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Hie there, sorry for taking so long with this request iwiu here are some sketches, since I don't really have anyone who guides me this time I'm accepting tips and suggestions for this request cxPls take in mind that I can't: change the poses, add more frames, change the backgroundI can: adjust Nani's proportions, add/change dialogues, add some details to the background (I think it needs more people around in the last frame to make it more embarrassing lol)But let me know what you think cx

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Sky High Prod.

Personally I think she’d look cute with a little bit of a bush

Oz_The_Freak

btw, the main version will have Nani wearing that green oufit she wears when she's working as a waitress at the Luau but I also want to make a classical coconut bra and grass skirt version >:3

Geothermal Maker

I love these cameos. I especially love the dialog of it being "part of the show". Keep up the great work 👍 💚

Andre

This is just a personal preference but I think the third page can do with removing Nani’s fingers from between her legs in the uncensored version and instead adding her pussy from behind, and making her butt cheeks bigger, if that’s something so you could do that would be great. But other than that I think the drawing looks great.

Westy

Maybe you could give Lilo a cameo?

Oz_The_Freak

I'll try to add her into the bg for frame 3

Westy

Maybe Chasing after Stitch?