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Yesterday was a great writing day! Dialogue was flowing, their chemistry was electric. Roth gave me some awesome quotes! 🥵😍 I had to do some research to fill in some plot things involving Rami and Ariana. 💣💰🔫 Happy that’s finally sorted!

“Are you listening to me?” Her sharp tone was ruined by a hiccup. “I’m breaking our agreement. Sue me. I don’t fucking care. I’m done!

“I hear you,” he said as he sat on the couch and arranged her sideways on his lap.

“Then you have to—“

He captured her chin before he growled, “I’ve told you before, you’re in too fucking deep. You’re riding this out with me.”

**This is a raw draft of Bitter Confessions. Please do not share or distribute.

Something that jammed me up for a while was Roth was pressing so hard, that Jasmine reached this point. 👆That was never supposed to happen. I never anticipated in the whole book that she would ever throw in the towel like this, but Roth pushed so fucking hard that she snapped and I didn't know where to go from there. Roth revealed stuff that shouldn't have come out until book 4, when they had more time and understanding under their belt. But, of course, he had to rush it and ruin all my carefully laid plans. I tossed out maybe three different aftermaths. This is part of the fourth. My favorite and the only one that fits at the moment. I don't know if it was me that was in a good mood or Roth, but it all flowed beautifully today and I made a ton of progress! Yahoo.

I’m going to be working on a 💍 scene. The OG patrons got a glimpse of that scene years ago and I suspect it needs a refresher. Have a great weekend everyone!! I’m hoping I make it to the beach 🏝️ at some point.

Comments

a.

Sue me 😭😭😭 she’s so princess

Ari

Riding it out not for one year but until death do them part Fr 🙏

Gopika

I love how they’re talking stuff out and Roth is finally moving past his mind games and just blurting stuff out. I hope they get lovey dovey, just like how jasmine wanted it the first time around. Also I highkey want a jasmine jealous scene, where she kinda shows her rights over roth and it makes him sooo freaking pleased that it’s so goddamn cuteee.

Gopika

Wait, what’s this 💍 scene?!??

SG

omggg 😭😭😭 yes!!!

Ari

The way she’s always like “let another woman take him I don’t want to deal with him” but like deep down we know miss Jasmine would be seething if she saw any woman near Roth

Danni Ariel

Would die for a jasmine jealous scene 😫😫

SG

and jasmine taking care of a sick roth too😭

Gopika

I swearrr Ari, remember in the BC excerpt, that woman in red and how jas had an entire inner monologue. She was soooo jealous, I love it.

Gopika

Omg yesss shanzay, I literally thought of this yesterdayyy. I soooo badly want this scene but I just can’t predict how Roth is gonna act, is he gonna be a big baby or like go to work and act indestructible. I just want him to act like a baby just for jas’s attention😍. I just kept thinking back to jas buying him clothes, beanie and gloves and how compliant he was in being cared for.

SG

wait omg idk that scene 😭

SG

roth acting like a baby for jas’ attention 😭 thats what i desperately need in life

SG

him acting indestructible and jas forcing him to rest? Y E S .

Gopika

Read the BC excerpt, you can find it either on Mia’s blog where you sign up with your email and you’ll get it on your mail or you can find it at the end of book 2 in the acknowledgement section you’ll see a link.

SG

Ohh okay I remember nowww

Dee

Why am I picturing Jas drunk here with Roth caring for her and humoring her until she sobers up 🥹 Mia, I’m crying

Maddy

What does ring 💍 scene mean?