Some Chapter 2 re-draws, part 2! (Patreon)

Hey gang! Just dropping in to show you some more re-draws. As I get towards the end of chapter 2 (less than 50 pages to go now!!) there's a LOT less that actually needs to be done. Here's four pages that I've changed the most since the last time I posted re-drawn pages! As you can see, hardly anything has changed. Most of the chapter 2 pages just need a little bit of tidying and the text re-writing. (These are best viewed on a laptop screen I think)

This one (below) was bugging me SO MUCH. WHY WERE NICK'S UPPER ARMS SO LONG. WHY WAS CHARLIE SO SHORT IN THAT LAST PANEL.

This one (below) I thought Charlie's face just seemed too angular and his eyes were too small. Plus I was still getting the hang of drawing his new hair at this point :)

And this one (below) I just didn't feel like the right emotion came across in that first panel. Plus Nick needed a bit of re-drawing.

That's it for now! I'm up to page 217. NOT LONG TO GO!!!