Pages 288-292 edited! (Patreon)

Hey gang! Bit of an odd update for you today. Basically, I've heavily edited and re-drawn several panels in the bedroom kiss scene.

It's not that the original pages were bad - I just wasn't 100% happy with them, and I want the kiss scenes to be absolutely perfect. I drew these pages very quickly before I went on holiday, and when I got back, I could spot a lot of things I wasn't fully happy with. SO I decided to just go ahead and re-draw a lot of it!

The format and what happens is exactly the same, I've just re-drawn a few panels and tweaked a few others (notably - page 291 is completely re-drawn). I feel like the flow is a LOT better now, the kiss just generally looks a bit more passionate (in my opinion, anyway!), and the scene feels more intimate. Kisses are just so darn hard to draw!

If you're interested to see the new panels, I've attached the new pages here as a PDF! The original pages will still be visible on the 'full comic tier' tag :)

As you probably know, now that I've finished the mini-comic, I'm gonna be focusing on Chapter 1 re-draws. But I still want to keep drawing new pages for you here and there! So look forward to those :D

P.S. HI TO ALL MY NEW $5 PEEPS! Welcome to the Patreon family! I really hope you've enjoyed catching up on the comic and are looking forward to seeing new pages very soon! :D