Evil Inc After Dark #14, Page 12 (Patreon)

One of the most challenging aspects of NSFW comics is the sound effects. Reviewing my early work, I noticed that the lack of onomatopoeia held some of the smutty scenes back from their full potential.

But... it's hard to stay fresh! Take the skin-on-skin sound effect. There's WHUP and variations of SMACK and POP, but then the list falls off precipitously. I've tried to broaded the range of wet/sliding sound effects by adding SWIPP to the slippery SQUITCH. (But I'm still not sure how I feel about it.) Most problematic among these is the ejaculation — which is silent (aside from vocalizations). I've taken to using a description of the action — SPURT — to give the scene an extra charge.

But, I may have had a rare moment of ingenuity in today's debut sound effect. I wanted our tentacled friend to lovingly pay the space wench's* round, firm breasts. And it needed some audio erotica. But what?!

THUB

The exact sound you get by firmly smacking a ripe watermelon.

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* I've chosen a name based on your suggestions, but I'm not revealing it yet.