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**Edited to take out major spoilers...

She kept her gaze lowered and watched shiny shoes, heels, and expensive fabrics whip out of their path as people hurried to get out of his way. Roth didn’t stop until a pair of Italian shoes faced off with them. She didn’t have to look up to know who they belonged to.

“Take her home,” Lyle ordered.

“That was the plan,” Roth said tersely.

She glanced up in time to see Lyle nod before he turned on his heel and led the way out of the ballroom. Conversations stalled as they passed. The outbreak of whispers made her stomach twist. So much for getting through the night without making a scene. When she and Roth stopped to collect their coats, Lyle slammed through the front door.

Roth brushed her fumbling hands aside and did up the buttons of her coat. “What happened?”

She didn’t answer him, but pulled away before he could slide the last two buttons home and shoved through the door. Security swung their attention from Colette and Lyle to Jasmine as she rushed down the steps.

“Careful,” Roth snapped behind her.

Colette stood at the curb with Lyle, who wore a scowl. Colette’s mask slipped, showing her relief as they approached.

“I couldn’t leave without knowing you were okay,” Colette said, extending her gloved hand to her.

Jasmine took it and squeezed. “I’m fine.”

“The fuck you are,” Lyle snapped, his breath coming out in a gust of white from the freezing temperature. “What the fuck happened?”

She and Colette stared at each other. She saw a flash of shame as Colette’s lashes came down to shield her eyes.

“Colette said you had a run in with Warren?”

She glanced at Colette, whose gaze was still lowered, and nodded. “Yeah.”

“And?” Lyle snapped impatiently.

She looked at Colette to see how she wanted to handle this, but her sister wasn’t giving her any cues.

Colette looked dignified and beautiful, but there was a fragility to her that made her wrap her arms around her. When Colette began to shake in delayed reaction, she tightened her grip on her waist to comfort her. Lyle and Roth wore identical, bewildered scowls. She buried her face in her sister’s fur coat.

“I’m going to rip Warren’s head off,” Lyle snarled and turned to go back in.

Colette swung around. “Don’t!”

But Roth already had a hold of Lyle’s arm. “We need to know what happened before you assault someone.”

“I don’t need to know.”

As Lyle went toe to toe with Roth, Jasmine tensed, wondering if Lyle’s temper would get the better of him and make him swing at Roth.

“Whatever he did was bad enough to have them racing to the bathroom so Minnie could puke, and had my wife yelling at the Ambassador’s wife to get the hell out, so they could have privacy.”

Colette tensed. “I didn’t say—”

“Marty stopped me when you sent me back in to find Min and Roth.” Lyle locked eyes on Jasmine. “What did he do, cara, that made you sick? Did he touch you or something?”

She sensed Roth’s sudden stillness and felt her stomach lurch with nerves. Beside her, Colette imitated the marble statue she’d seen in the library.

“No, he didn’t touch me,” she said, swallowing bile.

Lyle’s face was a wash of frustration and confusion. “Was it someone else, then? Someone—”

“Let it go,” Colette’s voice was cutting.

“Fuck that. Tell me now!”

She was going to step in to calm him down, but was interrupted by their Rolls-Royce’s pulling up to the curb, one behind the other. She released Colette only to have her sister cup her cheek and lean down to rest her forehead against hers. It was a gesture of shared pain and camaraderie. When her breath hitched, Colette’s thumb stroked her cheek.

“We’re okay,” Colette murmured.

She nodded.

Colette straightened and looked down at her with shimmering eyes. “I would have protected you from that knowledge if I could.”

As she took a step back, she bumped into Roth, who was standing close enough to hear every word.

Lyle glared at her over the roof of the car. “You’ll call me when you know?”

“Yeah,” Roth said and guided her into the back seat of their Rolls.

Roth didn’t waste any time rounding the car and dropping onto the seat beside her. “You want to tell me what the hell is going on?”

She stared straight ahead and said nothing. Lyle made things one hundred times worse by repeating what chatty Marty said. Couldn’t they leave the Ball without someone tattling on them? She closed her eyes and slumped back in her seat, utterly depleted. She heard the rumble of Roth’s voice, but it was distorted, as if she were underwater.

**This is a raw draft of Bitter Confessions. Please do not share or distribute.

This is pretty close to the original ending scene for the Trentham Ball I wrote in 2021 or whatever, with some little changes here and there. I had vague ideas of what would happen at the Ball, but it turned out better than I imagined with one scene leading into the next and leading me down a path that took me by surprise. So much happens in these chapters--meeting new characters that will shape the storyline, but also touching on old acquaintances we met in the last book and also circling back to the beginning of their affair and the Baldwin's and even Elena, Jasmine's mother.

Soooo satisfying to finally get past the Trentham Ball which is a whopping 26k words. There's so much I still want to add to it, but I'm leaving it as is with a ton of notes to add more details later during revisions.

What do you guys think happened? 👀🫣

Comments

Nila

Warren opened his big ass mouth a ruined everything!! Jasmine can never catch a break from anyone :(

miyah🪐

minnie😭😭😭😭i love lyle so much

Sara B

I’m on pins and needles to know what the hell happened!!? I ❤️ it all

miyah🪐

mia, idc what you do to ariana but don’t touch colettelyle pls

Priscilla

Wow In just this snippet my emotions were all over the place. Jasmine throwing up cuz of the after math of warrens words 😔 Collete being there for her saying she would have protected her, 😭. Lyle having to be held back by Roth was 😂 I legit had tears in my eyes. Poor Jasmine 😪🥺🙊💔❤️ I just wanna hold her. How much more can just take. 😭

AQ

You’re killing us Mia, I literally had to take a break mid snippet 😭♥️ This is amazing, Lyle was on fire! 👏

Priscilla

Omg yes after RothJas they are my favs

Priscilla

This was so good.

RD

OMG!!OMG!! WTH is happening!!! Did that creep hurt colette in the past?? He always had an unhealthy obsession with her. Always praising her achievements. I want lyle and roth to bury that creep alive. Aaahhh I can't wait for the book to come out

AQ

I wonder if Warren did something gross to Colette or Collete’s mum? 🤨

M

its so wild to see your brain at work because based on the snippet (and how it was worded in the original version), I thought maybe it was Lyle who had wrecked her emotionally and they had come face to face with him. I am loving this denouement to the scene (so much more intricate than I had expected - and this is without the benefit of reading the ball in full!) - loving the sister vibes, loving the daddy lyle x daddy roth vibes

Betsy Powers

Warren is a Dead Man Walking!!! Poor Jas. I have a feeling Warren SA'd her mom, but tried to make it sound consensual. Wasn't Elena pregnant when she died? If it was from rape, but Maximus didn't believe her, then her death is even more tragic 😭😭😭

tala

woahhhh there is a lot to unpack here!!!

tala

I definitely feel like warren revealed something about jasmine’s mum

a.

Thinking this too.

Nizz

Careful like be careful or like watch yourself? I need be careful 🤧🤧

Nizz

Okay so Warren fucked jasmines mom? 🤮🤮🤮 Why do I get the feel he did something with colette too

Betsy Powers

Just based on the way he's described, I can't see any beautiful woman like Elena or Collette being a willing participant... he's short, pudgy, crusty, bald, and vile. I'm guessing he drugged them.

P

I’m thinking that this might be a part of it too! Like, I don’t think Colette would be that upset if she heard Warren talking bad about Jasmine or her (ie. not being a good business woman or something). Definitely think he tried something in the past and she didn’t want anyone to find out. Also, I get the vibe that she doesn’t know what happened to Jasmine’s mom? Feel like she caught a different section of the conversation…

P

Alright Mia, you’ve made me like Colette a little more…butttt I’m still pissed at what they did to Jasmine for the other 29 years! 😆

Gopika

Atp I don’t even wanna guess what happened coz Im sure Mia’s gonna be like “PSYCH, not what y’all thought bwahahah” I was pretty sure she found out lyle’s secret and came face to face with him but like this sent everything in a whole other direction😂

Priscilla

We go Feral for these snippets and our imagination goes wild.

Mia Knight

It’s so fun seeing how everyone’s minds work and what they’re excited about

Mia Knight

I had to read back to when/why I put this word… I get it now 😁

Betsy Powers

Gonna sound kinda slutty here, but I'm just in it for the hot Roth sex 🤣 That's a lie... I'm in it for Jasmine, she's awesome!

Mia Knight

LMAO. We were talking about this at the meetup--that I don't think my books are all that sexy. I feel like they don't have that many sex scenes compared to others but I was corrected that there may not be a lot of sex scenes, but the length and detail makes up for it. LOL

SM MS

I absolutely agree on this one!! I think Jasmine's biggest sin in the eyes of his dad and stupid uncle warren is that she is too much like her mom.