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“Roth?” He was feet away from the hallway when she snapped, “Jamie!”

He stopped.

“Is there anything I can do?” Her voice was hoarse with strain.

She willed him to turn around and face her. To come to her and kiss her. Instead, he stayed where he was. He kept his back to her as he said a firm and resolute, “No.”


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Can't give context for this scene, but it's a pivotal moment, a major shift in the story. Curious what you think is happening here...

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Dee

I’m not sure but I bet it’s Grayson’s fault

ray

I NEED THIS BOOK MORE THAN MY NEXT BREATH 😭😭😭

a.

Think this has something to do with her sisters

Gopika

Ooooo he’s shutting her out as alwayssss. After all that progress jas expects him to trust and confide ig but he’s off being emotionally distant Roth. My poor baby jas🥺

Gopika

😂😂😂😂😂

SG

The way he responds to Jamie 😭

Nila

just fell to my knees in a target my parents are going through it again

Priscilla

Omg.. the way she knew calling him jamie would get his attention..😭

M

At first I thought maybe Lyle found out his secret or Grayson did something and Jas was ready to go full mama bear… But now I am wondering if Jas did something that made Roth feel like he cant trust her 😭

Betsy Powers

The vasectomy failed. She's pregnant. He doesn't believe it's his, and she's trying to convince him. This is heartbreaking, because I love Roth, but I'm about to hate him. (See how one little blurb does that 🤣🤣)

AQ

I love this, we all literally think the same!! 😂♥️

Maddy

I second this!!

Maddy

Maybe he finally told her the secret and didn’t expect her reaction

persephone

is he mad at her after the bonus scene from bc 😔

Hortense Mitchell

Maybe his business just had a major loss, or she told him she is pregnant they argue, he is walking away upset, he fell betrayed 😔😭😭😭

tala

I’m obsessed with the way he’ll always stop when she says jamie because it’s the nickname she picked for him

Mia Knight

🤣 Lmao. I love hearing what everyone can get out of a few lines. Fascinating

Betsy Powers

We're all psychos, and we love your characters! I'm already planning on taking several days off to read and reread BC when it's released! 🤣

Mia Knight

🫶 Aww makes me feel so special 🥰

RD

Seems like something related to his mother came out bcoz of her sisters. I always got the feeling the big secret has something to do with his dad's death and roth was trying to protect his mother

Betsy Powers

You are. I don't do this for other authors. Your characters are amazing.

Maddy

I will literally be psychotic when I read this. If it comes out in Feb I’ll be a few weeks postpartum 🤣 and off my rocker. I’m predicting at least 4 meltdowns and a lot of screaming.

Betsy Powers

Mia is our drug dealer, 💯

AQ

After reading the latest snippet I think this might be a moment from when they return home after the ball.

SM MS

Roth wants to be small bean but he doesn't know yet

Naya Sanson

Why do I feel like kaia dies