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I've been turning over this idea. I have bonus scenes at the end of my Crime Lord & Possessing Violet Series (for CI at least) and I never did bonus scenes for Singed. What scene from each book could I give a sneak peek of from Roth's POV? Of course, it can't be too revealing or at a moment where his inner monologue would give away big secrets or anything like that. Maybe a more subtle moment where you wondered what his POV was? 

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D

Omg omg I love this!! Maybe his inner monologue at the end of book 3 when Jasmine is like racing down to the car and hits her head on the window etc and he’s pure confusion..but idk maybe that’s too revealing….or perhaps when she comes down to the gym with him and talks to that German? Guy

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Bitter Heat: When Jasmine is crying and he tells her always had her.

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Bitter Secrets: when she’s ignoring him after she realizes he was playing her in Portugal

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Bitter Confessions: When he starts freezing her out

Saz

Wow, this is amazing! I would say when he sees her in Portugal with Johnny and flips out, the first time they sleep together in CO, or when she shows up at his office. Truly, any scene will do, I'd just love to see inside this man's head!

Melissa

Bitter Confessions, when jasmine fell asleep on top of Roth after caressing and leaving kisses on his shoulders and his fist were clenched.

Erica

Seconded!! Would be great to see his POV in the last scene

Gabby

agree with everyone elses suggestions and wanted to add my own. bitter heat: his reaction to their wedding day/seeing jasmine in her wedding dress, his thoughts when jasmine doesn’t sign the prenup initially, when he tells jasmine he got a vasectomy during their first marriage. bitter secrets: anything from portugal or when she meets grayson. bitter confessions: when he goes cold after the office sex scene when jasmine asks what he’s into, what roth thinks during the time jasmine is dancing with trentham, when he learns that ford’s brother hurt her or anything from the scene after they leave the ball, his reaction to her dress for the ball, when he sees that jasmine threw her mother’s ring at the end of BC. ugh SO many

D

wait yes this is the one!! that clenched fist:(((

Natalie

Yess to all of these!!

Ju

I would like to hear Roth's thoughts while he's reading Jasmine's books.

Ju

That scene in BC when she came by his office after having sex she was in his office bathroom she asked him if he would have someone watch them and he pulled away. What is he thinking...

Mia Knight

I'm trying to keep it to scenes that are in the actual books, but I would prob include something like this in his book 🫶

Mia Knight

I knew you were going to say this...

Mia Knight

I think I will prob do this one. It would prob be one heck of a long bonus scene, but I think showing this from his POV would be really eye opening... 👀

Mia Knight

This is personally one of my favorite scenes, but I think his inner monologue is much too revealing... 👀 But this is a big moment. Will prob include in his book 🤞🏼

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Probably one of their best scenes ever

Ju

Finally something worked!!! It's been yrs of trying to get a little crumb! I'll take it 😌😁.

D

omgg yayy!!

Mia Knight

Then you'll be happy to know that...

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😁

Mary

- when Jas first moves into his NYC penthouse and she is doing the whole morose princess in the tower thing and he is watching her on camera the whole time - when Roth brings Jas back to London, she freaks out - from when he picks up the phone to when he returns to atone for his leaving her years ago (“I’ve never left a meeting before”) - also obvs when he leaves her in London the first time and comes back only to find she is gone - At the Davis’ having dinner and watching Jas play with the baby - omg PORTUGAL ALL OF IT 😭 but especially the castle, the sunset, and the dinner - after the Sullivan party - from when she shows up distraught post warren onwards - but especially when he is snooping on her and Colette’s convo and then in the car when the energy goes “haywire”

Mary

I am also remembering how much I especially loved book 2

P

I want to see his reaction to when Jasmine hangs up the phone on him 😭

Jaclyn

Ugh I’m late to the party! The gym scene when she surprises him Or when they fight about her endangering herself by running in to traffic TO have HER HUSBAND Comfort her only to find out he was in la (emphasis on her calling him her husband)