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Context: Still at Trentham Ball. Roth puts her in the library to get her out of the way because there was another incident (not Tucker Baldwin, someone else). He’s finishing up business in the ballroom and she’s ambushed by Warren who we met in Bitter Secrets the night Roth & Jasmine met.

Although Warren wore a tailored suit, it was wrinkled and hung oddly on his pudgy frame. The years hadn’t been kind to her father’s former business partner. He had one patch of hair left on his otherwise bald head. Grayish, unhealthy skin, and was clearly very out of shape. She’d seen him briefly at the funeral, but thankfully hadn’t had to deal with his withering tongue since there were so many other guests to see to.

“Uncle Warren.”

He glared at her. “How many times have I told you not to call me that?”

As many times as she could. When she was younger, she made the mistake of thinking that the men her father was always with were somehow related to her. Her father disabused her of that notion, but she continued to use the label for Warren in a bid to irritate and dissuade him from speaking to her, which he continued to do anyway.

“What brings you here?” she asked, though she suspected she already knew. Warren wouldn’t have hobbled down that long corridor without knowing she was in here. She spotted him sitting on the sidelines an hour ago.

“Never thought I’d see you at the Trentham Ball,” he said snidely.

“Me either,” she agreed, refusing to rise to the bait. Warren’s mission in life was to reduce everyone’s confidence to zero. That had been Dad’s aim when she was younger as well, but she had persevered. While biting, she knew she could endure anything Warren wanted to toss at her.

“Maximus must be rolling in his grave tonight.”

She gave him doe eyes and fluttered her eyelashes. “You don’t think he’d be proud of me for getting an invitation or dancing with Sullivan Trentham?”

Warren’s lip curled. “Trentham’s standards aren’t what they used to be.”

“Yet you’re here.”

He glared at her through the watery, bloodshot eyes of a St. Bernard. “Still bold as brass. Maximus would be ashamed of you.”

“So you said.” She faked a yawn and cocked her hip as she eyed the door that Warren had left ajar. She willed Roth, or anyone, to walk in and interrupt what promised to be a nasty confrontation she wasn’t in the mood for.

“He came into money.”

She looked back at Warren to see he was eyeing her wedding ring and the other jewelry with contempt.

“He didn’t come into money. He earned it.”

“He has no pedigree, but money has a way of making others overlook such details.” He managed to look down his nose at her, even though he was shorter. “But not for me or your father.”

“My father’s dead,” she said flatly. If he wanted to guilt her for being with Roth, he was several months too late. “I don’t live by his rules.”

“Rumor is he left you everything. Can’t think of one reason why he’d do such a thing. What could you do with all that money, but squander it? Maximus did his best to mold you into something, but you ended up right where you started. You never learned from your mistakes. All those tutors, the best schools… all for nothing.”

Although she was sure her expression was composed, his mouth curved in a malicious smile as if he knew her stomach iced over.

“Sold yourself to save your sisters from the hole they got themselves in?” He let out a wheezing laugh. “That’s the least you could do, I guess. The shock is that Roth would want you when he can have his pick of any woman here. I’d get a younger model, one that can still have kids, but then again, he isn’t going to keep you, is he?”

He was too busy thinking about his next insult to realize he’d actually hit her dead center for once.

“He’s ambitious. I’ll give him that. Boy knows what he’s doing. Some will do business with him, but not all. He needs an in, and that’s where you come in. Your marriage has forced a public union with Lyle and Rami and now that Trentham has publicly endorsed him, he’ll be unstoppable. He doesn’t have the finesse or polish required for these social settings, but you can smooth the way like you did tonight, handling introductions and filling in the gaps. All he requires is someone to set the foundation. It doesn’t matter who comes after you.”

He gave her an insulting perusal.

“Let me guess. He insisted on this dress?”

Her hand balled into a fist in the folds of her gown.

“He knows how to make an entrance. What better way to get everyone’s attention than to return on the arm of the woman who ruined him, divorced him, and whose father publicly reviled him? He wants attention and knows how to get it. What better revenge is there than humiliating you by capitalizing on your tattered reputation by dressing you like a slut, using Maximus’ reputation to establish himself, and then casting you aside later? Even I can appreciate the poetic justice in that.”

He paused, waiting for her to say something. When she didn’t, he cocked his head.

“No sassy comeback? Hit the nail on the head, didn’t I? Knew the boy was smart, didn’t know he was that cunning, but it’s the way of the world, isn’t it? Women think they can get away with everything.” He made a throwaway motion, showing that one of his gold rings looked like it was cutting off his circulation. “You’re all just fleeting distractions. Pawns.”

When she still didn’t speak, he narrowed his eyes on her face. His eyes moved down the length of her slowly, deliberately, staring at her in a way that would have made her get the hell out of here if it was any other man. But Warren had always been a creepy curmudgeon, and she couldn’t move. Her body stalled as she tried to compute Warren’s take on Roth’s motives. Punishing her had been her his initial goal when he remarried her. He said he changed his mind, but… Had he?

“You’re a carbon copy of her.”

Warren’s gruff tone forced her out of her reverie. The way he was looking at her made the hairs on her nape stand up. She shouldn’t take the bait. That’s what he wanted, but she couldn’t help herself. “Carbon copy of who?”

“Elena.”

She jerked. “You knew my mother?”

Crusty lips curled in a lecherous smile. “Inside and out.”

**This is a raw draft of Bitter Confessions. Please do not share or distribute.

We discuss Elena and her background quite a bit in this book. Jasmine was so young when her mother died, all she knows is what Maximus told her, which isn't much.

As for Warren... This scene is way more extensive than this, but it leads up to that snippet I showed at the end of Bitter Secrets. I changed it quite a bit because this isn't the exact sequence of events I had originally drafted.

As always, this is just a mock up and some things may change in the final! Thoughts? (I’m scared 😳 😬🫣🤣)

Comments

a.

Need him to stroke next

Umayyah

OK MIA I HAVE A THEORY THAT WARREN IS JASMINE’S REAL DAD LMAOOO

RD

Elena was pregnant with another man's baby when she met with accident. What if this creep was the father of that unborn baby and killed her bcz he's scared shitless of Maximus. My mind runs wild after every snippet

P

Mia you never fail at making us either love or hate Roth. Also, all Jasmine’s gotta do is push Warren hard enough. He’s old…and no one would bat an eye if an unsteady old man fell and…hit his head 👀

Hortense Mitchell

when she died she was pregnant, may be it was for Warren and not a worker as Maximus through

Hortense Mitchell

OMG ! my heart is breaking for Jas, she just can't catch a break

Nila

things are starting to make sense!! (warren is a loser)

Priscilla

My princess Jasmine get away from that crusty man 😔💔

Priscilla

Ugh I hate snobs but his take on Roth was very interesting. Could it be true.?!

Nila

is warren so hard on jasmine bc he liked her mom but lost her to maximus after he got her pregnant??? and now jasmine is just a constant reminder of what he lost or is he just a loser? guess we'll find out soon

P

Ooo this is interesting! I think the loser just wanted whatever Maximus had…he seems a little too obsessed with the man 👀

Nancy Nassradin

I hope everything warren has said about Roth is wrong 🥲

AQ

Thai is one of the most interesting snippets Mia. Especially as Warren has seemed to voice all the negative suspicions Jasmine has about Roth. I wonder if others also periceive Jasmine and Roths relationship in that light, or whether it’s just Warren being vile.

persephone

i stand corrected everyone is so mean to jasmine 😭😭😭

Artemisia

I hope Roth gives it back to Warren on behalf of Jasmine

Ges

Well damn

AQ

The wait until March/ release date will literally kill me 😭♥️

M

JASMINE NO BELIEVE IN ROTH 😭😭 (and also RIP warren - Roth wanted to kill Guy and Guy didnt make Jas cry so…) thats so interesting and thanks Mia for sharing this is what leads up to the BS snippet! Based on the references to the backstabbing I thought for sure it would involve the sisters/Lyle, but I didnt even think about the mom angle 💔

Mia Knight

That's the question! Warren's nasty enough to say it out loud, but she doesn't know how others are perceiving their arrangement so... mental torture.

Niki

What is it with everyone ganging up on Jasmine!! She can not have one single outing without making her feel like nothing. If what warren predicted about Roth is true and he is using jasmine only to be unstoppable and more ruthless, Jasmine will never forgive him second time.

Niki

I think Jasmine is still 30 years old. She can definitely have as many kids and she want !!!!!

Gopika

Me three😭

SM MS

I think this will give us a peak on how weak Maximus' trust was towards the people he "loved". I'm sure Warren made it impossible for Elena to enjoy her happiness, messing with Max's head, and Max showed he is a tiny whiny baby after all. It makes me wonder if Roth would be susceptible to believe Jasmine is cheating if someone close to him suggested it