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I still have a bit more to do on the opening chapter. The dialogue bogged me down big time, but we're blasting through and will come back and clean and refine later during rewrites. The ups and downs in this long ass scene tires me out, but will definitely be worth it in the end! 

They talk quite a bit about the past and Maximus in this opening scene since he played such a huge part in their relationship the first time. 

“Which one of them was supposed to replace me?”

She blinked. “Replace you?“ 

A muscle ticked under his eye. “Don’t play dumb.”

“About what?” 

“Maximus said you had someone waiting in the wings to replace me, someone of your own class who made the grade. I assume you had a falling out, which is why you never remarried. Who was he, Jasmine?” 

She tried to process his words through a haze of static. “When… when did Dad say that?”

“Four years ago, when he showed up here in the middle of the night and blackmailed me.” 

**This is an unpublished draft of Mia's work. Please do not share or distribute. 

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Linds b

Omgggg I’m so friggen excited

a.

I love him so much 😭🩵

tala

oh my god this book is going to ruin my life

SG

he is not coming to play this time around 😩😩 imagining what hes going to do to the one who was his replacement

Ari

poor baby really thought he was going to be replaced 💔

Amira

I love jealous Roth 😭

Ari

I’m trying to wrap my head around the timeline. They were married for 2 years. Separated the 3rd year and the other 4 years they were divorced. So 4 years ago was when they separated. And Jasmine mentioned letting herself go (in terms of just sleeping with men… I think?) and so their separation year she was most likely with men. I just don’t think (I hope tf not) there was a man who she was with that was a replacement or a poor imitation of one. I just think since Maximus probably knew she was sleeping around in that year (since he always keeps an eye on her somehow), he was playing up the fact that he’s been replaced. Even tho in reality he hasn’t been replaced. This is all just my delusions trying to piece together all the clues. Don’t mind me lol

Ari

Maybe maximus even used a picture of Jasmine with one of the men to convince roth that she threw him aside. And for all we know maybe one of the men she slept with was a man from her fathers world but it was meaningless and she hooked up with him in terms of that. But maximus had picture evidence or whatever and used that to put roth down even more. This is assuming that maximus knew about her sleeping around and assuming she slept around in between separation and divorce.

Gopika

Yeah I agree, I doubt jas had another man interms of “replacement”. She slept around and had her fun but she’s referenced multiple times that she couldn’t recall a name or face or how none of them matched up to Roth. I feel like Maximus just gaslighted Roth😂 made it seem like there was another serious man in her life just to rile Roth up. Also I don’t think there was picture evidence that Maximus showed coz Roth is clearly asking which one of them was his replacement because he doesn’t know and he’s not one to forget faces when jasmine is concerned😏

Gopika

OMG! Idk if Im going overboard with all the thinking but what if Roth is gathering all of Maximus’s contacts/ jasmine’s childhood friends because he thinks that the “replacement” is one of them coz he said Maximus implied that he’s of the same class as them and made the grade. So basically, he wants to be able to have control over all of them because when he finds out who it is, he can make sure they can never get her/ destroy them/ blackmail them/ be a pain in their ass or something of that sort.

Ari

That’s so true about maximus not showing roth pictures of Jasmine with that man. But I also wonder if roth was insecure enough to believe maximus without proof. Because that’s so sad :( poor baby

Gopika

Yeah I think Roth was insecure enough to believe that. Plus we don’t know by then if he read her books or not and found out about her sexcapades. Maybe he didn’t believe it then but he definitely believes it in the present time because he’s asking her😂 what a cutu. I love jealous possessive Roth.

M

omfg Maximus that bitch playing Roth like a fiddle and hitting all his weak spots!!