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Inspirational pic for what I'm working on today. It's a super emotional scene with a heavy discussion after that I've been dreading and kind of avoiding because I haven't struck the right tone and words yet, but we'll get there. 

You guys! Last couple of chapters, I've been so tempted to put in Roth's POV, but putting it in would ruin everything. I've even considered doing Mo or Johan's POV just to get a different perspective on what's happening but they aren't around for the key moments, it's just her and Roth. Ugh. It would be so jarring to suddenly include his POV and during such a heightened scene, I wouldn't be able to just give a few lines of insight, I would go deep and I can't with him yet. (I know this makes no sense now, but you'll understand later.)

Sorry for my cryptic babbling... Maybe I can put just one or two lines... Ugh  

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angelina

oh I am ready to be wrecked

Nila

just ruin me mia i can take it i promise

Priscilla

Oh my goodness.. he's gonna be her anchor while she needs it 😭 cue the tears.

Mia Knight

I've been a wreck for days, bawling my eyes out. My family think I'm a nut job.

angelina

your feelings are so valid with writing this because I am already emotional waiting

Natalie

I am BEGGING you for even a tiny crumb of Roth's POV🧎‍♀️

a.

if these scenes are like any of the other times he’s comforted her 😞😞😞

Maddy

What about doing a small snippet pov from Sarai, Mo, Johan or Roth but posting it here instead of in the book? Hehe 🙊 then we can give feedback whether it might be too much and to stick to Jas POV

Maddy

I will say I’m interested to get a glimpse at what Mo or Johan think of Jas/Roth and the situation. Especially since reading the gym snippet. Imagine starting your day guarding a gym door at 4am and your boss and his wife are dry humping on a yoga mat? Like 🤨

Mia Knight

Lol. I think anything I post would be way too spoilery but that is a thought for future passages… As for Mo and Johan, I think they know how out of character Roth is acting and are overall happy and supportive. Their boss is happy, they’re happy. Makes their job easier.

Mia Knight

I wonder if I can just put a few lines that won’t give away everything… Gah, I so want to! Maybe I will…

M

🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊

M

You should tell your family that you are virtually surrounded by people who are anticipatorily bawling 😭😂

Mia Knight

LMAO. They don't read or write... Well, my mom crafts and my dad's a musician and has written his own songs but he isn't emotionally attached to anything the way I am with my books so they think it's just bizarre when I channel all this emotion into stuff. But thank God you guys understand!

Maddy

I make up so many plots in my head.. like Sarai getting with either Mo or Johan. Or one of them having a crush on Jasmine. Or Jasmine managing to evade them and goes to a cafe for alone time then Roth comes in all stoic and macho. *fans self*

Mia Knight

There are ENDLESS plots for this couple. It's insane!

Maddy

I have a statistics assignment I’m trying so hard to do right now. But all I can think of is RothJas. 🤣

isy roth-caruso-ward

i’m scared and excited and terrified and anxious and I NEED THEM

AQ

Please do Mia!! Or maybe just share it as a snippet for Patreons 🥹♥️

Gopika

I NEEEDDD roth’s pov, that man is like a damn vault. Just when you think you know his intentions or what he’s thinking, he does a solid 180. Mia, do you know why he does what he does every step of the way or do you figure it out as you write? Like do you have the whole reasoning behind whatever he’s done so far?

Mia Knight

The problem with his POV is everything he's thinking is a spoiler so it's hard to show anything

Mia Knight

I figure it out as I go. Chapter by chapter, his reactions are still a surprise to me. Sounds weird but I actually have to write out what's happening and try to figure out why he might be reacting that way. Sometimes I'll even have to go into his POV to figure it out. But yes, I know the reasoning behind what he's done thus far.

Gopika

Damnnn, I would love for Roth to talk in my ear🥵

Mia Knight

It's not as fun as it sounds. He's a lot of work and as complicated as he seems on the page.

Gopika

I’ll take it😂 However he comes, I’ll take it. Innuendo intended.