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I threw this together real quick, just to “test drive” the story a little. Nothing is canon here, especially Vixen’s costume. Nothing is also NOT NOT Canon.

A Heroine’s Life

A Super Heroine Slice of Life Tale

The westering sun painted the sky in broad strokes of pink, purple, and chartreuse. Megan Justice paused to enjoy the view from her mansion’s terrace high in the hills overlooking the city of Los Colinas below, and the Pacific Ocean beyond. She sipped champagne as she watched the lights starting to come on, turning the city into a dark sparkling gem at night.

She smiled, thinking, It’s the little things in life that made it worth living.

“Best view in the city,” Tiffany said and clinked her champagne glass to Megan’s.

“Megan, take my picture,” Carina said all excited. The white bikini clad redhead almost giggled. “This is going to look amazing on my social media.”

The celebrated blonde accepted her friend’s phone, got her posed and framed for maximum bang, and took the photo. And then took fifty more. Her bikini clad friends, Tiffany and Tisha, crowded in to either side of Megan as she snapped the pictures. Then they all gathered around to pick out three pictures to post.

And post it Carina did, with the subject line: The end of another Hot Girl Summer day.

Then Megan posed for some pictures, which she posted and tagged, End of another amazing bikini party with my BFFs.

A PM popped up over the pictures as they were looking at her post for anything that needed to be fixed. It just read: 9:30

Nothing else. No sender. Nothing.

Everyone just stared at the message. Megan couldn’t breathe. Heart thundering. But she regained her wits and quickly swiped it away.

“What the hell is that?” Tisha asked. “What’s 9:30?”

“Nothing,” she said. “I’ve been getting weird messages recently. Incomplete. Just gibberish.”

She diverted their attention by urging Tisha to pose in front of the sunset, and then Tiffany got her turn. Both quickly got their pictures and posts them. By that time everyone had forgotten the PM.

Tisha tagged her pictures, Totally unfiltered. Best Hot Girl Summer ever!

Megan looked up when movement caught her eye. A feminine figure streaked by overhead. Super heroine. Which one? Too high to see face, hair, or costume. She smiled, a little tingle rippling through her perfectly sculpted body. She tugged up on her black bikini top, after noticing her boobs were close to spilling out.

Probably Ms Freedom. I think she’s on patrol this evening.

“Oh, look!” Tisha cried. The black beauty pointed at the now speck in the sky. “Did you see that super heroine fly by? I think she flew right over the top of us.”

“Who do you think it is? Vixen? Lady?” Carina asked.

Tiffany perked up, “Might be that new heroine, Youri…Something.”

“Yorichi,” Megan said, shaking her head. “Don’t you keep up with the news? Such a bimbo.”

“Bimbo? You’re the blonde,” Tiffany said, and they all giggled.

“Guilty,” Megan said, tilting her head. “Bimboed my sweet round butt into a billion dollar Fashion House.”

Her Fashion House Justified was worth billions globally. Her brand was everywhere. She was everywhere: social media, regular media, and the boardroom. Life was good.

Not bad for a girl who barely graduated high school.

“Not that you would ever brag or anything,” Carina said, and tickled her.

Megan squealed and struggled free, one boob falling out, and then grinned at her childhood friend as she panted.

“Perish the thought. Humility is my middle name.”

“I thought your middle name was Candace,” Tisha asked, turning an innocent face to her.

“It is. Why do you ask?”

Her girls laughed. It’s had been a fun day with her besties. All wine, bikinis, and really expensive heels. All for the fun of it, and the photo ops. Social media influencers had fun on the clock.

“I have to call it an early evening,” Megan said. “I have to make some calls. Do the whole mogul thing. You know? Busy, busy me.”

“Okay, we can take a hint,” Carina cried. “We’re leaving. Jesus.”

“Love ya,” she said as they hugged.

“Love ya more.”

“I wish.”

Her girls quickly pulled on sweats, finished their champagne, and left. Megan hovered around them until one and all were out the door, and then the front gate reported they’d left. Then she locked up via an app on her phone. She made a pass through the sprawling mansion to ensure all the servants had departed as well. And then it was time.

Megan’s heart raced as she ascended the stairs to the second floor. Then she took another flight of stairs up to the roof deck atop that multi-million dollar estate. Walking over to the western edge, stilettos clacking, hips swaying, the billion-dollar beauty looked out with a satisfied smile.

“Life is good.”

She drained her flute, set it on a table, and lifted her left hand. Megan pulled off the silver band around her middle finger, and then slipped it down the ring finger next to it. Like a wedding band. A little tingle of magic rippled into her.

“Justice for all.”

That phrase activated the ring’s magic. On that finger. With those words, she threw her arms wide, head rolling back, and intense magic flowed through her spectacular, bikini clad body. Heat and coldness flowed like water, rushing from the top down and out. It felt like she melted, and then snapped back into being.

“I am Vixen!”

The super heroine struck a pose, a tiny smile playing with her full red lips. The busty beauty tugged up on her shiny lavender suit, cut like a Playboy Bunny. Dark hose sheathed strong legs sheathed in purple thigh boots, with matching opera gloves. A wide choker and mask of the same purple finished her look.

The mask wasn’t really necessary, since the magic that transformed her into a super heroine also altered her body and facial features. Not every heroine even wore a mask. Vixen did because it gave her a heightened aura of mystery, and intimidated bad guys.

Vixen flew straight up like a ground-to-air missile, flying so fast it was unlikely anyone would spot her. She made for downtown Los Colinas. The the twilit city twinkled below her, filling her with the warm fuzzies. The city gave her so much, and as Vixen she gave back by upholding truth, justice, and the American way as the city’s premier super heroine.

It was coming up on 9 PM, so she had a little time. Vixen veered to the right and made a fun run along the beach. A few people remained, cheering as she flew past a lot slower than before. She waved and smiled, once again getting the warm fuzzies.

A few locals and tourist tried to wave her down. As much as she loved meeting and mingling with her admirers, her stiletto boots were not friends with that soft sand. So she followed the beach all the way down to the very end, were an uber exclusive enclave for the filthy rich had their beach front homes. One of those homes was her beach house retreat.

“I should take my girls down there this weekend.”

Swinging around, she passed over the central axis of the fabled city. Entertainment capital of the world. Movie City. A paradise on Earth for singers, actors, and models. The city of her birth and rise to fame and fortune.

Los Colinas.

Approaching downtown LC, she slowed and scanned their usual meeting site. She spotted three women hovering above City Hall: Lady, Yorichi, and Ms Freedom. Her friends and comrades in crime fighting.

The real super heroines of Los Colinas. God help us.

Vixen laughed as she flew towards them.

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Radaubruder

Love this start. Something different but it is very promising. Especially with this bunch of girls her social life could be very eventful

Alex2000

I liked the start. Sounds good. My only real "note" would be to maybe dial back the billionaire angle in favor of the Instagram / only fans e-thot angle. The 4 hungry e-girls trying to desperate gain internet clout in the first chapter. That's an interesting new angle. Like how the TomBoy book 1 was a new angle. Cheerleader Girl living in small town texas. The billionaire angle you have played out already. Run with the e girl angle. You can keep basically all you wrote. But switch it from "her billionaire mansion" to a fancy hotel room that they all shared for 1 night. Like divided the cost of a $ 1200-a-night room between the 4 of them, just so they could get a week or two of e-thot content for their streams from a glamourous location. E-thots actually do this. Have them all talking about what fake shit they are going to post about their fake online persona. You get at that a little already here. Maybe 1 or 2 of them do only fans too. Maybe 1 out and open and not ashamed. Another does it on the down low. Got to make rent. Another secretly escorts on the side. Hell maybe that is what Megan does if she doesn't get enough clicks etc. Running with the e-thot e-girl angle gives you ways like that to maybe take the character too. At the end of the adventure, and after the hotel past check out, cut to Megan returning to a normal apartment. Or maybe living in her sister's basement as a renter. Cut to her nonglamorous job in retail part time at Lululemon. Contrast it to the image as an e-thot she, they,, all try and present. You had it there. That's the angle. Not the billionaire stuff we have seen before. You might even do some Google fu to learn with goes on behind the scenes for Instagram girls. It is a different take.

Don Ship

I like it, but I want Megan to be a little famous. Maybe more of an up and coming "Social Media Influencer" but not a household name.

Alex2000

by the way, e-thot is a slang term I have seen on twitter. It is a mashing of e-girl and thot. Thot is a slang term from rap or something. common online now. It means a girl who is "thirsty" and is probably a "hoe". (thirsty is slang for a a girl who is "asking for it") thot: "that hole over there" but in the twitter discourse, it is a disparaging slang term. Maybe a slight variation on "slut" or "whore". e-thot is used as an term of disparagement towards Only Fans e-girls (for obvious reasons), and then has been extended as a term of disparagement to Instagram and tic-tok e-girls. From other women, and from so-cons or religious types who think e-girls are poisoning men's brains or something.

Alex2000

Don, firstly Megan was popular name for Gen X girls. But Gen Z? I dont think so. So maybe change name. I picture Megan I picture a 50 year old. Like anyone named Ethel is a 100-year-old white lady, or Chinese (who like to take old Victorian names for some reason.

Alex2000

This going to be in a New Verse? Because it would be nice to come up with a new gimmick on how girls get their powers. You could go the Japanese anime/manga route, and have a divine spirt gift them powers. or the sort of leader is more successful, but is actually a crazy inventor, and comes up with powers. Or maybe the divine spirit ties their power to their Instagram and tick toc likes or something. like an evil spirit.

Alex2000

Have you seen American Gods or read the book it is based on? In that show/book you have the olds gods with very low "power" sort of battling with the new gods (I.e. the god of social media). It is a take on the classical age or bronze age where you would have the smaller local gods of fertility or traveling or what have you.

Alex2000

I think generally you currently have your heroines being born into it (Amazon (or equivalent) bloodline, but then enhanced with a belt or magic jewelry (that seem to get produced almost as needed as the plot demands. They have a factory in China or something?). ---sidenote: Are the FEM fighters an exception to this? I can quite remember without looking, but I remember Tomboy getting her belt and then getting powered up. But she was kicking ass before she got the belt, so maybe it was hinted that she had Amazon DNA in her past or something. ---- At any rate, the way they get their powers ought to change. Or could even toned down or eliminated. Like "The Punisher" was just a Vietnam vet who went out for revenge (IIRC), Batman was just a dude with martial arts training and body armour. Black Widow (Natasha Romanova) started out as a femme fatale (AKA a sex machine with a killer after glow bite) with martial arts and weapons training. I am not an American comic expert, but I think your heroines mostly have powers that are a variation of Super girl. Like super strength and can fly. So maybe try and get away from that. I mentioned American Gods and their "old" and "new" gods because that might be an angle you can use. In Japanese Magical Girl manga/anime (ie Sailor Moon) it is a trope that a divine being or supernatural alien gives the magical girl her powers. 1) so a Punisher / Catwoman / TomBoy (pre-belt) vigilant route 2) some sort of divine sexy mana gimmick, where a gold (old or new) gives some narrow magical powers. A mash up of American Gods, Japanese Magical Girl manga/anime, and maybe your shelved Elfmaiden story. Mana gimmick could involve e-thot likes or vibes or something. The stairs of men generating erotic mana to power their spells. 3) some slight sci fi element or cyberpunk element. Maybe alien tech is found. It is limited, the girls dont know how to use it, and they are over their heads, but push through regardless. 4) I dont think these ideas would work together. Either they are all pre-fem-belt vigilanties, or divenly blessed, or the group finds a hidden chache of high tech cyber gear. I wouldn't make them rich either. The conflit between their 3 selves has to be a part of it. i) You have their superhero image that they try to maintain (with mixed success). ii) You have their e-thot / e-girl image that they are trying to project to the world. one of success and a happy go lucky lifestyle. iii) you have their real situation with their real day to day grind of making money, the scamble to make rent, deal with their landlords, parents or dumb boss in lame jobs. the real glamour of i). The fake glamour of ii). the reality of iii). And how all 3 could intersect in sexy ways. Just dont recycle a gimmick or setup you have already used up. p.s. Machimaho: I Messed Up and Made the Wrong Person Into a Magical Girl! is a freaking hilarious must-read manga parody of the Japanese Magical girl genre. It is maybe a step below an R rating. It is on Amazon Kindle. at least check out the free preview chapter on Amazon kindle. It will give you the vibe, and is a coles notes version of a step for a lot of these Japanese Magical Girl shows. It is funny as hell with lots of fan service. I will link to it in a follow up reply to this.

Alex2000

Here is a link to the offical English translation of volume 1 of the manga. At least check out the free preview. Take a look at the cover. Her outfit. It itself is a parody of Magica Girl outfits, which tend to be somehow sexualized despite being not exactly intentional. Like 25 years ago, I remember a bunch of older dudes being into Sailor moon and I was like wtf. This manga maybe delivers directly what it is that they were "seeing" (in the minds eye) or what they were actually looking for. https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07J25171K?ref_=dbs_m_cmx_rwt_calw_tkin_0&storeType=ebooks