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Chapter 2 (Patreon)

Published:
2023-08-03 23:44:33
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2026-06
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This chapter is almost the length of a novella. 🙄 Editing what I wrote in 2021 and adding new stuff. They talk throughout the whole chapter. It's an insane amount of dialogue. IDK if I'm going to keep it all, but for the first draft I'll just put it all in and hopefully scale back during rewrites. Slow going, but it'll be worth it in the end!


He got off on twisting her into knots, on her mental anguish. He pushed and shoved her to the breaking point and when she broke, he comforted her. He was sick. She wasn’t okay. She wasn’t even close to okay and she wasn’t sure how much of this she could stand. 

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Linds b

I think the more the better 🤣

Mia Knight

Lmao. I'm honestly scared this book may exceed the paperback limitations, but I'm trying not to think about that as I write the first draft. I'm letting myself be as wordy as I want the first time around and will see if it needs to be scaled back later...

Linds b

That’s fair. Are you going to release a first draft like you did for the 2nd book do you think?

Mia Knight

I don't think I can because the other one was leaked. It would be an extremely small pool, not even a dozen people.

Linds b

Ohhh okay, I also didn’t know they had paperback limitations. It’ll turn out good, good luck!

Mia Knight

It’ll be a long time before I get to paperbacks but the word count is honestly scaring me a little 😫

Linds b

Maybe do part 1 and 2?

Niki

Hi Mia, Are you planning to publish uncut draft here like you did for BS

Mia Knight

No, I can only show snippets since the last raw draft was leaked by a patron.

Niki

Means after you publish BC.I am so intrigued to see all the dialogues in different versions between these 2

Mia Knight

I'm going to have to remember to save the raw. I usually don't because it's not complete since it's a draft, but I'll try to set that aside if people want it later. Even from what I wrote in 2021 until now, I'm doing a major overhaul. Soooo many versions...

Mia Knight

LOL. This is part 2. The series was originally supposed to be a trilogy and I had to make it into a quartet because BS was so long. Omg. I'm just gonna ignore my word count and just get through it and see what happens 😎

Maddy

Oo I think this is what jasmine is thinking the morning after book 2 ended