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Platinum Angel post patrol (Patreon)

Published:
2022-02-21 17:08:51
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2022-02
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Kitten created a little 3-panel of what happens when Platinum Angel gets home after a long hard night fighting the good fight. Sexy goodness.  Enjoy. 

And thank you, Angelic Kitten.

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Kitten

Nice eye candy for peeps when they read the chapters. ^.6

Alex2000

Looking good. Nice Brazilian style bikini bottoms. I know in the text you call them short shorts and you have said that is because the heroines might think of them that way. but I think since you tell the stories in the third person and not from the 1st person it would be less confusing for the reader to refer to them as bikini bottoms... And then you can specify the type of cut the bikini bottoms have... Full, Brazilian, cheeky, Tanga or thong. And what happens if you have a heroine in the future wearing actual short shorts. They can be sexy as hell, but it will be confusing with the terminology currently used. It might make sense if one heroin had this delusion and you were telling that story from her first person point of view and she would keep saying short shorts... but they all describe it that way. I don't know. It's a minor thing but it's kind of annoying. Here is text from one of your stories... "Gold Avenger glanced down at her near thong-like short-shorts" At that point why not just help the reader and just say plainly what she is wearing. Thong bikini bottom. Or just thong bottoms. I love you man, but it's too clever by half.

Alex2000

Dude. Just dump the gimmick. It doesn't make any sense. It's not a first-person story. And even if it was maybe it would be funny once as a gag. As a reader it's just frustrating having to guess past triple fake hidden meanings. It should just be straight out descriptive text man.. wtf