing. Up to a few months ago there were almost no simple star rankings without reviews.

I'm a little baffled. Oh well. Nothing I can do about it.

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Don Ship

Tomboy ranks being captured, gagged, and tied up -- 1 star! No actual review, because...you know.... She's bound and gagged. So....

Mr Bunny

These days people generally just bother to rate or review if they really love or hate something. Even ratings on large sites like imdb and rottentomatoes are getting skewed because of it.

Patreon fan

I can leave a review here on Patreon: Your superheroine stories are very enjoyable. The gradual corruption formula is great and works time and time again. In some stories the change happens too fast, but in most of those cases there is an unexpected reversal for the heroine and the fun is prolonged. So long as you enjoy writing and make what you need for income, I hope you keep up the great work. Feel free to write short sample stories (something like a one page or less in Word with 10-12 times roman font) and ask us for inputs/post a poll. I use Smashwords to buy your stories. I'll try to post some reviews and include actual words, not just lazy star counts. Sorry if this was too wordy. Don't let the internet trolls shape your perspective.

Mr Bunny

Generally I think you're one of the better writers of this type of story, cause your stories tend to go a bit more in-depth on the psychological aspect of it. Which in my opinion makes it more interesting than most other stories, as they tend to be purely aimed at describing the visual aspects, and not so much what's going on in the heads of both super heroines and villains. If I was going to pick on something, it's the same as the guy above, that the endings are cut a bit short at times. I haven't read your newest story, but the recent Tomboy story, which overall was one of your better imo, sort of felt like it was missing a chapter there on the ending. Like she's restrained in this machine at the end of a chapter, then when the next chapter starts she's fully enslaved. I think it would've been better with a chapter in between, depicting that gradual change. I've always found it interesting to explore psychology, so I find that gradual corruption more enticing than just flipping a switch, instantly going from good to bad.